《The Immortal Mortal》THIS IS JUST A POLL
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Our MC doesn't really have a set goal other than "reaching a high realm where he can live with people that can essentially live forever" and finding a way to die. They aren't immortal like he is but simply can live forever on the condition that they aren't killed. Also, he 'thinks' that reaching Nascent Soul will allow him the chance to die when he's ready but obviously doesn't know for sure. So, there isn't a goal about what cultivation level to reach or kill someone super powerful or something else one would see in other novels. Because of this the MC just kind of learns the minimal amount of knowledge about the world and culitvation that he needs at the time since he doesn't have a set goal to work and learn towards.
I think this caused some people to not fully understand parts of the world/cultivation system since our MC doesn't understand it either, confusing some readers who prefer structure. So, do you guys want me to make a page where you can review the cultivation system? I won't fill it out with immense details, only a basic description of each level and the realm it's in. Once the MC learns about a specific cultivation realm then you'll naturally learn the details yourself. Sort of like a super basic guide to use as a reference if you get confused or prefer a bit of structure when reading cultivation sytem novels. Naturally if you don't want anything spoiled, you don't have to read the page about the cultivation system. I'll leave the poll up for 24 hours. Posted on 3/6/2021 @ 3:35PM EST
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