《Naruto: Dream to Immortality 》Chapter 65: Advancement
Advertisement
〚Story by: 𝙃𝙤𝙡𝙮𝙅𝙤𝙠𝙚𝙧 ︱ Edited by: 𝘾𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙞_𝘿𝙤𝙜〛
...
...
...
I then called someone from the Torture & Interrogation Department and asked him:
"Tell me... How many prisoners do we have here? ... Give me a full report officer."
...
With the characteristic expression of a torturer; one devoid of all emotion and as cold as your ex, he answers dutifully...
"All of our prisoners were taken to the T&I facility on the outskirts of Konoha. All except 6 jonin. The former commander ordered us to hold them in the camp, as she pretended to use them as bait to lure in the remaining Swordsmen of the Mist."
"However, there have been no signs of enemy movement near the camp, and ever since Inuzuka-sama's assault, they have retreated even further in order to regroup. Those 6 have been forsaken by Kirigakure."
"Hmph, I see... Anyway, do any of them possess any of the village's special bloodlines? ..."
"Most notably, there is a Yuki clan member, but he is currently in a dire overall health condition and all valuable intel has already been extracted from him. Therefore, I've scheduled his execution in 4 hours. That is all Inuzuka-sama!"
"Good job officer. Dismissed."
"Hai!"
...
Well... That was certainly disappointing... I was hoping for at least a Yoton (Lava Release) user... But alas, we can't always get what we want now, do we?
...
...
I go towards my tent and get to work right away.
Everything's ready to begin the construction of my own private lab at first light tomorrow. As the camp's Commander, I have available to me all the space and resources necessary to build an underground lab. This way I can safely keep my most 'sensitive' material away from prying eyes...
I'll obviously set each and every kind of territory protection Fuinjutsu I'm able to... Can't leave my ocean of knowledge open for just anyone to swim in... Not even an Anbu...
This undertaking won't be a secret per se, but only the quartermaster and some camp officials know of it...
Works for me.
On the other hand, I'm sure the Brass back in Konoha will see this as standard procedure as well. Given that I'm Tsunade's best and last student and a somewhat reputed medic-nin myself they should see no problem with me 'looking for new and better ways of healing their soldiers'. If anything, they should encourage it...
They also won't expect results anytime soon, thanks to medicine in this world advancing at the speed of a crippled slug...
I don't have to report to them either. They'll probably have their eyes and ears everywhere within the camp by now... But that also means I'll have to tread very carefully... Even more so now that my 'first' mask has already been seen through...
Nothing I can't take measures against though.
Anyway... This is the power I wanted... The power that I needed to make some real headway on my projects...
Shikaramu had to go and there's no doubt about it...
Also, I didn't have to kill him, so that's a plus. I wouldn't want to deal with his annoyingly cunning self...
Yet...
...
...
...
-(Time Skip. 3 months later)-
...
These past few months I have spent doing a lot of research, while a shadow clone does all the tedious work of running a military campaign. I dispel the clone every night, take in all of his memories and experiences, and then make another that already has his orders for the next day...
Advertisement
I've mastered the Shadow Clone Jutsu at such a level that nobody has noticed the deception... As long as he doesn't get attacked, everything will continue to run smoothly...
Whilst the real me is attending more pressing matters than dispatching cannon fodder out to die and such...
Instead, I like to focus on my experiments and research, but of course, that doesn't mean that I can just neglect my duties as Commanding Officer of the Mist Division... And the Shadow Clone patented method has proved to be my ace card in this affair...
'Excellence and discipline' is my motto. I like to run a tight ship and I've done well so far. Having zero tolerance for any insubordination or inefficiency, no one dares to question my authority now.
Good. I intend to keep it that way.
I must say... These past three months have been quite productive, to say the least...
Most recently, I've been working with my brand new test subjects I've been kindly procured by my hardworking subordinates...
I am currently going over my new Taijutsu moves. My body has gotten a little stronger now as I haven't dismissed my training, not one day.
Of course, when I say 'going over' I mean using a prisoner as my punching bag.
This way, I get the most accurate data regarding my damage output, chakra and stamina consumption and replenishment rates, the effects of striking certain Tenketsu (Chakra Points), and a long etcetera...
This is formal scientific work and without precise data results, there's no point in me wasting my time with these experiments...
Now, analyzing the current condition of this used-to-be-jonin meat bag, I start taking notes...
The man isn't conscious, obviously. He is a black-haired feminine man from the Yuki clan... I have already conducted several experiments on him, so he evidently looks like a mess...
23 days of incessant physical and mental strain, have rendered his already weak mind completely blank and at this point is hardly able to process the simplest of my orders.
To be expected, since I have been trying different memory manipulation techniques, and additionally training my Sharingan's genjutsu capabilities on him.
His body is in an emaciated state with several healed and recent fractures, muscle tears all over, bruises, and some organ damage to top it all off.
To be honest, he actually went beyond my calculations and managed to stay alive for 7.2 hours longer than I had predicted. I'll make the pertinent modifications.
Not my proudest piece of work, -I'll admit as much- but it was a necessary one...
There are many sacrifices to be made if I am to reach the apex, and his life is one that I'm willing to make...
...
...
I go on with my 'session', putting aside my pen and notebook...
"Come here Number 1..."
He comes towards me in a strange crawling motion fitting a zombie, and as soon as he is 2 meters away from me...
*Slash*
I cut his throat so fast that my movements couldn't have been seen by the untrained eye, putting him out of his misery.
I didn't do this out of pity though, he simply is no longer useful to me.
Afterward, I burn his body until nothing remains, as usual. I've implemented a crematory in the lab with an optimized exhaust system, and a chimney that remains hidden between some rocks; well beyond the camp's premises.
The remaining jonin prisoners have also seen the end of their usefulness. Their cause of death was my new Taijutsu Style called Death Fist.
Advertisement
I secretly used my Sharingan to copy the basics of the Hyuga Taijutsu from a scout: the Gentle Fist.
Even though the Gentle Fist itself can't be used without a Byakugan, the main principle for my technique derives from it, along with a combination of the Eight Inner Gates technique, plus my Chakra Enhanced Strength technique.
This particularly devastating Taijustu obliterates the Tenketsu of the target with a silent chakra shockwave, effectively crippling them in the best-case scenario and killing them in a full-on direct hit.
However, it is not yet battle-ready. It'll take some more trial and error in order to complete it, but the progress I've made so far is to not be disdained either. It's just a matter of time, really...
...
On another note, I have currently stopped studying the Flying Thunder God Jutsu.
The reason being that, even though I now possess all of the Uzumaki Fuinjutsu and made substantial progress on that front as well, I've also inevitably hit a wall. And a quite considerable one at that...
This is a technique that needs 100% of my attention to develop from now on -which I most certainly will eventually-.
I've already grasped the core principles of the technique, but now I need to develop my very own kind of Technique Formula to be able to teleport.
This 'formula' consists of two elements: the fingerprint, that in this case would be the Fuinjutsu; and the ink with which to inscribe it: chakra.
In theory, there wouldn't be a problem, but the thing is that the kind of Fuinjutsu used in it is unlike any other. Anyone who tries to learn the technique has to start by creating their own Fuinjutsu mark. One that is tuned precisely to one's chakra flow and vibration at the time of casting it.
And chakra is the combination of Physical and Spiritual Energies...
In other words, that means that each Technique Formula is unique for each individual that casts it. It's basically tailored to a specific body, at a specific time, under specific conditions... Nigh impossible to replicate, no matter how many tests are run... At least with the current technology.
So... the giant wall that stands in my way is this: Not even my shadow clones have a formula 100% identical to mine.
Theirs might be almost 99.99%, but they don't have a physical body that can be hurt or that needs to eat, et al. This becomes a problem when their Fuinjutsu mark, -the fingerprint- isn't the same... And in turn, the formula is unequivocally altered.
The solution to that dilemma, however, is also the main complication for me right now: I need to study the Jutsu on my own... That means no shadow clones hack, regrettably...
Given the aforementioned, I postponed it at least until the 2nd Ninja War ends, in order to be able to study it on my own and dedicate myself fully to such endeavor.
...
Going on with my inner monologue, I have completely unveiled the profound truths of the Eight Inner Gates technique, and have been trying to combine it with the Creation Rebirth technique. That would counteract the Eight Gates' weakness: the destruction of one's body inside out. Such a dreadful combination could very well become my trump card...
Just remembering how Might Guy brought Six Paths Madara to his knees when he unleashed the Eighth Gate, is a testament to its undeniable potential... The potential to open the Eighth Gate without dying or crippling my body forever... It certainly puts things into perspective...
But there comes the reason why not all ninja learn the Eight Gates technique, besides the difficulty of learning how to open the Gates...
When even someone as untalented as Guy was able to do so... When just the First Gate would already be able to help any ninja tremendously in a battle...
The reason for it couldn't be more judicious... And it is that whenever a Gate opens, you can't use even the simplest of ninjutsu or genjutsu... The chakra is literally rampaging all around your body... It is statistically impossible, no matter how good your chakra control is.
Plus there's a high chance of it backfiring if the user isn't in top physical shape, potentially leaving the user as a maimed vegetable… And that's just with the First Gate open... Now imagine how it would be in the Third or Fourth... Let alone the Seventh...
Though this method might be impossible, there should be a way to train your body using the Eight Gates...
...
Finally... About my next course of action...
During these three months, there have been no battles against the Mist, as they took huge losses... They lost around 30% of their army last time and there was even a high number of jonin casualties...
Indeed, there have been some skirmishes. It's not like they surrendered or anything... I took care of the majority without any remarkable development, other than taking some more prisoners.
I couldn't pass the opportunity to obtain fresh test subjects... That's something I can never get enough of. They didn't last much though, as their level was at most chunin...
In any case, now that I've got my Sharingan 100% mastered, I am planning on venturing into enemy territory once again... Obviously not with an army at my back, otherwise they'd notice that a hundred miles away...
After all, the Mist still has scouts all around...
...
I left my second in command -a random jonin officer- in charge, while I am away conducting my 'advanced reconnaissance tactics' and 'preemptive trap setting'...
Also, the shadow clone I commissioned to secretly go back to Konoha and contact a certain council member, has concluded his mission satisfactorily.
I asked Danzo to give me some information on the Mist and their patrol routes. I also added in some bullsh*t speech about the greatness of Konoha and how we mustn't lose any more forces over a lack of preparation.
Obviously, I won't be taking the 'safe route' he 'graciously' marked for me...
Danzo is probably on my top 5 people I wouldn't trust in this world no matter what.
The true objective of that meeting, however, was to get a way in with Danzo. Firstly, because he has a way to get me more test subjects during peacetime, just as he did for Orochimaru in the canon...
And secondly, because I also need him to vote for me when I contest for the title of Hokage...
His political support is invaluable for my plans...
...
...
I stealthily go out of the camp, only the jonin -including the Brass' spies- know that I am going away... And I didn't even go into much detail when I informed them of my departure...
As soon as I'm a couple dozen meters outside of the camp...
<Shunshin>
So it begins, my journey well into the Land of Water...
Advertisement
- In Serial30 Chapters
Dragonheart Core
To take a dragon's hoard is to challenge death. The greatest of the sea-drakes wakes, curled on his silver throne; but there is no silver. His hoard is stolen. He rises, screaming, and chases the thief to the ends of the world—only to be shot from the sky. But dragons do not die easy, and never one with such festering hatred. A dungeon core rises from his corpse. If he intends to survive so near the cove of pirates that slew his past self, he'll need to master his powers—and quickly. For these pirates are dragonslayers; they won't be felled by mere mushrooms or spiders. Beneath the lawless Calarata, the young dungeon core will have to fight to survive; and one day, he will return death to the man who killed him. Updates twice a week, on Tuesday and Thursday at 1 pm EST!
8 312 - In Serial44 Chapters
Horizon
Emiluna is about to turn 16 and gain access to her first two classes. Living in a small village in the middle of nowhere, she always wanted to become a Hunter. Having learned a bit under her parents, a miller and a seamstress, she was sure she could never pick a class that meant staying inside all day. But being a Hunter is more than just a class. It means providing meat for the village, culling small pests near the cultivated fields and most importantly guarding the village from predators and monsters. But Emiluna is not a normal girl and her destiny far bigger than she could have ever imagined.Join her as she finds out what awaits just behind the horizon.[Word from the author]I am looking to create a fantasy world that has some logic to it and stays believable even as characters gain power and progress in levels.Classes and level quantify the people's progress, but they do not artificially inflate their power to demi-god levels. I am primarily trying to write a captivating story, not "power-porn". That means it will be slower than the fast burning litRPG you might be used to, but it won't burn out that quickly either and I won't drop half of my plots at the wayside. I should mention that English is not my native language. I hope it is mostly unnoticeable, but sometimes I manage to slip some awkard sentence structure in there (German sometimes puts things together in reverse).It it also my first time writing an actual fantasy novel and the first time writing anything at length in English. Any constructive feedback is very welcome.Credit where credit is due: Cover picture by Paul Bica (Licensed under CC 2.0)Check out his amazing photos here: https://www.flickr.com/photos/dexxusYes, my cover picture is a photo, not a drawing. :D I might try my hand at some Paint-ification later to add the title.[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
8 177 - In Serial35 Chapters
A Demon Lord's Virtual [Magic Life]
This is the story of 20 year old Lucas Rollin. Orphaned at the young age of 10, his life is filled with struggles as a Superhuman, a genetically enhanced human. Living a life of poverty in the 23rd century, he could only barely sustain himself with his genetic differences compared to a normal human and survived by gaining money in virtual reality to pay for his food and survival.Now his final break came with a less then popular game [Magic Life] which features a special auto character creation process. During this process, he ends up with the Race Demon Lord and the class of the same name. Follow him as he plays in the virtual world that changed his life as the Demon Lord Akor as he trains in the tutorial zone facing countless choices in his [Magic Life].
8 65 - In Serial36 Chapters
Duality Dissonance
**Cover art is a concept. Professional artists commissioned for actual cover in Aug 2022.** Envy's inquisitive nature has him seek answers to explain the post-apocalyptic state of his world, leading him to join a group of other winged-warriors to hunt and exterminate the Yoi--a force that some believe to be the reason their world is struggling to survive.EV (Envy) befriends his companions as they travel but he soon adopts a different belief on what is threatening their world.His goal changes as he gains new understanding, placing him in opposition of former friends, because achieving his new goal means preventing those friends from achieving theirs.As EV's questions convert to answers he struggles in dealing with a new one: "If I can't stop them--can't change their minds...is killing them really my only option?" EV fights the battle he believes in, which decides the answer to his final question. Will that decision actually save their world, and if it does, will EV be able to reconcile the events and find piece in what little remains?
8 91 - In Serial32 Chapters
Through Blood We Grow
Monsters come in many shapes. Men, animals, spirits, dreams, feelings. Sometimes it feels as if this world is a monster, simply waiting to devour you and all you hold dear. Grim knows this feeling better than most. Like many he was happy with his life, friends aplenty, a loving mother, a stable home, and a bright future. Like many that life was taken from him. But unlike many that wasn’t the end of him. He wasn’t devoured by the world, he was given a second chance and new name. With that name comes new people, new dangers, and a new outlook. This monster of a world wouldn’t consume him, he would grow. He would grow beyond the nightmares, beyond the weakness, and beyond his past. And the only way he can do that, is through blood.
8 204 - In Serial19 Chapters
3 Ninja Adventures (Part 1)
Changed her model and names 💙1st book(Used to be Max and Ellen Update on names: I decided to change it officially to Zoey and Blaze for nickname!) What happens when a girl ninja comes along? Will she join the others or be on her own? Is she related or not related??? Will there be drama or none???(Also did a lot of fixes ❤️)Julia Butters (model) Rated #2 for 3 ninjas!
8 147

