《Lone: The Wanderer [Dropped Version (includes original draft of the rewrite's first volume)]》[Rewritten] Book 1 Milindo & The Holy City: Chapter 38: Marking One Another and Eternal Bliss
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"It's getting dark..." Lone said as he looked at the horizon that was slowly setting.
They had quickly found a road after they stopped teleporting. Sophie had started getting a headache from using too much of her mana, and thus, couldn't teleport anymore. Lone knew what it felt like to have no mana points, so he had readily agreed when she had asked if they could walk for a while.
"Let's find a decent clearing away from the road. I'll bring out our house and we can spend the night there," Lone decided.
Sophie nodded. "We almost forgot that you had stored that fort of yours. Such an absurd unique skill, that Dimensional Storage."
Lone frowned. "Fort of ours. Ours. I built the fuckin' thing, sure, but it's both mine, yours, and Soph's."
Sophie's cheeks flushed a shade of crimson. "O-Of course. Well, we shall return control to Soph then. As a reminder, if you do not make any progress with her tonight, we will attack you."
'She's so dishonest with her feelings...' Her face only got redder when Soph was in control. "Don't take her words to heart. We'll make 'progress' when we naturally do. I won't let her force us to do anything. Despite her fighting words, I can physically overpower her, so don't get so worked up, okay?"
Soph meekly nodded her head. "Mmm. I know..." She lightly gripped his hand and followed him as he walked off of the northern-heading road and into the wilderness.
"I really hope this doesn't cause the land to collapse... Soph, you're sure there're no tunnels underground? No caves or animal burrows?" Lone asked with worry clear in his tone.
Soph shook her head. "I can't sense anything."
"Okay... Well, here goes, I guess," Lone said as he willed their home from the elf island out of his Dimensional Storage.
Soph was right. There was nothing to stress over. The house didn't fall into a pit created from its own weight, which lifted a pressure from Lone's shoulders. "Why don't you go inside, Soph? I need to set up a latrine pit for the toilet since there's no ocean to rely on anymore. I also want to do some maintenance while I set up the Illusionary Dome. It's not folding in on itself, but the structure took a little bit of damage."
Soph nodded and got onto her tiptoes to kiss him softly. "I-I'll be waiting. I, um, I have a surprise for you. Em, c-can I have my underwear first? The, em, the adult ones..."
"Huh?" A few seconds ticked by before the pieces fell into place in the man's socially inept mind. He hurriedly took out Soph's lingerie and handed it to her with a blush on his cheeks. "I'm, uh, looking forward to your surprise?"
Soph smiled through her crimson-covered face and replied, "Mmm. I hope you like it..." And with that, she trotted on into the building.
Lone scratched the back of his head as several lewd thoughts and images of Soph's twenty-year-old body clouded his mind. "I wonder how far her 'surprise' will go..."
Soph was sitting on her and Lone's king-sized bed which they hadn't slept on in almost a week. She was wearing nothing but her 'sexy' underwear, and her waist long and partially-braided blonde hair covered her smiling face as she hugged her knees to her more pronounced chest.
If there was one thing that she liked about her twenty-year-old body besides the fact that Lone adored it, was that it gave her breasts some volume. Not a lot, but definitely some. She was glad that Lone didn't seem to care and viewed all of her bodies as equally stunning, though he was only attracted heavily to her eldest one.
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He had shown some interest in her fifteen-year-old one, but every time he looked at Sophie - who prefered that body - with some lust in his eyes, he always hit himself and whispered mantras to 'avoid becoming depraved', whatever that meant.
Soph was most comfortable in her natural body, the one that she had when she gained her immortality. She never told Lone that it actually hurt her a lot when he refused to do anything beyond hugging and kissing when she looked like that.
He had explained time and time again that he didn't want to do anything even remotely sexual with her normal body. It made Soph feel unwanted, unloved, unneeded. She had to consciously remind herself that Lone was simply trying to adhere to the laws of the society that he grew up in.
It wasn't his fault that in his time, relationships with people of her perceived age were incredibly frowned upon. She knew this, but still, it cut her deeper than she knew it should have.
Soph could distinctly remember that during her time as a mortal, it was normal to be wed at eleven or twelve and then to give birth at thirteen to sixteen. This was normal in her age-old memories.
She didn't know the laws and customs of this strange new world that they were now in, but she did know that the 'legal age' - as Lone had called it - was sixteen back in Scotland, where he was from. Even then, at his age, it was heavily frowned upon if he were to enter a loving relationship with a sixteen-year-old girl.
"It's so complicated... I just want him to love me... All of me..." Soph mumbled to herself. 'We know how you feel, but it is not so easy to break one's common sense. Give him time. Make him addicted to our body. We shall force him to love us both spiritually and physically to the point that if we deprive him of a sexual release, he will say yes regardless of what body you demand he lays with.'
Soph smiled faintly and closed her eyes. "I just want him to be happy. I... I can't force him to do something that goes against his cultural values..."
Sophie wasn't sure how to respond to that. 'We... We will support you, regardless of your choice. We want your happiness above all else.'
"Thanks..." Soph replied.
She then stayed there in silence for an hour as she went over her plans. Sophie had been drilling her relentlessly on what she could and should do to please both Lone and herself, so while it embarrassed herself greatly, she was still determined to do it.
The sole thing Soph wanted, was to strengthen her bond with Lone, both emotionally and physically.
Finally, she could sense him entering the building. He was a little bit fidgety and he seemed nervous, but he was making his way towards the bedroom, which was a good sign.
Soph scrambled out of the bed and got herself ready.
'Digging that hole for the toilet and connecting it was a lot easier than I thought it'd be. I guess my boosted stamina and strength are actually making a difference, huh?' Lone thought to distract himself.
It wasn't working. He could hardly be blamed. No matter what he tried to think of, his mind always ended up replaying two sentences of Soph's.
"Um... Sophie said that if I didn't... then, uh, she would... And I don't want that. I-I already told you... I want to give you all of my firsts, not her."
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"I-I'll be waiting. I, um, I have a surprise for you. Em, c-can I have my underwear first? The, em, the adult ones..."
He shook his head and swallowed his building saliva. He didn't want to get his hopes up too high just in case, for whatever reason, Soph actually wasn't going to try to do what Lone thought she was going to try to do.
He carefully pushed down the bedroom door's handle and exerted some force. The door slowly creaked open, revealing a candle-lit room.
Lone recalled that there certainly were some candles stored in the basement and he had made some matches which were usually tucked away in a drawer in the kitchen for cooking purposes. He wanted to get into the romantic mood, but his stupid brain was still trying to divert his thoughts. 'This is a bit of a fire-hazard. There must be at least two dozen candles in here...'
As he walked into the room, the door closed behind him and a pair of delicate hands wrapped around his waist as a warm body pushed past his tails and rested against his back. "Soph?"
"Mmm..." She snaked her hands up his chest and began unbuttoning his shirt. "I... I was waiting for you..."
Lone audibly gulped. 'Okay. Pull it together, Lone. There's no more denying it. Your girlfriend is almost naked and is pressed up against you. She's not drunk, and you've given her lots of positive reinforcement that it's okay for her to advance things at her own pace. So if she's being like this, that must mean that she's ready, right?'
Both he and his crotch seemed to be in agreeance. Steeling himself one final time, Lone pulled Soph's arms away from himself and he turned around.
"L-Lone?" Soph looked confused. Why did he do that? Didn't he want to do this kind of stuff with her? Perhaps she'd have been a bit less confused if she wasn't staring at his face, but instead looked further down his body.
With swift movements, Lone took off his shirt and trousers before he picked up Soph, surprising her. She quickly wrapped her legs around his waist so as to not burden him too much with her weight.
He kissed her passionately as he walked over to the bed and collapsed onto it. He hovered over Soph as he stroked her cheek and stared into her eyes. "Are you sure you want to do this, Soph? This is the last time that I'll ask you, so don't blame me for what happens if you say 'yes'. In all honesty, my body feels like it's on fire. I badly want you."
Lone was crude and was mincing his words since he was overcome with lust somewhat, but his feelings still reached Soph and warmed her heart. She smiled sweetly and raised her head before kissing him. "Mmm. I really want this. Lone, please, make me yours..."
'Fuck... Why did that sound so sexy?!' Lone didn't hesitate any further. With one hand, he caressed Soph's back, with the other, he explored her panties. 'I've watched enough porn to know that she should be wet first, otherwise it'll hurt even more... right? I think that's right...'
"Ah!" An intoxicating moan escaped Soph's lips as she coiled her arms around Lone's shoulders and arched her back like a stretching cat.
The seconds rolled on by as sweat began to drip from their bodies and their breath became heated.
Lone pulled his hand away from Soph's crotch, revealing his glistening fingers. Soph's eyes were misty and she looked confused, "Why... Why'd you stop?"
The coyness in her tone was enticing Lone to go insane. He held himself back since there was still work to be done. He moved away from her and took his underwear off, revealing his erect manhood.
While he was very excited, he was still a bit shy about this since it was his first time actually exposing himself to the girl he loved. Everything that they'd done until now had been performed while still wearing the bare minimum.
His face was just as crimson as hers as he said, "Um, it needs to be wet otherwise it'll hurt you more. Could you, um, put it in your mouth?" He really was awful at this.
Soph blanked for a second. She thought, 'Ah. We're finally making real progress without Sophie's pushing...' She nodded her head slowly and started crawling around the bed, but Lone stopped her.
"It might be better if you, well, keep your ass pointed at me so I can keep pleasuring you? It'd feel wrong to be the only one getting serviced..." Lone really wished he was more confident in these kinds of situations. 'I'm an awkward mess... At least she's not laughing at me.'
"Okay," Soph agreed and crawled on top of Lone with her head hovering just above his nether region and his head just below hers. "Um... I just put it in my mouth?"
"Suck it, please. Try to cover it in saliva. That's how it's meant to be done. I think? I've never been in a situation like this before, so it's a new experience for me too," Lone said as he lightly grabbed Soph's butt and used his fingers to push her panties aside.
"Mm," Soph leaked another moan as she felt a tongue begin to explore her. Despite it being Lone's first time orally pleasuring a woman, Soph still felt shockwaves of unfiltered euphoria wash through her body.
Her mind almost went blank, but she wasn't going to give out like the last time they did something similar to this! She used one of her hands to steady her body while the other guided Lone's long member into her mouth.
Soph was desperate not to hurt the man she loved, so she avoided touching him with her teeth as much as possible as she bobbed her head back and forth and used her dainty tongue to stroke the length of the shaft while occasionally servicing the tip.
Lone was very close to quite honestly losing his damned mind. He didn't know if it was just because it was his first time, because he was so in the mood, because Soph was a natural talent, or perhaps a mix of all three, but he was exceptionally close to climaxing already.
'Am I a quick shot or something? Well, at least we have all of the time in the world to practice...' He thought as he stopped playing with Soph's clitoris and labia.
Soph responded to that and carefully removed herself from his erection as she licked it from top to bottom one more time as if to memorise its flavour. "Are... Are we ready now?" she asked cautiously.
Lone assumed a cross-legged position. "Yeah... I think. Do you mind sitting on me? I kinda want to hug and kiss you when we, um, do it."
Not only her cheeks but even her ears were smothered in a layer of pink embarrassment. She nodded meekly and wrapped herself around Lone once again. She wasn't quite sitting on him yet since if she lowered herself any further, then they wouldn't just be hugging anymore.
Lone held Soph's lower back in one hand and his length in the other. "Can you... Can you lower yourself onto it?"
Soph didn't reply verbally. She nodded once again and slowly dropped her waist as she matched Lone's positioning. Almost immediately, it felt like a flame had been lit in her insides. Her face scrunched up in pain and she accidentally clawed at Lone's shoulders with her nails and she bit into his neck a bit violently.
Lone's face quickly washed over with worry. "I-I'm sorry! Is it painful?"
Soph held back the tears gathering in her eyes as she responded, "Mmm. It's really painful... but... but I'm also really, really happy." She moved away from Lone's now-bleeding neck and smiled at him. "I love you and I'm happy that we're finally one..."
Lone's neck and shoulders healed their light injuries with the assistance of his Basic Regeneration. He couldn't even feel the pain when he considered what Soph was going through right now.
He carefully brought one of his hands towards her face and caressed it softly. "I love you and I'm happy too." He kissed her gently and pushed her lips open with his tongue.
The faint taste of iron filled his mouth - presumably from his own blood - before it was erased by the sweetness of Soph's unique favour.
Gradually, as the seconds and minutes rolled by, Soph began moving her hips up and down slightly. As the minutes grew longer, her movements grew fiercer. Soon, Lone was thrusting as he matched her and the two were moaning almost in sync.
"It feels... ah... really... uhn... good... and... ah... strange..." Soph managed to say between her gasps for air and cries of pleasure.
"For me as well." Lone was far more composed now that they were actually in the middle of the act. His nervousness had been replaced entirely by raw feelings of carnal lust and overwhelming avarice for satisfaction.
Soph suddenly tightened up and her eyes opened open wide as she bounced on his lap. "I-I feel really... good," she purred into his ear as she hugged his head, resulting in her breasts pressing against his face.
Not putting this opportunity to waste, Lone encased one of her nipples in his mouth and teased it with his tongue as he replied, "Me too. I'm cuming pretty soon. You don't mind if I finish inside, do you? I can make some birth control pills if inter-species sex can result in a kid, so you don't need to worry about getting pregnant."
Soph panted into his ear as she bit its lobe. "I want you to finish inside. Please, Lone... ah... Make me yours..."
Those were the words that sent Lone off the edge. His muscles tensed up as his entire body spasmed. His seed flowed into Soph as she gripped him so firmly, it was like she was trying to wring him dry.
The two groaned in unison as they climaxed.
Lone remained there as his member continued to squirt his semen into Soph while the girl lay limp in his arms with nothing but content written all over her expression.
She closed her eyes and weakly hugged him. "Lone, I love you. I want to stay with you forever."
Lone stroked the girl's hair and kissed her forehead. "I love you too, Soph, and I'd want nothing else than to spend the rest of my life with you..."
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