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Hi everyone,
It's been a while hasn't it? Lately, I've been really discouraged by the comment's I've been getting in the reviews. And l thought taking a break might do my self-esteem. (It helped a little). I've also been quite unhappy with a lot of things on this site that I won't mention here.
Anyway, I came to formally notify you all that I've decided to quit writing on RoyalRoad.
I don't think people realize this, but the hardest thing for me when writing is having the confidence to write a story that I've dedicated my heart into and when I read all of the recent reviews either bashing on the story or telling me how horrible something is about it. It is pretty demoralizing. As it doesn't even tell me how to improve. Just quibbles on how they didn't like that something happened.
In hindsight perhaps the greatest mistake I've ever made was to post my fiction on this website. I've not only ruined my chances at getting it published due to first publishing rights, but I've essentially given a great story away for FREE at the expense of being treated on the internet as an idiot.
If people think this story is so terrible that the last 10 ratings have been 0 stars. Then it isn't worth posting any more chapters. And it isn't worth keeping it here for people to continually bash on it.
I'll be online for a few hours to maybe chat with anyone who is online, but this is really it. I won't be coming back here for many months if at all. I just wanted to vent some of my frustrations and also say thank you to my readers. I did have a lot of fun here. Even if it was only for a short time.
I've talked briefly with Wing(Admin) to delete my fiction. So if you guys don't see this story in a few months. Just a heads up on what happened.
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The Oresteia (Modernized)
All three of the great Greek Tragedians have written plays about the bloody chain of murder and revenge within the royal family of Argos. Yet theirs is in fact not a story of tragedy, but rather one of redemption. As they move from darkness to light, from rage to self-governance, from primitive ritual to civilized institution, their spirit of struggle and regeneration becomes an everlasting song of celebration to be heard throughout the ages. Forming a discourse set against the emergence of Athenian democracy out of a period of chaos and destruction, the Orestian plays are compelling stories of the tensions between our obligations to our families and the laws that bind us together as a society. In the beginning, we witness how a king’s decision to sacrifice his daughter and turn the tide of war inflicts lasting damage on his family, culminating in a terrible act of retribution. In the aftermath of regicide, we behold how a son must set out to avenge his father’s death by committing a most egregious sin. In the end, the sinner is tormented by supernatural powers that can never be appeased, but ultimately finds redemption and ends the curse on his house once and for all. Woven through all of this is the story of a friendship so close that it elevates itself to brotherhood - Where the blood of the covenant is shown to be indeed thicker than the water of the womb. In this very brief twelve-chapter modern rendition of the Orestian plays, I have chosen to place my focus mainly on the lives of the characters Orestes and his best friend Pylades. The chapters, each around 2000-2500 words, are split up evenly between them in first-person narrative. I hope that you will come to enjoy reading this heartwarming story, but more importantly, that you see how the conflicts portrayed in the story, whether human or institutional, are still much very relevant to our societies today. Note on Sources: The details of this story is very loosely based on The Oresteia by Aeschylus. And I mean very loosely. Other sources that I referenced for detail and inspiration are Mythology by Edith Hamilton, Electra by Sophocles, and Iphigenia in Tauris by Euripides. You may also find that I have quoted some of these works, and others (such as Shelley's Ozymondaeus), without citations (average of 1-2 such quotes per chapter). I did this because I do not have the ability to describe certain scenes nearly as well as some of those writers. If you read a particularly beautiful piece of prose here, chances are it's probably stolen lol. Also, I wrote this during the summer between my high school senior year and my college freshmen year. It was the summer of 2020, and being quarantined apparently gets my creative side out lol.
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A Diver's Tale
Henry has spent all of his life fearing the Incursion Zones and the monsters that lurk there, but now he has a chance to change his fate and become an Adventurer. -------------- Join me as we explore the world of Dungeon Divers. A series that lives everyday in my head and when given the opportunity comes to your screens! I am currently writing during my lunch breaks at work and doing some rough editing after my 1 hour commute home. I hope you all enjoy Henry's adventures as much as I am enjoying writing them.
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The Mischief of Rats
Dru is being hunted. Hunted like a rat through the bowels of the space station. He needs to find out what Commander Goul has done to all the kids that have gone missing. Tired, cold and so terribly hungry, the inside of a decaying hulk is no place for a ten year old. But he has to go on. He has to find his best friend, Gar, or die trying.
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Sunfire - A Starfall Chronicle (COMPLETED DRAFT)
In the frontier lands of the north, a young mage has set out upon a quest for vengeance. She is joined in her journey by the two unlikely protectors of a small village, who are hopeful that by helping her they can remove a dangerous threat to their home. However, unbeknownst to them, the challenges and secret truths of their journey are far greater than any in the group are prepared to handle. Note: This novel is draft here on Royal Road. Some parts may be lower quality than expected of a published books, and other parts may change in the final version. It is also the prequel to an already written book (Sunchild), and thus some things may not be explained/be confusing without the context of the main book (i.e. this book is not a walkthrough of the world and does not explain things very much). Cover Credit - https://www.wallpaperflare.com/nature-sun-sunlight-winter-snow-trees-pine-trees-forest-wallpaper-chnem/download/1360x768
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A Path to Crown
A young man, who lived a horrible life, died, killed by the man he once admired. But life didn't forsake him and granted him a second chance on life.Plagued by his past, living with low self-esteem, can he succeed like this? Will he change to fight his inner demons, or will he fall at their hands?--------------------------------------------------Every Journey will begin with a single step into the unknown. We walk our path to reveal the darkness covering our Journey.At the end of our path, we will see a crown, the crown we created with our own hands. We shall crown ourself as Kings. Now is the time to decide if it will be a shabby crown full of regrets, or a glorious one! Choose, how will your's be?We can be proud we have walked our path in a way we desired.There shall be no fear of death, only the fear of the regrets we have at the end of our path.
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Seven Realms Saga Book 1 - Last Passage
“Travelling into Iodigar is surprisingly easy,” the Ligtyr added. “All you need to do is to die.”The Vren, once creatures of myth and legend, now roam freely across the land, killing all they find in their path.Kollyn, a member of the Realmatic Keepers, is sent into Iodigar where the souls of the dead roam. There he must find the reason behind this sudden appearance of the Vren and a way to restore the natural order of life.It is a journey into the unknown during which Kollyn must come to terms with his past, his power and the role he will have to play in the world-defying events that are inevitably on the horizon.Last Passage, the first installement in the Seven Realms Saga, is a finished novella that can be bought both in ebook and paperback format on Amazon. For those who wish to finish the story already or be in possession of a physical copy, feel free top purchase it. I will be posting 2 chapters every week on RoyalRoad while I finish of the second installement, Scholars Of The Script.Buy on Amazon
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