《HofN original》Chapter 9- Third Strike
Advertisement
Ratings, questions, comments, and proofreading always welcome
---------------------------------
Plat left his room early the next day, eager to get to school and talk with his friends about his progress. Leaving the stairs, he entered the garden and almost ran smack dab into Sarah. Startled, he froze and moved back out of her personal space.
"Um, uh, her Sarah. What are you doing here this early?"
Sarah smiled at him ("Was that a hint of a blush?" He thought) and said, "Good morning Platinum, sorry I didn't expect you to shoot out of there so quickly."
He cocked his head a little, "Were you waiting for me?"
"No, I always make it a habit to come out and appreciate the garden before going to school, its kind of my morning routine." She confessed to him, looking at her feet in embarrassment.
"Oh, uh, neat." He stumbled with his words, "I guess flowers are nice to look at."
She raised a delicate eyebrow at him, "Do you not like flowers?" She asked evenly.
He shook his head, "No, I love walking through them when I head down to my room. Their so pretty, rising from a little seed to grow into beauties that stretch toward the sun." He gazed at some tulips, "They even listen to my thoughts and don't comment on them."
Sarah's nodded her head quickly, "I totally agree, flowers are great listeners. I don't know how many times I've just come out here to let my heart out, and they just listen. It's nice to have someone to talk to that doesn't try to judge you for your thoughts and actions."
Plat nodded, "Yeah, flowers don't judge."
They gazed at the flowers for a while, taking in the sights and smells.. A wind suddenly blew through the garden, sending a flower up into the air. Plat ran up to it and caught it before it hit the ground. He looked down at it.
It was a beautiful golden red marigold, glowing softly in the morning sun. He gazed down at it, and then returned to Sarah to show it to her.
Advertisement
She gasped, "Oh how pretty! I feel sorry for it though, for now it'll wilt and die." Her sad face gazed down at it.
"Perhaps." Plat said slowly, "But it should be appreciated for what it is and remembered for what it was."
Sarah grinned at him, "Huh, words of wisdom from the maintenance boy, who'd ever thought." She said with a teasing edge to her voice. She grabbed the flower out of his hand, and ran to the garden exit. Turning around, she shouted, "That was fun, see you at school." She disappeared, leaving behind a confused boy and a hint of her smell, wisping on the wind.
-----------------
The walk to school was the same as yesterday, albeit without seeing Hank or his teasing ways. The school day had also gone well, and Plat sat himself down at the table with his meal as he waited for his friends. Strangely enough, he didn't see them the entire lunch period, which was odd as Hank had been in the classroom with him, but he had seemed distracted by something. Still, Plat didn't think anything of it as he packed his bag and left the academy.
The sun was starting to set when school finished, and Plat was eager to return to Everlife and continue playing. As he headed out the main gate, he saw Hank standing at the entrance, Dia standing next to him. They seemed to be in an argument, and as Plat approached, Dia left in a huff. Hank turned toward him with a smile.
"Yo Plat, what's hanging?"
Plat raised an eyebrow at him, "I don't know, where have you been all day, and why were you arguing with Dia?"
Hank sighed and waved hi hand back and forth, "We had a disagreement about some faction stuff, you know the usual." Plat nodded, that did make sense. Hank continues, "Anyways, how about you and me swing by the game-torium for some late night snacks."
"Are you crazy? It's a school night and I want to play Everlife some more." Plat said incredulously
"It's fine, it's fine man. I heard a rumor that a new android was working the food area. I really need a wing-man, come on please." Hank pleaded with his hands crossed.
Advertisement
"(Sigh) Okay okay, but just a glimpse and back to the dorms for fun." Plat glared at Hank for agreement.
He put his hands up, "I promise man, you will not regret this, lets go."
The two of them walked together in the direction of the game-torium. It was a good ten minute walk from the academy, but when they arrived the lights were out and no one was around. Plat looked around.
"Sorry Hank, I don't think we'll get to see your girl tonight. Chin up, maybe she'll be here on the weekend." Plat turned to leave, but Hank grabbed his arm. He looked over at his friend, but Hank had a stone face and was staring straight ahead.
"Hank, buddy, whats wrong?"
Hank sighed, still not turning to look at Plat, "I warned you didn't I? I really tried Plat, but you just didn't listen."
Worry starting to grow in his chest, Plat tugged at his arm, but Hank had a tight hold on it. "Bro, what's going on, your starting to freak me out."
Hank's head snapped over to look at him and he glared at Plat. "Don't call me that, I'm not your bro." He pushed Plat onto the ground. Plat handed on his side, a dull ache coming into his arm. Around the two, shapes started coming out of the shadows, wearing black masks and holding clubs.
"Hank, what's going on?" Plat cried out, real fear growing at all the masked men growing close to him.
"Plat, bro" Hank said sarcastically, "You seem to have forgot you place in this word. You are not strong, smart, or humble. You have no reason to look at any girl above your station, and you have crossed the line for the last time."
Plat looked up at his former friend with pleading eyes, "But why Hank, why?"
Hank chuckled, his form starting to disappear into the growing shadows, "I was never your friend, Splat." He sneered down at him, "This was my test to raise my Mind ranking, getting close to you and keeping my eye on your activities. Not only did you send Sarah Brighteyes an inappropriate message, you even hung out with her this morning. That's a big no-no." Hank shook his finger at Plat, "We have eyewitness statements from her friends who saw the message and your "incursion", so don't try to talk your way out of it."
"So I'm just suppose to let you guys tell me what to do!" Plat's fear being smothered by growing rage, "I can fight for anything I want, you can't stop me!"
Hank shrugged, "Your right, you can do whatever you want, that's your prerogative, but you see," He stomped his foot onto Plat's head, "You can't fight back when you're broken."
He signaled, and the black masks closed in with their clubs and knives.
They beat every inch of his body that they could reach, mostly with their clubs. The knives they used to carve words into his skin, "loser" and"worthless" and the like. They laughed at him, spit on him, told him how weak he was and would always be. Hank whispered into his ear that Reva had been to friend of Sarah's who told him, that she betrayed him for a boost in her ranking as well. He whispered how Dia had been to stubborn to join in, how he had to be "silenced" so the adults wouldn't know. He laughed at Plat making fun of all the dreams he had shared with him.
When they left, Plat lay broken on the sidewalk, the dying sun reflected in his eyes. Tear poured from him, the sense of loss and betrayal so great. The thought that Dia had tried to protect him, and had paid for it. The thought that he had never had the friends he thought he had. The fairness of the situation, and he cursed himself. He cursed the world, he cursed Hank and Reva, and he cursed himself. His weakness had done this, he was nothing, he was weak.
His last thoughts were of the curses he thought to himself, darkness finally claiming his vision, and his thoughts.
Advertisement
- In Serial16 Chapters
The Fortunate Cultivator's Treasure [to Greatness]
Oh, the Cultivator's Treasure, the most powerful group of mercenaries—and cultivators—to ever exist in the Eight Kingdoms. Legends say that they defeated the Spiritual Beast of the West with their hands tied and while drinking Daqujiu. According to Bakhtam's own accounts, they even defeated the Golden Dragon of the Southeast during Sun King's Summer Solstice. Truly an impressive feat that echoed across the Eight Kingdoms faster than Hari could say good heavens! However, at the height of its power and absurd stories, the Cultivator's Treasure disappeared. And now that the Eight Kingdoms are no more, and the Jade Immortal slowly grows his hold on the North, it's up to Hari to find the Cultivator's Treasure again and bring them back together. But do they even exist? Who knows? Follow Hari and her search for the Cultivator's Treasure, while she tries to find her place in a world filled with war. - - [I hope you all enjoy the story. From a Cultivation fan to another.] [Participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] [Also, on SpaceBattles and Scribblehub.]
8 192 - In Serial34 Chapters
The Radiant War
The human world is aflame with war. Nations clash with their neighbours, while the Kelvon Empire, bulwark of the human world, stands on the brink of civil war. The plans of the enemies of mankind to destroy human civilisation, to restore their own mastery of the world, are well on the way to success. The people of Helberion have vowed to defeat those plans, though. Peace must be restored between the various peoples of mankind so that they can combine their efforts against their true enemy. Even while her country strives to avoid conquest and defeat at the hands of their traditional enemies the Carrowmen, therefore, Princess Ardria journeys to Carrow to meet with the enemy King in an almost hopeless attempt to persuade him of the truth. All her hopes rest on the assumption that he in an unwitting dupe of the true enemy, but lurking at the back of her mind is the fear that he may be all too aware of the truth, that he may have sold out humanity for the promise of personal power. If this is true, then all that awaits her at the end of her journey through fear and danger is imprisonment and the life of a hostage to be used against her father, King Leothan. The Brigadier would help her if he could, but he and Malone, his former batman, are far away, each having their own missions to try and ensure the survival of human civilisation. Having completed his latest task, the Brigadier must race to join her, to assist and protect her, but will he reach her before she arrives at the palace of the enemy King? And will the Princess still have a country to be Princess of by the time she arrives there? Because even if Helberion manages to defeat the all conquering armies of Carrow there is another, even deadlier threat waiting in the wings against which there may be no defence... This is volume three of the Ontogeny series. If you haven't read volume one, Ontogeny, and volume Two, The Electric Messiah, you should read them first.
8 178 - In Serial27 Chapters
Arcana Legends
Naturalism is the power to use arcana to shape the world around you and it's Daimyon's time to learn how to use this power. He enrolls at West Gaia Academy to start this long journey where he meets a shy girl named Kiyonna who holds incredible hidden power and is immediately thrust into protecting her from the dangerous Shadow Walkers. On the bright side Bones "The Spirit Reaper" decided to take him under his wing and train him. He'll protect his friends at any cost unless Bones training kills him first. On Hiatus.
8 102 - In Serial16 Chapters
Fallen Blood
Born with a mysterious force inside him that makes him aware of the bad intentions others have for him, Karim has lived his life devoid of answers. As a child, being able to notice the envy, hate, jealousy, hatred and despise from others regardless of how well they hid it behind insincere smiles was too much for him. So his family, the Noble House Night, unable to understand his affliction, labeled it a mental demon and sent him to live in isolation. What is this mysterious force? Why does it reside within Karim? What lies in store for him when he eventually returns to the family?...who knows. One thing's for sure though, nothing is as it seems. Fate is at play.
8 150 - In Serial6 Chapters
Red Street Daybreak
August Samuel Hatch was born under an inauspicious pattern of stars. It's granted him what is widely considered the most unlucky of inconveniences: becoming host to a powerful but pernicious spirit that will act as his guide and protector--and one day end his life. Sairne is sworn to stand by August's side and, when the fancy strikes her, advise him, all in the service of atoning for a past life she can’t remember having committed a grave enough offense to earn her soul indentureship in the mortal realm. Bound by a celestial contract neither one can negotiate, their fates are all they've ever known. But in a city ruled by religious right and where magic runs deep as bedrock, their search for a missing friend leads them to a dark conspiracy that could transmute the very magic that binds them to their fates, and that might grant them the ultimate choice: do they save the city or save themselves? Cross-posted on Wattpad and Ao3. For fans of fantasy YA story beats if they starred adults instead, 1920s inspired setting, lots of banter, larger cast of characters, somewhat soft magic system. Completed, but being actively edited prior to posting! I'm the only captain on this ship, so mind any errors.
8 60 - In Serial29 Chapters
Stranded
Ant and Dec are stranded on a desert island.
8 208

