《Carus - Libertas》Twenty-nine
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"Mouse, there's something approaching from the northwest." Harmon was one of the recruits who had stayed back at the settlement. He had grown up on a farm and had some basic knowledge of growing, planting and harvesting. He had only signed up to get away from an increasingly difficult situation at home where his wife had left him for his brother. Only she hadn't left, she was still in the house, as was his brother. It was stupid and spur of the moment. Plus he had drunk away his sign on credits before he even reached Carus. The time in sim for basic training had given him the space he needed to put things in perspective. He recognised the opportunity he was being given here though, the chance to set up again and live a new life, he had definitely landed on his feet.
"Donkey. Why are you telling me?" Mouse replied.
"Not happening Mouse. No. You'll have to think of a new one." Harmon tried to get annoyed as Mouse tried his newest nickname. "I'm telling you because Captain Thompson left you in charge."
Mouse remembered not to activate his comm as he swore under his breath. "That bugger. Leave me in charge will he?" He was currently on top of the command tower with Ty setting the frame for the new level.
"Ty, go check out what's bothering Donkey." Mouse refused to give up the name yet. With a surname like Bray it was perfect. Ty raised an eyebrow and decided not to make a comment. Instead he headed down the ladder they had installed through the Crystal room and down again out of the building.
"On my way Harmon. What can you see?" He called over the comms. They were on an open channel so soon had Aleena and Ginge wanting to know too.
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"Looks like a cross between a motorbike and a quad. Coming in quick, it was just a dust trail before and now I can tell what it is." Harmon replied, grateful that the others weren't picking up the nickname.
"Our first visitor then? What do we do?" Harmon had been left in the northwest tower on guard. They had spotted a couple of grubs but nothing more. The interesting thing they had found about the processed material from the ziggurat was that the grubs didn't try and break through it and if built high enough they were unable to climb over it. So they only really needed to watch two spots where there were breaks in the wall to allow the troop carrier in and out. Other than grubs and Swarm they weren't expecting anything else to appear so there was no plan for a visitor.
"I'll go to the gate, you stay in the tower." Ty said
"Can I come too?" Asked Ginge. "It's boring lugging all this stuff around for you and Mouse."
"No, I need those panels ready so we can get on with this building." Said Mouse. "Let Ty work out what's going on."
The comms went quiet as they waited for the newcomer to arrive. The vehicle swung round to the western gate slowing as it approached.
"Hi?" Said Ty as the three wheeler deftly navigated the ditches and walls that were designed to slow the approach of any Swarm. The man riding jumped off his bike, pulled off his goggles and swept his hands back through his hair.
"You. Recruit. Where is Jeddiah Thompson?" He barked, pointing at Ty.
"Umm. Captain Thompson is out on a mission." Ty stammered. He didn't know how to react as the man stormed past him into the base. "Sorry, where are you going?" He found himself following after the man, completely on the back foot.
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"Well you obviously aren't in charge. Jed has more sense than that. So I'm finding who is in charge." Oberon was tired, hungry and dirty from his travels. He was confused at the layout in front of him to the left were tidy rows of one-man tents grouped in fives. To the right were one larger and two small buildings leaving the way clear for him to walk straight forward aiming at the door into the command tower of the settlement.
"Uh, Mouse. You might want to come down." Ty said over the comms. He continued to follow, not knowing what else to do. The man's eyes brightened in recognition as Slim and Mouse walked out of the door in front of him.
"Ah, excellent. Ms Hui, where is Jed? It's important." Oberon watched the complex chain of emotions that showed in her face.
"Oberon, you better come in and take a seat." She said stepping backwards into the command tower. "Mouse, get something to eat and some coffee."
Ty was surprised to see Mouse step out the way and go find some supplies rather than make a joke or quip in reply. He waited looking at the closed door in front of him until he heard shouting from inside. With no idea what else to do and no way back up to the top of the command tower he jogged in the direction Mouse had disappeared, hoping that he might be able to find out what was going on.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. 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I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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