《Flight of Icarus》Secret Hideout
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It's a secret place where you say what you think about Ace and his journey without him hearing about it and coming to give you a visit.
In reality I'm locking chapters so they stay in place so here you can say your opinions about the earlier chapters or mistakes you've noticed there. Also here I'll be asking about your opinions for things concerning my story and explaining why I'm doing what I'm doing.
The first thing I'm going to talk about is about stabbing Monthu in the back. Many have expressed their wish to see him horribly betrayed but I'm not that eager to do it. Firstly his team is a perfect cover up story. Second after they're quite well acquinted it would be much more evil to just kill him. Although it's only a game I'm sure he would cross Moral Event Horizon and I haven't decided if I really want that yet.
That brings me to the question wherenever Ace is gonna end up a Royal Assassin, Evil Overlord Behind the Scenes or some independant guy that could bring down empires and kingdoms if he felt like it through his wide knowledge of everyone's secrets and ability to assassinate anyone who would try to silence him.
It would be fun if you would share what you're thinking and choose one of these three and explain why you think it sits well with him
`:^:^)~
P.S.
For those of you that don't read random stuff when they're bored Moral Event Horizon is explained here
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/M ... entHorizon
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