The Abandoned Hunter Chapter 11
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"Uhh... Where... Where am I?"
This was the first thing that Jay asked as soon as he regained his consciousness.
He opened his eyes slowly to only find an unfamiliar ceiling. However, for some reason it was familiar to him too.
Of course he had visited this place more than 30 times already. It was a hospital after all.
But this time something was different. Even though he was admitted, he was unusually feeling well. It was as if his body was overflowing with power.
"This... how can this be possible?"
He suddenly asked a question after being surprised by seeing his stomach and abdominal regions carefully.
"Abs...? How... wasn't I weak... like a shrimp?"
He had 6 pack abs with well built body. All his muscles were perfectly working and in smooth synchronized manner.
It was as if his muscles had their own mind.
His height was increased and his weight too. His face had a much more manly curves with smooth textures.
"This feeling... it's extraordinary... is this a dream?"
He couldn't believe what he was seeing and touching. So the only possible conclusion that came to his mind was that this could be a dream. So he tried pinching himself or slapping himself, and after doing that he confirmed that it was reality!
"Hehe... Hahahaha! Unbelievable... The Black Dragon... you are simply unbelievable..."
Jay couldn't control his laughter as he had confirmed this to be reality.
And his sinister laugh was audible to the doctors who were on their way to do a final test on Jay.
Jay quickly noticed that the doctors were about to enter, and faked sleeping.
"That's weird, I can swear that I heard laughing voice from this room... was is just my imagination?"
Dr. Chu, one of the greatest doctors of the hospital, said this almost immediately after looking at Jay lying in bed.
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"Never mind that doctor, please hurry up and conduct the last test!"
A strange man with a hoody cap and extravagantly rich clothes calling himself Guro Dim said this.
"You seem to be impatient Mr. Dim..."
"That's to be expected! This boy was just a shrimp, but after that raid, he suddenly become Mr. Perfect, I want to confirm if he has awakened or not!"
Dim said this with a sly smile.
"Haha... so that's the case..."
Dr. Chu slowly pulls Jay Down's left arm and places it on a machine. And then wraps his right hand with some weird clothing and puts it on another device.
"Dr...Dr. Chu..!? What are you doing?"
Guro suddenly asked out if curiosity since this was something that he was seeing for the first time.
"What? You wanted me to test his inner power right? To see whether he has awakened or not?"
Dr. Chu gave out an angry expression as he was already annoyed after hearing all the rubbish talks while they were on way.
"Yes but... why are you using both of his hands?"
"Well, how to say... this is a new device... before when we used to check initially we could only check if they were awakened or not, but now, we can even check the power that they have attained!"
"Oh!? That's amazing!! Okay, so how much longer will it take?"
"It's almost done, 2 minutes more"
AFTER 2 MINUTES...
"Hmm... well... how to say this..."
Dr. Chu was scratching his hair and was having a sad expression.
"What happened?"
Guro Dim asked suddenly with haste.
"I'm sorry, but I have to disappoint you... he is neither awakened nor as any significant powers. His only ability is to heal..."
"Sigh... it was a waste of time then for me to come here... but at least he would be a great help if he can heal others..."
"I'm afraid I have to disappoint you again Mr. Dim..."
"Huh!? What do you mean?"
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