《The Dungeon Hive- Volume 2》Battle is Dumped
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The idea I had for the final battle consisted of the demons and the Kin combining their forces to fight the human army. Battling to a stalemate, the Fire Hive creates a Boss (Phoenix, Fire-Bird or Dragon) that rose from the top of the volcano and it would swoop down burning the humans. A combo victory for the Demons, Kin, and Hives.
After writing most of the battle, I came to the sad conclusion that it just wasn’t any good. It wasn’t funny, thrilling, or exciting. It was crap. I have to redo the whole scene for the book and hopefully come up with something better.
So I’m going to skip the battle and go straight to the aftermath of the battle which leads to the epilogue and setup the opening of Book 3. This requires a skip in the story and I’m sorry about this but I don’t want to finish writing a part of the story that I’m going to dump anyway. If readers want, I’ll put up what I had finished of the battle on RRL before going on to the aftermath but please be warned that it is pretty short and unedited.
Thank you.
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