《Black God of Lightning.》This novel has been dropped
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If you want to find out what happens at the end read the last paragraph.
I'm dropping this novel because I have made a series of mistakes during this novel and the only way to correct them is to change the whole story which I have no intention of doing. So I have decided to rather scratch the entire story. Also this story will never really get famous. I do have your readers but the number that comes back to read is not a lot. I want to start over and hopefully, I can do better. I'm not looking for a bestseller...yet. Just looking for more than 200 readers. So I can tabulate my growth as a writer. Thank you.
Layla Palmer and Lucas get back together I'm sure that was fairly obvious ( They should have never split. One of my mistakes. Sacrificing drama for plot.) After they get together word gets out that demons are disguising themselves as humans. After a thorough search, Daruin Ashbinder and Abigail Ashbinder are discovered to be demons in disguise. They were sent by the Demon King to spy on the humans in a high place as they are both the King and Queen of Pantelan. The white Kingdom. It is also discovered that the beer has been contaminated. The beer had the effect of weaking the mana channels of those who drink it. One of the demons plans to weaken the humans to make them easier to kill when war breaks out. Later war breakouts. Humans win with Lucas and Layla's help by here Lucas is a C rank Battle mage capable of casting lightning. There are stages of lightning blue white purple and lastly black. Each being stronger than the other. After the war, Lucas and Layla leave the city and go do adventuring work. As they journey they meet other people who came from another world and Lucas creates a party of otherworlders and he leads the group with Layla as his equal. Later in the story, Lucas finds out he is not an otherworlder like he thinks instead he was born in this world.
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When Lucas first transferred to this world the system said, " Alien removal plan" meaning he the system recognized him as a foreigner to Earth. Once Lucas discovers this he sets to go and find the Ancient civilization of Fulgora. Where he meets his real parents. They tell him they sent him to Earth to protect him for they are currently in hiding from their enemies. Enemies from another world. The entire civilization of Fulgura is black and are all lightning wielders. However, none of them can use the strongest form of all Black Lightning which Lucas learns to use and uses to kill the boss of the people his family is afraid of. Once that war is over Lucas becomes the King of Fulguro. But he decides to bring his people out of hiding and into the real world with the other races. From there he creates an empire with all races able to join his Kingdom even other species. His KIngdom becomes a utopia and the one beside him all the time. His Queen is none other than Layla Palmer. Not a harem.
Hope that satisfies you as much as it can.
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