《Mortalis Mortal》Quick Update and Question
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Howdy Again Cool Peeps!
It's been a month. Wow. I'm not dead yet!
Anyways, first off I want to say thank you to everyone for all the support. That's really awesome of y'all and I really appreciate it.
Sorry for taking a month to write a reply.
Second, I'm thinking of restarting Mortalis Mortal to get back into it, since it has been a while and the writing itch has returned in force. I'd be updating and rewriting the story in my free time, so it won't be super quick, but it would eventually move forward again. It'll also change a little or a lot, depending... I don't know. Or I could try something new entirely with a more BadA** character. Though I bet a lot of you want me to stick to Mortal?
Third, the game. Well, Mortalis isn't going to be a game for the time being. Instead, I've got a dev team of three close friends together and we're working on another game, a Choose Your Own Text Adventure RPG thing that's coming along nicely. I've got the engine up and I think it's really going to become something special.
It's a sci-fi fantasy taking place in the far future and will have plenty of awesome. Imagine if Bethesda, Bioware, and Square designed a turn-based semi-open-world RPG mixed with a choose your own adventure Japanese Light Novel. Yep... it's kinda weird to think about, but the demo I made is actually pretty fun. Once I get the full 'okay' from my team, I can post it for those interested to test out (might take a little while because some of my team aren't too sure about publicizing the mechanics just yet).
Anyways, I hope everyone's doing well and enjoying Summer! So my only question... should I snuff Mortalis and write something else? Should I do a reboot of Mortalis? Or should I just do a rewrite to make the story so far just better and edited? I'm pretty open right now... so comments would be definitely appreciated 
Peace,
GG554
P.S. I was thinking of writing Para Bellum. In my free time a while ago I made its Cover. Gives a good idea of the feel the story will have. It's sci-fi and yes, the MC is pretty kick-butt.
Spoiler: Spoiler
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