《Tales of Astora: Legacy (FINISHED)》Discussion post 2 (NOT A CHAPTER)
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Hello everyone! J
Before I say anything, this is a Discussion post as a preparation for me for the second book of this series (book 1 in done in term of storyline and will finish somewhere between chapter 110-120 I hope before the end of August).
As I have said in a few posts, the second book is a direct sequel of the current story but with a new MC. Who do you think this character might be? Tell me who you think it might be! (yes it is one of the characters that will or have already appeared in book 1, either mentioned by a known character or we have seen that person)
As for the reason of this post, it is to measure the popularity of each character so far. Depending on the story goes and your opinion, this might have an effect on the story. It is regretful but in order to have new characters coming in book 2, old ones need to go.
Since there are too many of them (major and minor), I won’t be making a poll but instead ask you to give me your favorite character(s) and the reasons why. Rest assured! Just because a character doesn’t have many vote, it doesn’t mean he or she won’t appear in book 2. This is simply guidance for me to know which character is the most successful and most importantly what makes you like them so much in order to help me making even better characters. Therefore I would appreciate if you tell me the reason for your choice in the comments.
I understand it’s a lot of hassle I am asking but in order to improve my novel, it’s not just about me thinking of new ideas or has better grammar. The readers also can voice their opinions to help me make this series even better by telling me what is good or bad in the most objective way possible.
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Again thank you for all those who have continued to read my novel this far! If you don’t mind, please leave comments or reviews as this is the only way I know I am going in the right direction! But mostly it’s because I enjoy reading your opinions J.
PS: Another chapter should be available later today so look forward to it! ^^
Also this is an open discussion so if there are details about story you wish me to clarify or simple talk about it, don't hesitate! (no spoiler though)
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