Style

I've been thinking about the way I'm writing the novel recently and I was wondering if there are any stylistic suggestions you might have, like "less descriptions, more plot", or "go to actual interactions faster". Or maybe the other way around, you want more lore and systems! And I know regular schedule is the thing you would like the most, I know, I'm trying to improve now that I'm back to normal life (I was sick, then immediately after I went on pre-planned vacation, but I'm back now).

I would be really thankful for comments, I promise not to bite and to give a like, even if you criticize.

Cover art

Art by Yona Saura, some links:

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/__yonax/

ArtStation: https://www.artstation.com/yonasaura

Careful - very NSFW. If not for RR and SH policies about cover art this would also be more.. risque.

The full body is unfortunately too small to work well as thumbnail, so I have to select best "clipped" version. Please vote on which one you would me most likely to click on.

FULL ART

TOP

MOSTLY GIRL

LEG

Bonus: A photo of tentacles I took in aquarium in Italy, when I was vacationing.

Maybe it's a goblin that was isekaid from another world into our worlds aquarium? Damn, write that down, write that down! Good novel idea!