《Magic Apprentice》Chapter 7: Hero (1/5)
Advertisement
The world around Elric was the very picture of hell. The clouds above rumbled and poured lava from them. The air around him was an influx of fire and unstable mana. Elric could even see that the clouds were brimming with fire-infused mana.
He was completely disregarding the abnormality that was the landscape around him. It was almost as if he was already used to such a scene the way he stood there. But not a single tendril of fire could get within even ten paces of him or the knights. Some sort of fire wall was preventing the lava from getting close to them.
There was another explosion as a waterfall of lava began its flow over them.
Elric rolled the spear in his right hand, spinning the shaft around so that it was aimed at the skies. Then he threw it.
Like a bolt of lightning, the spear shot into the sky and pierced the clouds.
Bizarrely enough, the lava that was beginning to pour from the cloud immediately began to be sucked back up by it.
Something in the spear was reverting the clouds back to its original state. The lava that once poured from it was no longer in sight, the red glow was slowly dimming away from the sky, and the clouds were slowly turning back to their original and carefree shapes. All was looking peaceful almost except for the lava lake down below.
None of the knights expected any of that to happen. They didn’t realize something like that could even happen. But they all knew, instinctively, that the danger had yet to finish. Elric’s aura was giving off a dangerous feel to it any of them had yet to be able to explain.
They weren’t the only ones that felt this way. Up on top of Melkruth’s walls, Kebrilio could feel the same premonition.
Something, he sensed, had thrown an unbelievable amount of mana into his spell and completely disrupted the flow of fire. And now his spell was going out of control.
“Quickly, quickly now. Everyone must evacuate Melkruth.” Kebrilio ordered. Ignoring the stunned looks he was receiving, he began to send officers and magus alike to spread the evacuation order.
Advertisement
People were quick to heed Kebrilio’s warning. Every guard within Melkruth began to evacuate and move five kilometers away to the other side.
The princess and her fellow dignitaries were the next to follow. Confused as they were, they weren’t stupid enough to ignore his words.
The first to even ask what the matter was was the first magi to reawaken from casting Final Day.
“What happened? Why is our spell flowing this way?”
But no one knew how to respond to such a question.
One by one, the other magi were beginning to awaken. Each one of them repeating the same question as the last.
Of course, the only capable of answering the question was Kebrilio.
So Charle and Flania walked to where Kebrilio and the twelve magi were.
“If I may inquire, what in the world just happened?” She asked. So shocked was she still that her normal polite etiquette was nowhere to be seen.
But Kebrilio chose to ignore that. “Someone broke my spell and now the magic is growing out of control.”
It was an answer no one expected.
Everyone’s guess was that Kebrilio ran out of mana to fuel his spell, thus having the magic become unstable. A phenomena like that was oft-seen with higher-tiered spells. Out-of-control magic was often known to be reflected back onto its caster, so it wasn’t hard for most people to understand the need to evacuate from Melkruth.
But that wasn’t the case. Kebrilio didn’t run out of mana, someone managed to break it! A spell casted by an archmagister! Magical theory often said that any spell casted by one magus could be broken, but only by a spell of the same tier or stronger. This held true with forbidden magic too, and Kebrilio was the only practitioner of such magic! How likely was it that yet another practitioner was on scene to challenge him?
Discussion broke out amongst the magi gathered there for a brief moment before a tremble shot through the world. The steady ground of the valley began to tremble and shake while the clouds up in the sky suddenly splintered apart as if struck by an iron plow.
Advertisement
Then another loud boom as the giant fort behind them all suddenly collapsed.
Stone and rubble flew everywhere. Even from their far distance, some soldiers were still pelted with a smell stone or two.
Dust and smoke lingered in the air for a while before all became quiet.
Under Kebrilio’s command, the guards of the fort slowly returned to the pass where Melkruth once stood.
It was only there that the entire force could see the damage done to their fort. Not a single building was left intact. All that remained were the foundations of the fort with the rest of the materials scattered about as if a shockwave had carried them.
It was as if Melkruth had yet to have anything but its foundation erected. A fort that had yet to be finished building.
But the true sight came when they looked beyond the fort.
What once was a nice valley called Chizra was now home to mountains without any mountain tops. Flat at the same height, each mountain was entirely the same and the fragments of their tops were littered across the land between the mountains. And even more shocking to see was the line of knights walking out from behind the rubble!
Kebrilio immediately dispatched two paladins over.
Jack was the first knight to regain his consciousness. At first, the only thing he saw was a boulder the size of half his height. It was only after he staggered to his feet that he realized they were surrounded by rubble. Where were his comrades? He had to make sure they were alright. One by one, Jack made sure each of his knights woke up and were fine. Only Elric failed to respond to his waking calls.
The knights gathered around, fear lingering among their faces as they took in the sight. None of them could even believe still being alive after all that. They hadn’t even battled anyone today and yet they felt tired to the bone and sore all over.
Restored of enough energy after some rest, Jack ordered the knights to make their way out. There shouldn’t be anyone to stop them from crossing Chizra Valley now.
Multiple knights carefully held Elric between them, as if taking care of him was an honorable task to accomplish. Traveling across the rubble was an arduous task. The land was uneven due to all the rubble, and it expended a tremendous amount of energy for the knights to maneuver from stones both big and small.
That was when the knights saw two Karthian paladins approach. The superior of the two immediately performed a knight’s salute to Jack. As one who knew the honor of serving royals, the paladin had to extend his respect. Jack returned the salute.
“Sire knight, please allow us to escort you. Our premier magus, Kebrilio, invites you.” The paladin announced.
Jack knew the very moment Final Day was cast that the magus responsible was Kebrilio. He was the only magus in the world with enough knowledge and skill for that forbidden spell. Had he not been in such a situation, Jack would’ve been more than happy to meet Kebrilio. But what joy was there in meeting him compared to another magus even stronger than him, Elric.
He looked backed to his comrades, all of which seemed to share his opinion.
The paladin dismounted from his warhorse to bring to Jack.
“If you will,” He held the horse forward.
Unbeknownst to Jack, this paladin’s salute and the offering of his horse was a very symbolic gesture made only to Karthian heroes.
The second paladin spoke up from behind the first. “On the horse, if you please. Though we are from different nations, your survival against the odds has my deepest and heartfelt respect.”
“Our horses are yours.” A group of paladins dismounted from their horses to offer the knights.
Advertisement
- In Serial95 Chapters
Aced: A Slice of Life Tennis LitRPG
High school life isn't easy. It especially isn't easy when you're starting your freshman year at a brand-new school in a brand-new state. As such, Daniel Meadows was doing his best to get his bearings, and just fit in. That is, until he laid eyes on Sophia Hart. In that moment, he made a decision that would change his life forever. To win her over, he made the momentous decision to join the Tennis team, and take up a sport he'd never played before, to impress a girl he'd just met...As if this brilliant life choice wasn't questionable enough, he forgot to look both ways before crossing the street... A run in with an errant truck was inevitable, and now his life just got a little more complicated...how is Dan going to use his newfound powers, and can he reach his lofty (for a freshman I suppose...) goals of winning over Sophia's...heart? *This is a new web serial I am working on. I will be releasing a chapter a day for the next two weeks, and then pulling back my speed a little. To the moon!!!!! bwahaha*
8 758 - In Serial12 Chapters
Grimm Tales: A RWBY Story
Two years after losing everything, two sisters will try to rebuild the lives they one had, as well as mend the heartache left behind through their connection with the many strange cast of characters they meet, and the many strange story's they're caught up in. Grimm Tales is a RWBY fan fiction I wrote and illustrated from 2014 through 2016. Keep that in mind when experiencing the story and the art within it. Also keep in mind that this story is technically unfinished. I put this aside in October of 2016 after completing what you can call the "first season" of what was going to be a multipart series. Even though the entire story remains unfinished, things do end in a somewhat satisfactory manner.
8 100 - In Serial29 Chapters
PenDragon's PicToStory Challenge
Welcome to PicToStory, a weekly PenDragon challenge where you are pitted against fellow authors to see whose mind works the sharpest! Each week we will reveal a picture for you to base a short story around (5000 words max limit). You have the entire week to join (and you don't even have to be a member), while using the form supplied. Simply type your story somewhere, post your nickname and the link into the form, and you're done, it's that easy! Our panel of competent judges will review you on RRL standards regarding the familiar categories of Grammar, Style, Story, and Character, so make sure your work is the best it can be! The winners will be elected to the prestigious Council, which not only gives bragging rights and a pretty colour, but also has limited slots and access to a secret base with special permissions! Good luck and just remember: this is all about improving, not winning. If you don't win, you can ask the judges to give you constructive feedback to improve on your writing. After all, this group is meant for you! Submission form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1VJ5HvuAMQ0sYsmXd-dzlteBDA5XOIv3KBFZYK1AP1G8/edit?ts=589e65bd#responses A minimum of at least 6 entries is required for a competition to go into the judging phase. Communication is handled through our discord server, a join link is in here Anyone who reads this on RRL can enter, the picture for each week will be posted via both RRL and the Discord server. All stories must be submitted by Saturday, 12:00AM pacific time, you can edit and have them edited by anyone except for judges (they are stated in the PenDragon discord). Good luck! -Aucis Josh
8 126 - In Serial9 Chapters
For King and Kin: A Fox's Journey
Two fox-kin siblings set out to serve a human king, hoping to secure ties with the royals that had formed in times of war. Yet, much is demanded of them as their father's reputation precedes them. They find the King struggling to keep his vassals from breaking the terms of the armistice. With reports of smuggling increasing and the nation's strategic resources at stake, their father is sent to oversee the border. The king, fearing for his own children, hopes for six more months. Meanwhile, tavern brawls turn bloody as a cry spreads across the land, "Loyalty? Or bread!". What to expect: - cold steel weapons with magic- colonial-esque era- elements of strategy (including logistics)- powerful mages that can't block a crossbow bolt. Except for some earth mages.- realistic depictions of violence. I don't care to focus on it. - other races introduced eventually, if they fit. - Australian english, except when I slip. Not much slang though, I reckon.
8 128 - In Serial18 Chapters
[DISCONTINUED] the swingset -Tyrus
Cyrus Goodman and Tj Kippen. They were best friends. Well, what most people said. After Tj did the unthinkable, to Cyrus, they never really spoke anymore. Although Tj was hurting, he didn't bring himself to apologize. But when he did, it was unbelievable.
8 199 - In Serial200 Chapters
Meet the authors showcase edition volume #2 Est. 6/5/2020
Another edition of behind-the-scenes interviews, which are meant to provide readers with an insider look at the writer's creations of their favorite stories. So, please take a look and learn how these stories came to be.Looking for the stories promoted in these interviews? Check my profile for the meet the authors showcase reading lists.6/11/2020 accomplishments. #2 in meet the authors and #19 in showcase6/21/2020 accomplishments. #1 in Meet the Authors and #10 showcase10/25/2020 accomplishments #1 meettheauthors, #6 in showcase, 4 in responses and #20 in spotlight6/2/2021 reached 3K views3/31/22 reached 4K viewsHow do I get featured? - send me a private message and I'll provide the interview
8 165

