《Change: New World》Criticisms, Suggestions, and Skill Ideas
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This Should be renamed to DATABANK of SKILLS, seeing as how I've got all these skill ideas to choose from. This isn't a bad thing, infact, keep them coming guys. The only problem I have now is how in the world I'd introduce so many fascinating skills into the story...
Not a new chapter but just, you know, one of those pages.
I'll be checking this page often, so here you can post any skill ideas that you may have come up with that you think might fit well with the context of the story. If you have any suggestions regarding anything from, plot, stats, character interaction, anything, then you can also suggest them here. If I like what I see, then I may or may not add them into the story. Of course, I'll mention the contributor of the idea when and if I do use it in the story.
While I still have a few ideas regarding future skills for both Hide and the rest of the future cast, it would be nice to know what type of skills the community can come up with.
And if you have any questions regarding the story, I will answer them to the best of my ability. If any of the answers are considered spoiler, I'll put the answer in the spoiler tag.
Also for Future Reference, the rankings of the skills go like this:
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Regular
Rare
Legendary
Epic
World Class
Unique
Magic
Unique skills aren't necessarily the strongest but rather they are skills where only 1 can exist at any given time. A Unique Skill can also be as strong and OP as World Class Skills (Which by the way are the strongest) or as basic as a Regular Skill (Like Dissect).
Also, Magic Skills are, as it sounds, skills entirely based on magic. Oh, and just to clarify, there can be skills which require mana that aren't necessarily labeled as a Magic Skill. The label Magic is usually added to the rest of the rank names (e.i. Regular Magic Skill, Unique Magic Skill)
Also, I'll be dumping some concept art for the story that I might draw out in my free time.
The first of the art is the cover art I drew for the Fic. Do let me know what you think. I'll put in as the cover page in a little while.
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