Nano Machine (Retranslated Version) Chapter 88
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Chapter 88
Chapter 88: The Six Sword (1)
Mun Ku, who was sitting down on a small rock, also became confused . It was understandable if it was just to look at the overall balance, but fixing every small detail was unlikely to happen from looking at everyone at once .
‘Should I watch too?’
She too had learned the Seven Demon Sword and read through the books tens of times that she now remembered it . Maybe she could also give a few pieces of advice .
“W-Why don’t we give it a try anyway?”
Hu Bong offered to try it with the other hesitant cadets . In Hu Bong’s experience, whatever Yeowun said never ended weirdly .
“Ready your sword!”
Yeowun shouted and all seventeen cadets prepared to perform the Seven Demon Sword .
‘Oh well . I guess he’ll change it to private lessons if it doesn’t work out . ’
Most of the cadets thought of the same thing . Yeowun ordered to Nano .
‘Nano, activate Augmented Reality . ’
Yeowun’s eyes then shook and he saw lines drawing various pieces of information about the seventeen cadets .
‘Nano, analyze all these seventeen people and see if there is any movement they’re getting wrong with the Seven Demon Sword . ’
[Understood . Activating multi-tutorial mode on seventeen entities . Target martial art: Seven Demon Sword . ]
With Nano’s voice, Yeowun then saw seventeen circles locking onto each of the students . Yeowun shouted, “Going from the first formation! First Sword!”
“First Sword!”
The cadets repeated the name of the formation and began to move . Wooden swords shot through the air as the seventeen cadets all swung their swords in unison .
‘Ah…’
Ku moaned silently . There were many cadets who were not doing it correctly . Actually, most of them were a mess besides the three cadets who were top-class warriors already . The cadets stopped in place after finishing the first formation . There was just too many things that needed fixing . Mun Ku tried to send a telepathic message to Yeowun on what she had seen for the few cadets that she had seen at least, but Yeowun spoke first .
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“We’re training, so I’ll call out numbers . First, 31st cadet . ”
“Yes, sir!”
“Your arm is weak when you start the First Sword, and that causes all connected movements to become weak as well . Be careful of that . ”
“Yes, sir!” The 31st cadet, Yuk Kinming, shouted back . This was only the start . Yeowun then went over to the other cadets . After going through few, Yeowun called out Hu Bong’s number .
“23rd cadet . ”
“Yes, sir!”
“Your sword drops when you move . On the third movement, you only use wrist when you step with your right . You need to use your waist, not only the wrist . ”
“Yes, sir! Thank you!”
Hu Bong answered excitedly at such detailed advice . Mun Ku was shocked . Hu Bong was one of the few cadets that she observed, and Yeowun had gotten everything correct .
‘Did he really see what every cadet did?’
Yeowun then went over to the other cadets . After the number of cadets receiving advice went over the count of ten, all the cadets were astonished .
‘Did he really see everyone? He wasn’t just saying it?’
The 22nd cadet, Kong Jino, just joined yesterday . He was dumbfounded and suspicious at the same time . However, the cadets who listened to their faults seemed to agree .
“22nd cadet . ”
“Y-yes!”
Jino frowned as he answered . He was a top-class warrior and he had the ability to do the Seven Demon Sword more perfectly than the other cadets, but he didn’t put in much effort in doing so . He was at the very back, so he thought Yeowun would not see him anyway .
‘Huh?’
Yeowun was glaring at him however . Surely Yeowun was angry at his laziness .
“You think I would not notice if you didn’t put in any effort?”
‘Ugh!’
“What was that slow, clumsy sword movement? Do you not want to do this?”
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Yeowun snapped and Jino flushed red from embarrassment . He couldn’t even find the right words to respond . He claimed that Yeowun would never know when the cadet next to him, Im Yuhan, told him to stop fooling around .
“I-I’m sorry . ”
“If you do that again, then you will be practicing the sword formations alone . ”
Jino then went down on his both knees .
“This will never happen again, Master . ”
This gave every cadet the chills . They thought to never do things without letting Yeowun know .
“Hmph . ”
Yeowun accepted Jino’s apology .
“You must act accordingly if you have the power . But you are second to being correct among everyone else here . Make sure you do it right next time . ”
‘Second? I’m only second?’
Who was first then? Yeowun then turned to the 11th cadet, Im Yuhan, with a satisfied voice .
“I have nothing much to say to you, 11th cadet . You were better than everyone here . ”
“Thank you, Master . ”
Jino frowned . Jino and Yuhan were always competing with each other, so Jino didn’t feel so good about losing . He then regretted for not doing it right .
After Yeowun met all seventeen cadets, they began to trust Yeowun on what he was doing .
“Okay, we’ll go with the first formation again . Remember what I told you and repeat slowly . ”
“Yes, sir!”
And the swords began to move again . Not everything was fixed at once, but all the movements had gotten much better now .
“Wow,” Ku gasped in astonishment . This proved that Yeowun was not only a good fighter, but he was also a good teacher .
‘He’s really amazing . ’
Of course, all this was due to Nano’s ability . Yeowun’s eyes saw the analysis notes that Nano placed over all the cadets . Without this knowledge however, it only made Mun Ku more surprised .
After going through the first movement again, Yeowun pointed out their mistakes and had them go over remaining seven formations to fix it . It seemed like it wouldn’t take too long to learn the Seven Demon Sword at this rate . There were some who were falling behind like Hu Bong, Jin Guuk, and Machil, but they put more effort which was fortunate .
“We’ll train until dinner!”
“Yes, sir!”
And ten days had passed after the training started . It took a bit more time for everyone to perfect all the Seven Demon Sword formations . Even if Yeowun put in all the effort he could, it still took time for most of the cadets to learn, especially those who weren’t from high-ranked clans . The last, or the Seventh Sword, was especially hard for most cadets . Part of it was due to Ohjong joining the team late, after he spent five days in the medical room . At least it was fortunate that Ojong was talented enough to catch up quickly .
And the groups who scattered to train on their own, gathered in one place .
“…I lost . Hmph . ”
Bakgi spoke and turned away . Ko Wanghur burst out into laughter for winning his bet .
“Hahaha! So, you accept your loss! Good!”
The winner who taught his teammates to learn the sword skill faster was Wanghur . He took a total of seven days to train his teammates . Gallen also only needed nine days whereas Bakgi took ten days .
“How did you manage to teach them in seven days?”
Bakgi too realized that it took more time to teach cadets who weren’t that experienced in martial arts . However, Wanghur had managed to do it, making Bakgi curious .
“Hahaha! There’s not much . You just have to ram it in until you learn it . ”
“…Ram it in?”
Wanghur then looked back at his teammates and grinned while all of his cadets flinched and shuddered in fear .
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