
In SerialBirth of an AntiHero Fantasy Sci-fi Action School Life Supernatural
AntiHero's FIRST REWRITE IN THE WORKS - thanks!! :]
EDIT 2/28/22 - sorry, health problems right now, but I will post after rewriting the first 80-90,000 words or so and start fresh from there! Expect the change to be uploaded before summer! So long as I can keep using my hands, that is~! ^_^ X]
This story will indeed get fleshed out as my vision improves for the better. But I feel the need to emphasize that a lot of parts are written in improvised comic book format as my primary writing style, and this first book is actually the entry point and starting novel for an entire very vast series I am in the works of developing. Many side characters here will eventually be main characters with there own stories; long or short. But this one particularly will be focused and centralized around Noel. Because of this, I do plan to leave the introduction for side characters as still having a special flow for readers to witness a tad of their background, so keep that in mind after my 'obviously many' rewrites from now and going into the future!
Sorry for the troubles! I will improve on my style and implementation of the story!(Although I DO plan to keep parts as 'play style' or rather, comic book style, since I find it easier for certain dialogue instances as well as the fact that the novel is inspired by that 'feeling' you get while reading comic books. But my style is still evolving, you were warned!)
Thank you!
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Noel Tyler Malierano. He's the youngest 'son' to receive approval from 'The Malierano Family': A Criminal Organization of hitmen and hitwomen that specialize in killing, even maintaining success within a vastly superpowered society. Noel finally manages to complete his training as the newest 'Elite' killer his family created...but, there's just one problem - He doesn't want to kill! Come along and delve into a society of conflicting morals through the eyes of a boy, desperately searching for a new path to follow. Can he even manage to free himself from his father's engrained teachings and ideals? Conversely, will killing prove a lot more difficult to ignore?
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--> Thank you very much for reading! It would be helpful for me if you all consider leaving me a comment or an inbox suggestion, a review or even a full rating wherever AND whenever you believe I need to improve on anything or if something I wrote irked you! I appreciate EVERYONE that comes to read my story, however I DO want to improve my work as a writer. I hope all of you who don't like my work will let me know somehow, so I can edit and IMPROVE my story as a whole! Thank you everyone for your time!
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JUST TO NOTE!! When a character has a cultural name like, say, a Japanese or Russian name, that is because that character IS Japanese or Russian! They don't have to be FULL of one ethnicity either - sometimes they will be mixed. This story mainly takes place on an artificial continent where all countries have sent over their respective talents, meaning characters of ALL cultures and ethnic backgrounds will show hints of that in their names. Please don't assume I'm just randomly naming characters names that don't match them.
And feel free to talk to me about whatever in my story troubles you - no matter how small!
I love to improve. ^-^ X]
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Just to note: Characters will slowly grow as time passes. Slow pace. THANKS for reading! Enjoy! :]
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Decided to post 2 chapters every Tuesday and Friday instead of taking a small break, but I MAY upload once in a while on different days, such as Sundays, in addition to those two. :]
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1. Chapter 1 - Tenth Birthday Mission Objective: Murder.
2. Chapter 2 - Results?
3. Chapter 3 - Learning about the "Family".
4. Chapter 4 - Uncle Durandez's Questioning!
5. Chapter 5 - Boman.
6. Chapter 6 - Noelle and Noel.
7. Chapter 7 - The Family cripple's first big mission & The man named Watts!
8. Chapter 8 - He won't kill
9. Chapter 9 - Doctor Armsman's loyalty
10. Chapter 10 - Smuggled 'Volunteers'
11. Chapter 11 - Welcome!
12. Chapter 12 - Fragment Bearer Part 1
13. Chapter 13 - Fragment Bearer Part 2
14. Chapter 14 - Fragment Bearer Part 3
15. Chapter 15 - Fragment Bearer Part 4
16. Chapter 16 - Fragment Bearer Part 5
17. Chapter 17 - Origin Baptism's After-Effects
18. Chapter 18 - I want to go to School! (End of Arc 1)
19. Chapter 19 - The fallen Star Family and the girl named Fate Part 1
20. Chapter 20 - The fallen Star Family and the girl named Fate Part 2
21. Chapter 21 - The Fallen Star Prince and the girl who Changed Fate.
22. Chapter 22 - Are you guys kidnappers?
23. Chapter 23 – She who doesn't deserve her freedom.
24. Chapter 24 - The Lonely trio
25. Chapter 25 - The Prince of Shades, and his fall from grace.
26. Chapter 26 - A Villainous Yearning.
27. Chapter 27 – The kick-boxer with a dream, and the one who dreams of revenge.
28. Chapter 28 – Unforgivable killer, Unforgivable conspirator.
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The Empty Valley Cries Unheard
The stories can be read at any order. Phew, this story was finally finished at last! What could I say, it was a hell of a ride when I wrote it from the beginning to end. Thanks for having me on RR :D All the current chapter had already done a run on Grammarly, so hopefully it'd be more readable. ...kinda feeling lazy so calling off the edits for now. A couple of old / new attempts of combining Horror, Comedy and Absurdist elements. I'm not very good at writing Horror stories but I'd like to try once in a while. Although the first chapter may be completely screwed up, believe me--I mostly write fluffy gay scenes between two girls. It would PROBABLY become a lot lighter as we moved up the chapter count. Not for the faint of heart, but if you're like me who like some absurd or nonsensical stories, this might be right up your alley. Sorry in advance if some of the chapters seem normal lol additional tags : nonsense / absurd / parody
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Useless Strength In The Modern World
Zhuge Lian, modern genius, just got rejected from all of his favourite dream colleges. Driven by depression and anger, he jumps from the balcony of his apartment in Guangzhou. However, as his nose hits the pavement, everything turns white. The Modern Strength System has arrived in his life, and after failing, Zhuge Lian will rise up once again! update schedule is 5-7/week 1k-2k word chapters
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Birthday
Treasure hunting Ersel steals an effigy she thinks might pay off her family's debts. Problem is, the effigy is alive, and he's a bit of a narcissist. (This is a story I wrote back in 2015. It is half finished, though I was planning on picking it up as I promised myself I'd finish it after I submitted another piece to a publisher, which I did.) ((Oh and skip the first chapter))
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Black and Blue
Two mirror images end up sharing more than just a face.
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The Tales of love- I
Love- a profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person is how most people describe it but it is much more than that. The stories filled with a new meaning of a simple word "love" with stories portraying the world with tears, joy, a new journey and the various moments of life to reach the end with someone who becomes the world to them. This book and it's short stories will explore the various meaning of love and how strong it can be. Disclaimer: this is not a regular fighting for love stories. These are filled with life struggles, pain and lessons. Be sure you are up for all of it. Thank you! *****Published date: August 2, 2019Ending of part one: November 1, 2020 The second part is available under the same name on my profile that is the continuation.
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My Prison Penpal
Apparently talking to prisoners is a tradition in the Caldwell house.
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