《Last Grace: The Apex of Another World》Future of the story, rewrite and revamp (?)
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I would have written three if not four chapters more since the last chapter if I have had not gotten stuck on keeping track of the many stats, it is draining and takes too long hours because I have to check each chapter update the place where I keep track of the info and then revamp the info since it was a while since it was last updated while adding the progress in the latest chapter... it is tiring.
So that is what I am going to consider heavily, I also dislike how the MC had a ton of chances of getting OP using the system shop a chance he should not have had.
I want the path to be clear, and not for it to take who knows how long to churn out a chapter and thinking about how I could have done this story better in a few major ways is... demotivating to keep on going with a flawed story like I am now. I don't hate the mentality of the MC or anything like that. I also know no story will be perfect.
Didn't want to keep you guys in the dark.
Sincerely the author dude who is busy practicing his art skills while he ponders the ways a rewrite could go.
I am thinking of making him appear on earth... might be more relatable? I might lack the skill but it would make for an entertaining read. Might just be me...
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