Edit Notes

Chapter 86:

Increased the feeling of severity in regard to Jayden’s crimes. Originally, he was going to be tortured and executed, but Addison set him free as soon as Dante asked. Now, Addison is far more reluctant and says that she cant allow him off without punishment or some form of compensation. Dante promises to punish Jayden, but not to compensate, and Addison eventually lets Jayden off reluctantly.

Also added a small mention of Jayden being physically abused by the Warriors of the redwing unit.

Chapter 101:

Mentions that Warlord Vidal was hit by the poisoned arrow when the enemy launched a surprise attack on their command station on the main front.

Changed Addison’s reason for retreating. Was – father was sick and wanted to heal him. Now – Father fell, and I had to utilize the chaos of battle to hide his condition and retreat before the other mercenary leaders tried to seize command. Also changed it to mention that the healers could only slow the poison, and Victoria managed to help heal him of the poison for the purpose of helping to stabilize his power after they returned.

Dante still thinks the entire western front being wiped out was Addison’s fault, at least partially. Thinking that she should have left behind a small force to stall, or at least a few scouts to monitor the enemy and give warnings to the other armies to mitigate losses.

When Dante asked where Warlord Vidal is and who is currently in command, Addison states that her father is currently in bed resting, and only has the strength to appear for a few minutes every day. She also says that she is in command, but everyone listens to her orders because they expect Warlord Vidal to make a quick recovery.

When Dante put Jayden in charge of the camp, he now specifies that Jayden is solely in charge of logistics, and that the defense of the camp is to be left to Addison and whoever else was already in charge. He also mentions that if Jayden tries to further expand his authority in any way, Dante would kill him.

Slight expansion to the reasoning Dante took command instead of leaving it to a random mercenary leader other than Addison was added. Pretty much, not only would Addison/Warlord Vidal be killed, but it would also create too many possible variables depending on how the new Warlord chose to fight (or not fight) against Warlord Karabell.

Chapter 102:

Added a small segment to the end of a sentence. “Dante’s position as a commander also became unquestionable as he progressed in his training, which in turn further eroded Warlord Vidal's authority.”

Also, small note. I havent expanded on it yet, but I'll be adding small details to things that happened in chapter 102 slowly in upcomming chapters. Among them will be a few of the struggles Dante faced taking over as commander (and some of the decisions/orders he's made since then), as people were also questioning how he did it so easily.