I've fighting this longer than I should because I hate authors that do this, but I'm at the point I must admit--I can't salvage this. I stopped having fun writing around the same time these chapters started sucking. So, I'll go back to the first few chapters I find what made them so much fun for me.

Hopefully by that will help me create a more enjoyable story for you. But if not, at least I'll be having fun again.

Either way, I work fast so this shouldn't take more than a week or two.

Sorry everyone.