《One Piece No Go No Ken》Prologue Plothole
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I'm sorry I had to realize this now but I'm originally not a writer and never really had a great memory, so I've spotted a mistake in the prologue due to being too absorbed into the original anime character.
Raoh's romantic history has never been clear and in the anime, we only found out he had a son after he died. So I had to correct this. If it seems too much for you, well I can only say I'm sorry.
I don't want to rewrite the whole novel claiming the guy has had reciprocated feelings with a woman in the past and stuff. In reality, he really was in love with Julia, Kenshiro's woman and he never really was able to forget her. So...what I'm trying to say is that even if he reproduced with another girl out of lust or loneliness, etc; he was still a heartbroken guy with fucked up issues and a broken heart.
Yeah! this is how manly that anime is...Sorry if it's not corny and lighthearted. This is both realistic and unrealistic in certain aspects...This was a fucked up place to live in. Considering the personality of the Raoh I introduced in this novel, I don't want to imagine the worst scenario and this is why I'm going with this softened theory...I really don't want him to be what he's been fighting so far so. Yeah, take it as it is and please do not be too mad.
If you see another plothole somewhere, report it to me and don't be a passive-aggressive cunt; please. Just explain the damn thing like a grown-up. thanks for reading as usual =)
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