《WTF I'm a Dungeon!? (Dropped)》Changes!
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This chapter will list out all the changes done to each chapter in Spoiler Box Form. I will aim to rewrite two chapters a week however some of the early chapters need more than just an edit so don't expect me to be constant here. Whenever I finish rewriting something I will release it then put all the changes here. Mainly for you guys who want to follow the rewrite but can't be bothered rereading it to keep up with the changes.
Novel Description
Changes.
Just as an example.
The Sacred War between Order and Chaos is nearing its end. Countless die as they fight the final battle. After an eternity of war, Order has triumphed, sacrificing much to stop a Supreme Magic from Chaos to be cast. Order celebrates as Chaos is forced into the outskirts of the world.
However, there are rarely winners in war.
The magic was cast, its power was only redirected. It’s power transcending dimensions and finally, its strength greatly weakened, destroys a classroom of students. Their souls sucked into a small crack created by the magic, not large enough for a living thing to pass, but enough for a few souls to leak out of that worlds reincarnation cycle.
This is the story of a dungeon, who was inexplicably born with one of these souls.
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A dungeon. A place where abominations wander its endless corridors, its halls filled with the haunted screams of some hapless adventurer, deadly traps lie at every corner ready to claim your life at a moments notice. If you can succeed these trials then you have a chance of obtaining wealth, fame and women. If you manage to return as a whole that is.
Unfortunately, none of that fits our main character. Who's still figuring out how to make mushrooms explode. Maybe in a few hundred chapters or when the author gives up and gives you an early half-assed ending will you get to see him like that.
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What? You don't like getting an early half-assed ending? Have you even read Bound Dungeon? Hear that wires12! I'm calling you out! Complete your novel so I can have meaning in my life again!
*Ahem* Getting back on track, yeah this was supposed to be some funny call out to a great novel but now I am just sitting here awkwardly.
Please read my novel. (T_T)
Prologue
New Prologue
Now split into 4 parts.
Better explanation of power ceilings/skills/classes
War is no longer about Order vs Chaos but the Beastmen trying to survive ethnic cleansing
Mainly using it to do some world building
New chapter 1
FILLER TEXT
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