《BROKEN CHAINS》Questions from the Author.
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Who do you think is going to be the villain of the first arc? Will it be Fu Tengfang, Ji Ciao or the mighty Ning Yu?
Currently, the story is very "Boys vs Girls" - I'm thinking of writing up a girl that Kou has to compete with in the future. That is not in the actual draft I have of the story, but I feel like it would undo the "Boys bad girls good" thing I have currently going on (the exception being Hei Tian.)
Do you think I've grown a little better in giving my characters an actual personality?
Kou is a somewhat dead-pan honest but untrusting girl.
Xiu Shihong seems to be a caring friend but also someone you would not really want to have against you.
Hei Tian is very righteous! I think I still have to work on him a little bit, he has very little screen-time.
Shi Shi is a teasing old granny that cares a lot! I think I got that across well.
Li Zhi is very.. eh unhappy?
Every other character seems to be a bit Minor.
There is Kiel - I found I got his stoic blacksmithing character across. Ok
Fu Tengfang is actually mentioned quite often! He is the type of person that compliments his own image in the mirror - but is he really a bad person? Who knows! I hope to hear my readers thoughts
Ning Yu. He had been in 2 Chapters? Maybe 3 - I don't know, he seems to be a scheming kind of guy, did you like him? He is very handsome.
Jie Ciao - he is very self-centered, and what was it that he got from the trial? He seems very malicious and out for only his own gain! Right?
I intend to name and involve more characters once I've gone over the old Chapters, I will of course not stop writing entirely - the speed will just decrease considerably. But I fear that if I involve too many characters I might forget one!
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I mean Hei Mei is still unmentioned in many many chapters, and that evil seeming prodector? We have not seen him since chapter 4.5! I hope you still remember them, they will play a role in the future.
At the end I want to say something important, while I will REWRITE a good bunch of the story I will not alter or just minorly alter things that happened, you will not have to reread everything If you don't want to - that is my goal (Aside from updating the glossary - but that is really tedious.)
Buses are really hot around this time of the year... Please send me cold thoughts, I want a magical cloak that keeps me cool too, please.
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