《Trace: A LitRPG Apocalypse》Commenting Rules and Etiquette
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Why hasn't there been a chapter in the past week? Because some of you guys are savages who complain about every single chapter and every single minute thing. My mental health is in the gutter and my productivity is dead from reading all the constant complaints.Just like in Salvos, I'm adding commenting rules for the sake of my productivity in producing chapters:
1. Be polite - If you can't criticize a story without being polite, you're banned from commenting.
2. Don't demean the author - If you can't criticize a story without negatively alluding to the author, you're banned from commenting.
3. Majority of your comments should not be criticism - If more than 50% of your comments are criticisms of the story, you're banned from commenting.
4. Don't make demands of the author - If you dislike one aspect of the story, you can say you dislike it, but don't ask me to change anything. You can point out that it feels out of character, you can say it's a plot hole, but do not tell me how to write my story. If you're going to backseat write, you're banned from commenting.
That's it. Hopefully I'll start posting chapters on time next week. But my productivity is dead thanks to all the incessant negativity I've gotten here and in Salvos.
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