《Force of Will》Chapter 11: The pride before the fall
Advertisement
Waking up the next morning I felt more refreshed than ever. Without being suspicious of the order I found myself I swear my steps had extra bounce in them.
During our training I was progressing a lot faster than the majority of the class it seemed. I was no longer able to hide it from Tom and Bea either, as I had apparently reached rank 24 in the class, this means I no longer had to do those extra laps. I was also getting hungrier and getting second meals more often now. As strange as the training was, these guys clearly knew what they were doing, since it seemed to be working.
I noticed a few of the other trainees, that were ahead of me in the rankings, shooting me looks while awaiting our turn. I'm thinking maybe they were just caught by surprise I was able to catch up to them, or maybe even worried I would pass them. Who knows.
I took it all in stride though, as this world was definitely treating me well now. All the food I needed, a place to sleep, friends, fun activities? I did find myself longing for a good book, or even just one of those idle games on my phone. But not very often to be honest. Maybe just something to break up the fact that it was the same thing everyday.
The week continued without any fanfare and nothing of note. Sam hasn't come back by, so I wasn't able to pick his brain. Tom and Bea had essentially forgiven me and gone back to our usual routines, with the addition of constant advice on the course. I shared what I could, but they mainly lacked the physical prowess and dexterity to do it. Its not like the obstacles needed too much thinking.
By the end of the week I had progressed to rank 16 in the class and I was feeling pretty happy with it.
I also found out what happened at the higher heights in the course.
I'm not sure what made the determining factor in his action versus inaction, but the knight instructor got involved. The 1st ranked trainee was pushing as high as she could go. When she fell from her current obstacle, instead of letting her land and the abbot heal her up, the instructor suddenly... blurred... and disappeared. I looked around to see what happened and finally heard a thump. Focusing in on the sound I saw the knight holding the girl and then set her down.
She bowed very low to the knight and then started making her way back to us. As she did the knight blurred again and suddenly he was back in his usual spot waving the next kid through. The girl was still making her way to the line, he had passed her in an instant!
Advertisement
Was this what they meant by the power of mana? Was he using spells or something to teleport? Maybe it was a body enhancement type thing? How did that work? Is this something we were going to learn? I was getting super excited and pumped up from this display. I glanced around at all the other trainees, but they didn't seem to have my enthusiasm. It looks like this is something I should have expected if I was from this world.
Well, I'll get used to it I guess.
—----
Its been a couple weeks now since I woke up here. Training has continued unchanging. The instructor has had to intervene several times now when people fall, but I still can't discern the rhyme or reason to his intervention.
I'm positive I myself have fallen from the same heights or higher as some of these kids. The knight has had to move to catch people behind me in line. I myself have not had the grace to be caught yet. I've been made to suffer through the pain until the abbot healed me. It was frankly a touch annoying.
After the third week of training... well technically fourth week for everyone, but I was only here for three of them.... when training ended the knight dismissed everyone early, rather than doing their 5 laps. He said we needed to be well rested for the following day. I was definitely excited for this change of pace. Something different to look forward to? Yes please! That had been my only complaint about this so far after all.
I was sitting at our dinner table talking with my friends about this latest development. We were all on our 2nd meal, as even Tom and Bea had started getting extras by this point.
"So none of us have any idea what its going to be about huh? You sure there hasn't been any gossip amongst the girls Bea?" I had pleaded with her to ask while she was in the bath. She seemed the more social of us after all. Tom and I definitely just kept to our little circle.
"No, for the last time Will, no one has any idea. Just eat your food and let it go. We'll all find out tomorrow" Bea was clearly exasperated with my prodding, so I guess I had to drop it.
We finished up with dinner and plodded back to the dorms. There was only just a little bit of small talk, even amongst everyone else. The majority of people were turning in early. I guess everyone was looking forward to tomorrow.
Advertisement
I said my goodnights to my friends, but I was awake for another hour or two it seemed, just in my own head. Ideas were running wild in my head, I was hoping we would learn pretty much anything new, like maybe however that knight was able to blur and catch people. That would be awesome.
Well, nothing for it but to go to sleep and wake up to experience it.
—----
The next morning I felt like the whole class was all on edge. There was very little talking amongst the groups, and we really just poked at our breakfast.
I didn't even finish mine!
Eventually Bea motioned for us to wrap things up, her sense of time is still unmatched by either Tom or myself. So we got up and made our way to the training area.
When we arrived the instructor was already there, which was a bit out of the norm. He normally arrived after us for breakfast. Once the rest of the class arrived he addressed us.
"Your dedication and training this past month has been very fruitful. You have all managed to get into optimal physical condition. From this point on you will report to another knight for 6 days out of the week. You will come back here, to me on Solsday in order to run the course again and check your progress or lack thereof. You will just need to continue on through the next hall to meet your next instructor. Dismissed." and with that the knight waved towards the opposite end of the room we entered from to another hall.
We all started herding that way. Everyone was in good spirits, although it felt like there was a tinge of nervousness in the air. I decided I would go for some levity and tease Bea some.
"Ahh Bea, I'm so sorry!" I began with the slightest smirk on my face.
Bea scowled at me, but took the bait anyway "What are you talking about now Will?"
"Why, you'll only be able to see your dear knight once a week now! What will you do when you can no longer stare so longingly at him the other 6 days?" I finished with aplomb and an even bigger smirk.
Bea froze for just a second as the color drained from her face. It was quickly followed by the darkest blush I've seen on her yet. She must've really liked the looks of the knight. I definitely struck a nerve on that one.
It looks like she came back to her senses though and scowled at me. I laughed and just kept walking away towards our next adventure, too excited to worry about whatever she was going to come up with as a retort.
Apparently that was not the correct move though. I heard an increase of footsteps, presumably from Bea catching up.
THWACK
Looks like Bea decided not to use her words as a retort I thought, before I suddenly felt like I should be seeing stars.
—----
While still rubbing my head explaining to Bea it was a joke we exited the hall into the next room for our training. I realized this would be a lot different than what I was expecting.
The room was clearly meant for combat. There were dozens of little dirt areas cleared out in pretty much uniform circles. Stacked all along the wall were all manner of weapons. Swords, spears, maces, flails. The variety of weaponry was staggering. If it was not for all the time I spent playing video games I'm sure I would not have recognized half these weapons.
Also along the wall was all kinds of padded armor and helms. I'm assuming all this was for us and our next training would all be about beating each other up. I.. was suddenly not quite sure how I felt about that. Something I had managed to avoid all my life was fights believe it or not. Never been involved in one. And now it looks like the majority of my week would be attempting to hit other people and be hit by them.
Huh.
The last bit of the room was just the very center. There was a large tree there as well as our knight instructor. Doing a double take on the tree I realized this is where I woke up with Sam and the priest. That actually feels so long ago at this point. Ahh well.
We all headed over to stand in front of our instructor. As we got close I realized I was probably in trouble. I glanced at Bea, which she saw and she smirked. Ahhh hubris. It comes for us all.
Advertisement
- In Serial30 Chapters
Misadventures of a Rampaging Demon
In a remote magical laboratory, buried deep beneath the earth, an unspeakable demonic horror is brought into the world… Her name is Lilizath VekxZ’Kraugh (Lily for short). She enjoys cuddling, stargazing, and devouring the torn apart bodies of her enemies. The demon girl rampages across a fantasy world, satisfying her demonic urges while making friends with various terrified humans. Meanwhile, an honest young lady leaves her peaceful life behind to embrace her destiny as the chosen one. Things go horribly wrong almost immediately and a random act of violence spares her from a very unpleasant evening. Mature Content Warning: Contains gratuitous scenes of sex, violence, and violent sex. This story is not appropriate for younger readers, older readers, or anyone else, for that matter. Author’s Note: This is my first attempt at publishing something I’ve written online. I’d love some feedback. Feel free to comment and let me know what you think of it and offer suggestions or criticisms.
8 296 - In Serial59 Chapters
Beyond The Worlds[BTW]
Would you like to travel to another world? Crossing different dimensions and realities? reach a power that no one has ever reached? Shin Akash did not know that he had started his journey to reach the ABSOLUTE. Finding companions along his journey and forming an invincible team, he climbed step by step. From student to team leader. from an ordinary human being to the Absolute. ------------------------------------------------ - ----- Warning! The characters in this novel will have an extremely high power level, so the protagonists will have some big power boosts throughout the series; however, this will not be frequent and they will grow up "healthy". I guarantee you will understand why in the end. This story will not be focused on the Harem. The protagonist will not be the full focus of the story. All the main characters in the story will have their highlights 1- English is not my native language, so I apologize for the spelling mistakes; 2-the whole story is original; however, there are some minor references to other works. 3-All worlds are fictional (including our protagonist's world), so don't use the "common sense" of our world in this novel Chapter words: 800-1500 ATTENTION THE COVER ART IS NOT MINE; HOWEVER, I HAVE NOT FOUND THE ARTISTS' NAME YET, IN IT I OFFER MY FULL CREDIT TO THE BEAUTIFUL ARTS. Book cover: pinterest
8 191 - In Serial16 Chapters
New Life; New Hell
What is the worst thing for you?Marcus only ever wanted a peaceful life and he nearly escaped the person which made his 18 years of life miserableIf he hadn't died, that is. He didn't stay dead, though.Follow Marcus on his quest to lead a peaceful life in a world which isn't peaceful at all._______________________(The mature tag is just to be sure, because I don't know where this story will lead )
8 211 - In Serial76 Chapters
Chosen Chaos
30 years have passed since first contact. Earth has now been accepted into the galactic community, is expanding its territory to other planets, and has begun to adopt the myriad advanced technologies found throughout the Milky Way Galaxy. But as the least advanced race in the galaxy, the Earthians are struggling to carve a niche for themselves, made all the more difficult by the fact that they are the only race in the entire galaxy incapable of developing supernatural powers. Until recently. Few know how or why, but small groups of Earthians have begun to display superhuman abilities — and the militaries of the galaxy have begun to display interest in them. Combined with the rise of an evil thought to have been vanquished two decades ago, these superpowered Earthians are forced to choose between the value of their own lives… and the value of the entire galaxy. Part 1: Chosen Few — A mundane visit to the local science museum starts off a series of worrying events for Austin Travis and his friends. They would like nothing more than to continue living their lives as they have, but the universe seems to have other plans… Part 2: Chosen Elite — CSF-1 and the Eximius Vir return to normal military operation and discover a clue to finding powerful ancient technology. However, they aren’t the only ones to discover this clue, and soon find themselves in a race against time to prevent the technology from falling into the wrong hands… Part 3: Chosen Hidden — As the summer comes to an end, Pierce Bradley and his friend prepare for their last few days studying abroad on an alien planet. Pierce would like nothing more than to return home and flaunt his new experiences in front of his friends and classmates, but the universe seems to have other plans… Chosen and its three parts begin the Key Saga, a new novel series that takes place 20 years after Rise — which tells the tale of the aforementioned evil. Reading Rise is not a prerequisite for reading Chosen, but it will help to understand the setting and the various conflicts within. Character art on cover by @quassihollic on twitter.
8 428 - In Serial13 Chapters
The Beta Test
Our nameless narrator participates in a beta test for an early VRMMO game Meridian 60. That's not the real name but it captures the spirit of the adventure given the chronological and contextual era of the game. His character is unique and special but purely for mundane reasons and not because of any inherent or social significance. The first chapter which is mandatory to submit a story on RR serves as a bit of a prologue with some exposition, although I limited that to a reasonble level. I plan to begin releasing additional chapters starting Thursday, to align with the 48 hour submission approval process and also because I have something to do Wednesday. I haven't written anything but the summary and first chapter, nor have I plotted anything out. This is because my plan is to release roughly 34000 words a day, 10 chapters of ~12.5 pages each, for 3 days at which point the story will be complete. I'd have liked to plan for more but handling the interface tables and so forth needed for a data heavy litrpg slows down the writing process. 100k words is a bit short, a standard pre epic fantasy 300 page spec fic novel, but this is mostly a writing exercise and I am considering a longer project if I can maintain the pace. Probably do a different concept, maybe a dungeon core, over 5 days, since a 500 page novel is more common these days. Slight subversion of VRMMO stories Stat heavy/crunchy No paying your bills by gaming No out of game conspiracies No angst, interpersonal drama, or damsels/dudes in distress Schedule is 30000 words a day excepting the first chapter, a limitation of RRs fiction submission system Fantasy, high magic, male lead, no party, guild, or harem No gore, some profanity, no sexual content, and no current plans for anything traumatic
8 92 - In Serial29 Chapters
Anamnesis (Book 2)
This book picks up immediately after the events in Book 1. Jax finds himself in an even worse situation, both emotionally and physically. Will Jax find the strength to escape his captors or will he become their weapon? Character illustrations are available at Anamnesis
8 200

