《A Fantasy in Time》Inquiry
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I know I promised to not do any more notices, but I've come to realize WHY I haven't been able to produce chapters as quickly as I had at the beginning. I've read so many other great stories and learned more about where I am lacking. In addition I've had several ideas that just don't mesh as well with the current character growth. In truth, the main reason that I am even creating this story is to gain a fan base that will hopefully buy my other series that I have been writing, once I complete it. When comparing the quality of this story with my other story, it is greatly lacking. My intention is to keep the same storyline while improving the back story, character growth, gaining of abilities, and just plain logic and reason.
I will leave my current version of the story up until I finish revamping what I've written so far. If anyone wants to give some advice as to where I can improve then I would be very grateful to input and suggestions. Once I'm done with revamping all of it, then I will release one chapter (that may be made slightly smaller or larger depending on where a good breaking point is) every day until I've reached the end of what I've currently written. I know the frustration of seeing someone revamp an already decent-good story when the price is waiting, but believe me when I say that it will be MUCH better afterwards. My guess is that is will take about a month, but it may be shorter since I've already done most of the work of creating the first draft.
The Title of the improved story will be Elemental Soul
Again sorry for the disappointment of the wait. But it will be worth it.
I will regularly check the comments to my announcement to see where I can improve the story.
Also, you will know that I have begun uploading the improved story when this one disappears. It will be nice to have a fresh slate in terms of reviews and voting. :)
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"Направих нещо ужасно само защото мразя майка и. А тя?! Тя е единственото момиче, което някога ще обичам. Но...това, което направих е непростимо." Мислех си за това, когато тя ме прегърна в гръб. Усетих ръцете й да стискат кръста ми. Тя подпря главата си на рамото ми. Плачеше. Тогава чух две думи,които ме стъписаха: -Обичам те! Погледнах я. Целунах я по челото и си тръгнах.Корица:sadreamer
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