《Forging his own destiny》Before you start reading
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To everyone that already reads the story - ignore it, this is the message to every "reader" that drops story bitching about X to n factors. Just some clarifications, in case you can't read story synopsis.
One. I am sick. Literally. Name a disease - 80% chance that I have it (exaggerated, but I don't care). Why am I mentioning it? Because there are people in the comments, reviews section that are complaining about:
1) Grammar - to every little piece of ... nice reader that somehow skipped the message in synopsis which says " I am not a native English speaker, so my grammar may not be best (It actually is pretty horrible). First 80 or so chapters are a true butchery for eyes and I admit it. Shouldn’t I correct them then? I should. Why am I not doing it? Who knows. Maybe one day I will." - I will allow myself to put it in the way you could understand.
When I start writing, I was pretty much FUCKING DYING and start writing to distract myself. Also, back then I didn't practice my English much, definitely not "story writing" and I kept on spamming "release" button to have literally any interaction with people. I was thinking that I would stop writing after 50-100 pages or would not be able to write at all. Somehow, my condition got "just a little bit better" my will to write did not cease, and so my English improved. A little. Still, it's a rather crude language for first few dozens chaps, if you can't stand it, don't start it. AND FOR MERCY OF GOD DON'T BITCH ABOUT IT! I don't care! I will (maybe) correct it once I end the story. For now, I have to keep going. Reason for that in later part of the message.
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2) The main character being bit "dynamic" in emotions at the beginning of the story (just as gramma, a bit better in later chapters) - look point No.1 saying I am sick - people that are sick are taking pills. I was very sick, so I was taking lots of pills (around 30 a day). The one that affects the brain function too. The character was acting from cool badass to little whiny bitch basing ON MY CONDITION - how drugged I was during writing a specific chapter.
3) "The title says , but gods keep interfering and he is dragged by his nose...!!!" to answer this question I would have to spoil the story. Parts that haven't yet been written yet (with over 4000 pages written).
Now, if the 3 problems listed above are something you can't get past in first chapters, don't waste your time reading; nor mine time reading your pointless remarks. I still spend lots of time in hospitals, clinics, and/or looking for a job (writing this I am 23 hours after surgery). On my phone, I am getting notifications from the people I am writing with, that are cheering me up and are making some actually good suggestions regarding my story. I want to focus on bringing them as much joy as they are bringing me. And all these pointless, repeating bitchy comments "do not spark joy"
Comments like:
-"Lame his personality is changing look at first chapter he look cool like he doesn't care about human at all i like cold personality.."
- "So where is the blue screen? It's hard to read"
or reviews like: "
I don't really like a story with gods having active participation early in the plot.
Meeting them before you incarnate is fine and all. But gods seems to be a always there deus ex machina(which the author already admitted). But 'forging his own destiny' with gods meddling seems like a joke. Getting to lvl2 is so damn hard. Getting levels early in the story and harder later on is one of the charm of lit RPG you know.
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P.s. its an obligatory review"
are only showing how self-centered y'all are. Please. You have been warned multiple times. In synopsis. Now. Even every few chapters I am mentioning all the factors that may prove the beginning of the story hard to read.
I don't like romance-movies, so I am not watching romance-movies. If you can't stand these things listed above, then you (...)
fill empty place by yourself.
Sincerely,
~ The tilted author that waits for his stitches to be removed next week.
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