《Saga of the Soul Dungeon - Old》Back to Writing Soon, Need Feedback
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Hey all. Long time no talk.
Between work, writer's block, and a few more things I have been away from my story much longer than I thought I would.
Obviously that sucks, and I know people are left waiting,
I am going to be going back and rereading my entire story in intimate detail to reacquaint myself with everything and sketch out all the plot elements so I do not accidentally drop a plot thread due to my long absence.
I would greatly appreciate any comments about the story, the plot, missing or confusing elements, as this is one of the times when I will actually be able to take in everything as a whole. That is a luxury I do not have too often, simply because it would bog me down if I was already moving full speed ahead.
Also please tell me what you are excited about, what you want to see. Authors like to be excited about their stories too, haha. And you might trigger an idea that becomes a paragraph or scene.
All of you that are following me and waiting eagerly, thank you for your patience.
I will never abandon this story, even if some diversions occur.
Thank you so much,
AJ Foxmoor
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