《Re: Rabbit Eyes [Draft]》Update
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Hey guys, Sin here! Just letting everyone know that I'll be starting a rewrite. I'm going into the plot with a more clear narrative in mind. Skills, abilities, schemes and direction will all be more streamlined and less convoluted. A large majority of the backstories, glossaries and places will stay the same so you don't have to worry too much about it!
More like, it's the simplification of White as a character in order to make his personality more bearable at the earlier stages. The origin of his 'powers' have also changed, but the premise remains Grimdark.
What about this story then? ...Hm, I guess they'll be used as material for the backbone of my rewrite.
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Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20887/re-rabbit-eyes-rewrite
Thanks for sticking around! And I appreciate all the support that I get~
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