《Survival Recommended》Update II
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Hey guys, just started my leave, and i'm having a ton of fun doing this rewrite. I'm still fleshing out a couple things but I plan to get around 15 chapters ahead of my release schedule to allow for small edits before you guys see them.
I'm trying to make my system as internally consistant as possible, i'm essentially making character profiles for all the enemies and characters. That way i know exactly how much damage they can do/take. I could make up numbers like a lot of other authors do, but i feel that adding that level of detail makes it more enjoyable as a reader when you truly understand how dangerous something is, and are able to accurately judge something from a stat menu or damage done/taken in the exact same way you can in games. Being a LitRPG I want to make the RPG aspect more than just a gimmick that plays on blue screen dopamine hits to maintain viewership. It'll still have that, but they'll be more meaningful.
Most of what happens in the begining will still happen, just in a slightly different way and order. The same exact mechanics will be at play, but the main character will not start off as a Human/Insignificant, but as a Spawn. Races are super flexible in my series btw, evolution is based on an individual level, not a generational one. But people don't "evolve" like in re:monster or anything, it's more small mutations over time, the mechanic gets explained as the story progresses. There's a lot of similarities between Spawns and Insignificants, but for some super end game plot reasons I couldn't have Earth be assimilated into the world in the way it was (though Fallen Realms/Insignificants are still a thing and they work the same way). This also allows for more characters to be introduced into the story early on, which i think creates a richer beginning.
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