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Hey folks, I was wondering at how you all feel about my writing so far, the content too. It would encourage me to get some feedback and suggestions in the comments below! Maybe there's some issue on how my chapters are presented, maybe it's the pace, maybe it's my style. I really need some feedback here! The lack of them feels disheartening so far. I can't improve my work without understanding different perspectives and opinions you know! I'll respond accordingly as best as I can!
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Sacrifices
Two hundred years ago, Humanity nearly wiped itself out in an apocalyptic civil war. When all was said and done, when the worlds stopped burning and the screams of the dying were finally quieted, The Terran Union staggered out of the ashes to ensure that such a conflict never took place again. Severe restrictions upon artificial inteligince, weapons, and naval production were imposed, technologies were purposefully lost, all traces were eradicated and monuments to the fallen errected. Now however, a new threat has arisen. Outnumbered and outgunned humanity faces a terrible choice, what sacrifices are they willing to make to win, and will it be enough? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Taking place through the "eyes" as it were of dozens of charachters, bear witness to the unfolding war from both sides of the trench as politicians, soldiers, and AI engauge in a no holds bar struggle for survival and political supremacy which plays out over the galactic stage.
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Supreme Evolution System
Working hard is normal for every one of us and with short paid vacations we all want to spend it to the max right? that was exactly what Alexander thought after finally getting his paid vacation after countless years of working hard at his mundane job. Deciding to take a little nap under a big tree to celebrate his time off was his decision but life can be cruel and Weird Lawnmowers sometimes can be life-changing. But death is not always the end with a cold voice in his head saying "Supreme evolution system initiated" his life has just started.
8 157 - In Serial27 Chapters
You broke me first [Taekook] ✔️
Jungkook is the nerd of college. Taehyung is the popular boy from college. And yet somehow they are a couple. That changes one day when Taehyung decides to dump Jungkook in front of the entire college and tell him he was never in love with him. And that Jungkook is just an ugly fag. Feeling humiliated and hurt, Jungkook decides to change college.But what if they meet again after two years? Is Taehyung going to apologize to Jungkook? Does Jungkook want revenge on Taehyung for what he did to him? Or does Jungkook still have feelings for Taehyung?Finished on; 10/03/2022
8 210 - In Serial10 Chapters
BNHA Truth or Dare
1-A decides to have a sleepover at Momo's house but what happens when they play a game of 'truth or dare'? TodoDeku, MomoJirou, KiriBaku, Tsuraraka.Very GayNo SmutOnly Fluff, but swearing :PCHARACTERS NOT MINE~completed~
8 74 - In Serial19 Chapters
My Sonnets and Poetry
A collection of Sonnets by yours truly. They follow the iambic pentameter thing and the pattern abab, cdcd, efef, gg. Kind of like Shakespearean Sonnets, but their my own. As of May 7, 2013, I've added in random poetry as well.
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Spider-Verse reacciona a Ultimate Spider-Man
Spider-Mans de otras realidades (Tobey, Andrew, 616, PS4, Spectacular y 90's) son reunidos junto a varias de sus personas cercanas para reaccionar a las aventuras de una versión alterna y más joven que ellos.
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