Thank you so much to all the people that read this, it really means a lot.

The goal of this piece was to personify my depression the best that I could and I think I did a good job on it. I've been doing very small edits throughout the chapters and adding a few things but I think I'm enjoying the final product. I might revisit this later on and edit some more when I feel like it. So as far as the story goes, this is 100% finished.

I'd appreciate the feedback.

I wanna know what you think of Sara and Freyja, or even the other side characters

What about the story in general? was it satisfying? Did it feel real?

Anyways, My next project is Petrichor. Even though I have three completed versions of it, I'm working on the fourth to make the story be better. It's gonna be a lot longer than it already is but I want to tell a complete story. This story is about everyone in my universe I created. Emily, Cody, Sara, Andrew, Grace, and Chris. These are the six main character of it and the first two parts take place immediately after Elizabeth's story, and the third after this novel.

Please look forward to it

Also, I'm in the process of creating a novella for Andrew so that might come in between