《Dual Nature - A Harry Potter/Percy Jackson crossover》Another Question
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Thanks for giving me your opinon on the last question. I'll let him keep everything he got. I have a new one.
I am going to change the first two chapters, because apparently they just suck. Should I come up with something completely new? Or is there something specific that is just bad in those two chapters??
I was thinking to just have him just start out in camp, and have flashbacks instead. The only annoying part would be that I might have to go back and change stuff in some other chapters.
This post and the previous one will go down once the new chapter is up.
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