《NPC (First Draft)》Comments and Discussion.
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I feel that this page is needed. I dunno if people are disappointed for thinking this is the next chapter. They probably are.
Let me just say that I finished a response paper between this post and the last chapter (Chapter 11). It was due tomorrow so yea.
I can get Chapter 11.5 out tonight if you are interested...
OK THIS PAGE IS FOR COMMENTS AND DISCUSSIONS. I WILL READ THIS EVERY DAY. I READ EVERYTHING EVERY DAY ACTUALLY BUT THIS IS FOR THE SERIES AS A WHOLE. IF YOU WISH TO SEE THE SERIES GO A SPECIFIC ROUTE JUST COMMENT. I CAN PROBABLY ADD IT AS A SIDE STORY OR EVEN PART OF THE MAIN STORY IF I REALLY LIKE IT.
Here are some points I should make clear.
I really wanna keep the MC as just a strong character so no super OP moments.
Romance is taking a while. People seem to really like Harems but that means I need to create personalities. And I really don't like most of the generic Harem personalities.
With the implementation of Michael being in the 'Historical Society' that means lots of historical dungeon quests. If you guys have some ideas on what I should write about go ahead and scream it out.
Players need personalities. I'm only 1 man. I don't have any sort of split personalities. Michael is about as clear headed as I am. Please tell me your personalities and how you would interact with Michael. I'll try to make you as good as possible in the story :D
Again sorry for this not being a new chapter. You really think I can just write a new chapter inside of 4 hours? Well I can but not with any degree of length.
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