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Hey folks, I was wondering at how you all feel about my writing so far, the content too. It would encourage me to get some feedback and suggestions in the comments below! Maybe there's some issue on how my chapters are presented, maybe it's the pace, maybe it's my style. I really need some feedback here! The lack of them feels disheartening so far. I can't improve my work without understanding different perspectives and opinions you know! I'll respond accordingly as best as I can!
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