《The Oddity: The One Who Does Not Belong》Author's Note/Help?
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Hello everyone. I felt like I've been stagnating. [th_015_orz-v2.gif]
It's been 16 or so chapters since my last post like this. I'd like to ask for any constructive criticism. The people who are reading this might not be much but it would be good to hear a little noise. I'm not saying that I'd stop writing if no one replied to this thread but I'd like to improve my story.
I don't plan on trying to force you guys to comment but it would be helpful. Also, I plan on fully finishing this story. If I don't post for a month then you can assume I lost both arms or I died, of heat stroke. [th_083_v2.gif] Our AC just died but it's no real problem as fall is here!
Yep, so any comments would be appreciated. I'll be adding more author's notes to my chapter posts, if I remember to that is. Simple dislikes or likes are welcome too. Do you dislike this character? Why? etc.
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