《Vacation of a God》*Not A Chapter, Addressing Some Points*
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Ok some stuff that I need to explain. If you’re binge reading this after the Nov 1st 2017 then you can ignore this. Ill also be changing chapter 9 after I upload this. I want people to read the story without the plot holes. Juust a reminder too this is my first novel.
Again sorry
Number 1: FALLEN ANGELS
Answer: THERES NO SUCH THING! My dumbass wrote it in instead of titans sorry!!!
Changes: Fallen angel changed to titan.
Number 2: Am I down playing gods and fallen TITANS
Answer: re reading the chap it totally feels like that. I never mentioned what the “dire situation” was which prob caused this misunderstanding. It’s not going to be something minor like a demon lord trust me. The memory thing is iffy too. I don’t want him to know everything that’s going to happen so I’m trying to make memory reading taboo. Mc can do whatever the hell he wants but i want him to stick to this. I mean even if he breaks this nobody can do anything. Beside i want the mc not to have this option available as every enemy he meets he can just read their minds, i want to stay away from mind reading.
Heroes they are not going to be shocking our mc constantly. Mc will not be infatuated with them either so don’t worry about heroes becoming the main focus of the story. They have a part to play.
Changes: “In my opinion I think a fallen god or titan may be inciting this situation, assuming this is an event affecting all life on this planet.”
And
"As a god i have the power to read their memories but that is something that i prefer not to do. Reading minds is not a simple task to achieve. The mind is something delicate and can easily be damaged. So I had to figure this out by myself."
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Number 3: “Time isn’t my domain”
Answer: Of course Mc can bend time to will (Hence the 10 minutes being 1 second). Again my fault for not conveying it properly. So what I wanted to get across was that creating a whole pocket dimension was a better option than to hold time. Two reasons for this. I wanted to get at that our mc is the god creation and destruction not the god of time. But you can argue he created time etc. Second is that if he only froze time the heroes would see the summoning room and its occupants and he didn’t want that. Ill prob change this or get rid of it all together since you guys are right mc isn’t no bitch even time can’t hold him back!!!
Changes: While the others were shielding their eyes. I froze time for short while. This gave me enough time to create a pocket dimension.”
Number 4: “No, I’m surprised he missed something like that or she has hidden herself pretty well.” (About the goddess)
Answer: Ok you guys are right this is dumb. Michael is a commander of his armies. I wanted to convey that the goddess can’t be found because she isn’t there. I’ll be changing this line 100%.
Changes: “No Michael had no reports on her. I’m pretty certain she's no longer in Eremel.”
Thanks for the help everyone sorry this isn’t a chap but these points needed to be addressed!
Again i want to say thanks to:
Mastersgtjames
Squadleaderjoey
bubbl
Vorm
Thanks again
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