《In the Naruto world (1)》Chapter 30 Luna's new powerful move
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“I WILL KILL YOU!!!” (Luna)
Was all Luna was yelling to Danzo, as she tried to kill him with her giant scythe. She was too focused on her revenge, that she probably hasn’t noticed that a group of ninjas were chasing us, I don’t think she has even noticed that I was literally inside her susanoo form.
This is what happens when hatred clouds your mind. She’s even starting to act like Sasuke after the Uchiha massacre.
Even though Danzo was being chased by her, his face was still calm and full of confidence. He tried his best to come up with a plan to attack us and excape, but he was worried that I would be able to read his mind, which I am doing right now.
“5th GATE!, GATE OF LIMIT OPEN!!!” (Guy) Yelled and then he emmited a bunch of power that I have probably never felt before.
I was always a huge fan when it comes to the 8 gates, but right now I am scared shitless from this move. I should know better than anyone that this move is extremely powerful. Even Madara was almost done by this technique, had it not been for the huge strain it put on Guy’s body, then Guy would have won that battle.
Back on topic. Guy launched a huge dynamic kick to us, and the Susanoo was sent far to another location in the leaf village. How powerful must his kick be to launch a huge incomplete Susanoo like it was nothing.
"GET AWAY FROM ME!!!” (Luna) yelled to Guy as she stood up again, this time her Susanoo was taking more of an complete appearance. It must be her rage that is making her stronger, therefore making her Susanoo form even closer to its completion.
Her voice sounded distorted, it almost sounded like a demons yell. Meaning that neither Guy nor Kakashi recognized her voice at all.
She then sliced the place where Guy stood, only to have her weapon dissapear in thin air.
“KAMUI!!!” (Kakashi) revealed his awakened mangekyo sharigan, then used the Kamui to make Luna’s Scythe completely dissapear from the face of the earth.
“Let’s hurry up Kakashi, we can’t let this thing go on any longer. And besides, I don’t know how much longer I can keep this form.” (Guy) said with a huge smile that showed his white teeth.
“I agree, but there is something familiar about this thing, I can’t put my finger on it.” (Kakashi)
Kakashi had spent a whole week with Luna and Sasuke, so he kinda grew fond of her. That’s why he was able to feel something familiar about her Susanoo.
"LEAF HURRICANE!” (Guy) shouted then once again landed a huge kick on Luna’s Susanoo form, which destroyed a few houses and food stands.
“I think you’re causing more damage to this city, Guy.” (Kakashi) slammed his palm on his forehead because of Guy’s recklessness.
Things look really bad for me and Luna. She’s starting to take damage, and I can’t do shit inside her Susanoo form. I can’t get out of her Susanoo form, and I can’t even heal her because her Susanoo form has made itself some kind of barrier around her. So I can’t touch her at all, and I need to touch her directly to heal her.
You could always give her Susanoo form some of your chakra, it might give Luna the power to defeat Guy and Kakashi.
I could, but it will also mean that she will cause more damage to the city. I can sense the people very far away. Naruto is unconcious for some reason, Kat is on our tail as well as a bunch of angry ninjas. Sasuke is being led to somewhere safe, as well as several other citizens. That goes the same for the other Genin like Hinata, TenTen, Lee etc. As long as they’re a bit of a distance from us, only will I give Luna some of my chakra.
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It might seem destructive, but Danzo is getting away.
Damn! You’re right. We can’t fight Kakashi, Guy and Danzo at the same time, they’re too much even for me. What can I do.
At this moment, Luna’s Susanoo stood up even more complete than before. Almost her entire body seemed to be more of a human, instead of a human exo-skeleton. Only her limbs were still a bit skeletal.
She made another scythe appear and attacked the dou, and also damaging a big part of Konoha.
This is very bad. Luna will lose this fight, and Danzo will get away. Not only that but the other ninjas will be here any moment.
Ah screw it! I’ll give her some of my chakra. Hopefully this won’t be as catastrophic as I think it will be.
Then some of my chakra chanelled onto her Susanoo form, and now her body was now covered in a pink, purple, and blue chakra.
(The pink and purple chakra came from Luna’s Susanoo, the blue chakra is from Chris’s own chakra.)
“It’s getting stronger?!. Guy! We need to take care of it now!.” (Kakashi) said now a bit frightened by the sudden increase in power, that the lady Susanoo emmited.
“On it! DYNAMIC ACTION!” (Guy)
This move is when Guy deliveres a barrage of punched and kicks to the opponent. He appeared behind us with his amazing speed, and then punched and kicked as hard as he could. With these many hits, you would think that we would be injured, but you’re wrong.
It didn’t even faze us one bit. If it was 5 minutes ago then Luna’s Susanoo would have suffered a lot, but now that i’m helping, her defense has increased on a whole new level.
Can’t you tell them that you’re both inside her, and that Danzo is the real enemy?
I can’t blue screen. Remember that I can’t get out of Luna’s Susanoo form, and all of the Susanoo’s actions are being controlled by Luna only.
So tell her to stop.
Her mind is only fixated on revenge for Danzo, she doesn’t even realize that she is fighting Guy and Kakashi.
And how exactly do you know this?
I read her mind, it’s filled with hatred, revenge, kill, etc.
Ah! I see.
Where was I again, oh right. Wait!!! I can feel another presence, it feels strangely familiar, and powerful...
Luna ignored Guy’s attacks and then kicked Guy like he was a soccer ball. It launched him far to the other side of the village. Guy could have avoided that attack easily, but the 8 gates technique is already taking it's side effect, and it put a huge strain on Guy’s body.
“Shit! Looks like it’s all up to me.” (Kakashi)
Kakashi then made the chidori appear in his hand, and charged towards Luna. He couldn’t think of much to do. He knows that the Susanoo has a very high defense, and most of his jutsus are mostly C-rank and B-rank. Meaning that these kind of jutsus are useless against her defense.
He could use Kamui to teleport the Susanoo far away, but the Susanoo is too big and powerful for him to use Kamui.
(Okay this might seem like B.S. to you guys, but Kakashi never used his Kamui on huge foes like the tailed beasts, ten tails, etc. So I guess that there is limit on what Kakashi can teleport with his Kamui)
The only move he has right now is his chidori, he knows very well that his Chidori is usless against her Susanoo, but he needs to stall for time until back up arrives.
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Luna saw Kakashi’s incoming attack, and without showing a hint of expression for her teacher, she raised her scythe really high and was ready to cut Kakashi is half.
I couldn’t stand to watch this anymore, and it was at this moment that I came up with a great idea. I used the chakra that enveloped her Susanoo’s body, and stopped it’s arm from killing Kakashi.
Seeing that her arm had come to a complete stop, Luna tried to locate me everywhere. What she doesn’t know is that I am inside her Susanoo.
I know I said that there was some kind of protective shield around her, but I can probably break it if I force myself onto it. I was afraid that it might possibly damage her, but if I don’t do this, then she might really kill someone innocent. And god knows how she’ll react once she finds out.
And also, just in case you were wondering, it’s not a good idea to absorb her chakra, or force yourself into it.
Why?!
Because she could die from it. If you were to absorb her chakra, she’ll die from a sudden shock. She has suffered too much mentally, and a little bit more damage to her brain and she’ll really die. And you won’t be able to save her with your healing Kekkai Genkai if she’s dead.
That makes sense, but why can’t I forced myself on her forcefield thingy.
She has not fully mastered the Susanoo, it’s only been like 10 minutes since she has awakened her mangekyo Sharigan. Meaning that her body still isn’t used to the sudden changes, so if you were to break through her shield, the damage she’ll take will be too much for her body to take, and she’ll die as well
Dammit! Well what can I do to stop her without killing her.
I don’t know either. It would be best for you to hurry up, even now as we speak her body is suffering a lot. I say she has about 10 or so minutes till she drops dead.
From what?!
Either chakra exhaustion, or from too much pain. Sorry Chris, but I don’t know what else to say other than to hurry.
And I can’t even use any seals inside the Susanoo, why is my luck so bad.
“LUNA! HEAR ME I AM HERE!” (Chris) I tried my best to reach her, I can’t do anything to her that will damage her, so hopefully she hears me and snaps out of her trance.
She doesn’t react one bit, then launched another attack on Kakashi. I once again subdue her arm, and restricted her whole Susanoo form.
She tries to break free with her strength, but she can’t even move an inch.
“Luna! Hear me, break free from your rage or you’ll die!.” (Chris)
“I WILL KILL YOU!!!” (Luna) screamed in rage.
Not good, not even my voice is getting to her.
I don’t have much of a choice, looks like I need to force myself into her shield. Either I do nothing but yell and wait until she dies, or I break into her shield quickly then use my healing Kekkai Genkai before she dies. If I act fast enough, I can heal her before she dies.
As soon as I touched her shield, she made a 180 degree turn. She now has realized that I was inside her. Both our eyes met, and I could have sworn that I saw a bit of her sanity in her, even her rage subsided a bit from seeing me.
I thought wrong, it wasn’t long until her rage once again exploded at the thought of her family dying at the hands of Danzo. So I applied a lot of chakra in my hands to give me enough strength to break in her shield.
Then the most weirdest thing happened to me, my chakra vanished completely?! I couldn’t even feel a bit of my chakra inside me. I turned to face Luna once again, and her eyes were bleeding. It looked like she was crying, but instead of tears it was blood.
I now knew what happened. This was her mangekyo powers, she has the ability to completely negate chakra from a person. I sincerely never would have thought she had such powerful move, or the fact that it would be used on me. She didn’t even recognize who I am.
For the first time since I got here, I felt helpless.
What about the time in the land of waves…
I meant that this is the second time I felt helpless.
Then what about the time you fought Orochimaru, or when you were kidnapped by Ita-
Blue screen! Too soon…
Luna then ignored me and Kakashi, then headed straight for Danzo’s direction. Kakashi was still a bit shocked to see what happened, so much that he failed to notice that his chidori bounced back from Luna’s Susanoo. He thought he would die, but for some reason it looked like it was being restricted by a blue chakra. It was too weird to process, that he failed to notice many things.
Luna was able to feel Danzo’s presence from far away so she tried to go after him, and just at this moment, a bunch of thick roots surrounded her Susanoo form, and restricted it’s movements.
And out of nowhere, appeared a figure with a wooden costume. It was definitely Kat, she appeared first before anyone since she was more familiar with the village, and the fact that she used her wood Kekkai Genkai to travel a bit faster than most people.
“Luna, Chris! Are you two alright in there.” (Kat) yelled in her deep batman voice, she sounded cool in that voice.
When Luna saw her figure, she remembered the scene of when they fought Orochimaru, and when Luna and me promised to keep her Kekkai Genkai a secret.
Her mangekyo sharingan went back to the normal stage, but it was soon back to it’s awakened stage and her powers surged up one more time.
It was good because I felt that my chakra was back, when her sharigan went back to it’s normal stage, it must have somehow returned my chakra to me. I used this time to force myself onto Luna’s forcefield thingy fast. I had to do it fast before Luna negates my chakra again.
Feeling that someone entered her force field thingy, she turned around to see in my direction, probably to use her negate attack on me, it was what I was expecting.
I first then made a paper with the power of creation, and quickly added a seal on top of it. What I added in the paper was *Flash* It’s exactly like a flashbang, and when I activated it, Luna was momentarily blinded.
I used this chance to quickly enter her force field thingy, and barely touched her shoulder, just in time to heal her with my healing Kekkai Genkai.
Her eyes turned back to normal, her Susanoo disappeared, and then she fainted. She has suffered too much already, that her brain requires rest, she’ll probably be out for a whole day.
Wow! You actually thought fast, you had like 6 more minutes until she died. But I never would have thought you would ignore my warning then entered her force field thingy.
I was a bit scared too, the thought of me killing her because of a careless mistake, was almost impossible to bear.
And yet you took the risk.
It’s not like I had much of a choice.
True, you didn’t.
Luna lied in my arms, I kept healing her just incase. My healing Kekkai Genkai also has the ability to heal someone emotionally, there isn’t anything that my Kekkai Genkai cannot heal. I luv this power and I also love Luna. It's kinda hard to believe that someone like her has a dangerous power.
“C-Chris and Luna?! What’s going on here?.” (Kakashi) said in a shocked voice.
“The both of you are alive! That’s really good!.” (Kat) said as she hugged me and Luna.
It felt uncomfortable since Kat was still in her wooden costume, I swear that it felt like I was getting splinters all over me. But who am I to break apart a wonderful moment like this.
“We’re here. Where is that monster!” (Kurenai) said finally reaching here with a bunch of ninjas.
(As always, backup always arrives late.)
“Kakashi tell us quickly, where is that monster.” (Asuma) said as he was on a defensive stance.
Kakashi turned to look at us two, he didn’t know what was happening, but he knew that we meant no harm. And probably had a good reason to do something like this.
(I purposely said two, not three. you'll see why)
“Don’t worry about it, it’s gone for now.” (Kakashi)
“Great! That’s a relief.” (Kurenai) said and sighed in relieve.
“That’s not all. It was Danzo who betrayed us and attacked the council.” (Chris) I said loud enough for everyone to hear. Kat disappeared as she didn’t want her powers to be known. Infact, any kind of evidence about the wood Kekkai Genkai was nowhere to be seen. Looks like she acted quickly, and made all traces that she was even here disappear.
Too bad that the splinters that she put in my body, were still there. It didn’t hurt, but it did feel uncomfortable.
“What do you mean kid?!” (Asuma)
“I can explain” (Mebuki) finally caught up to the crowd, but first took a few deep breaths before speaking again. She told everyone what happened inside the council room, and the fact that they were tricked into Danzo’s schemes.
Most of them were angry about the fact that they were used like this, and also that Danzo betrayed the leaf village and managed to escape from their claws.
Mebuki left out the fact about the Uchiha eyes that were implanted in Danzo’s body, and the fact that it was Luna who created the huge Susanoo. Which was a very smart act on her part. Who knows what will happen if information like that were to leak to others.
“Damn! Now Danzo got away, only god knows how long it’ll take us to find him, and where to even start.” (Asuma) threw his weird weapons to the ground out of rage. He was the son of the third, so he also saw the leaf village as his own. And the fact that someone powerful like Danzo betrayed the leaf village, got him really mad.
What these guys don’t know is that Danzo isn’t gonna get away. Earlier I felt someone powerful appear, at first I didn’t know who it was, but after thinking so hard, I finally remembered who’s chakra I felt.
A small smirk appeared on my face, Danzo doesn't know what he's gonna be dealing with.
Outside of the leaf viilage.
Third person view
Danzo was practically smiling at his successful attempt to escape. Honestly, it was almost too easy for him. But he was angry at the fact that he has lost so much. First, he wanted to test on Chris’s body for his Kekkai Genkais, and also know the identity of the person who wielded the wood style.
He was able to use the wood style thanks to the Senju DNA cells he implanted in his right arm, but the more he uses it, the higher the chances that the senju blood in his arm would try to take over his body. That’s why he only used it once at the council room. But. if he were to have Chris’s healing Kekkai Genkai, then he could possibly get rid of this senju curse on his body, then use it at it’s max potential.
In the end, things didn’t turn out so well for him and he lost the things that he could have used to make Konoha perfect.
And just as he was in his train of thought, he felt a slight sting on his arm. He looked at it, but it wasn’t there at all?!
That’s right, his right arm has completely vanished. He used his other hand to touch the spot where is was at, and nothing. It was cut by something, but when?! And who cut off his right arm?!
“I see you were keeping a bit of a secret from everyone Danzo. Too bad for you that I knew about this a long time ago.” (Itachi) appeared, and on his hand, was Danzo’s right arm.
Danzo looked at Itachi full of shock and fear. He didn’t even have time to activate Izanagi before Itachi cut off his arm, now he can’t use his ultimate move at all.
“I-itachi!!! What are you doing here?!” (Danzo)
“DId you really think that I wouldn’t be keeping an eye after my sister and brother. Seeing as how Luna finally activated her mangekyo sharigan, I had to stop it before her wild actions get her killed.” (Itachi)
So it wasn’t Chris who completely helped Luna, looks like Itachi had a big hand in it as well.
“You were supposed to be on a secret mission to infiltrate the Akatsuki. Are you breaking your ties with Konoha.” (Danzo) was just spouting nonsense right now.
“You’re the last person I want to hear that from. And just so you know, I don’t have any relationship with Konoha other than my little sister and brother.” (Itachi)
Itachi then used amaterasu on Danzo’s severed right arm, and it soon burned to ashes.
“Now the people who you took their eyes, can now rest in peace knowing that you no longer control their eyes.” (Itachi) sais as he looked at Danzo's right arm. He even did a small prayer, knowing that his mom can now rest in peace.
“Itachi you fool! Don’t you realize the power that arm has, you and I both know that the 4th great ninja war is coming soon, and you know as well as I do that you need my strength and smarts to help you greatly.” (Danzo)
Danzo said all that, only to find his right eye missing and a huge sword pierced through his chest.
“I don't care, you killed my mother! Now you can go to hell.” (Itachi) said, and let Danzo’s body drop to the ground.
He looked at the eye on his hand. It was Shisui’s eye that Danzo took from Shisui. Now he has both of his eyes, he wanted to keep both of these eyes because they will be very useful in a battle, and because he promised his dead friend that he will avenge him.
“I know you’re there Anko, you can come out now.” (Itachi) said to a tree.
Anko was indeed hiding behind a tree, unlike the other ninjas, she wasn’t a fool to believe Danzo’s lies. She knows when someone is telling a lie, as she has plently of experience down at the T&I department.
She thought that something was wrong with Danzo, so she followed him very carefully. But who would have known that Itachi would come out of nowhere and kill him.
Seeing as how she was exposed, she came out from her hiding place and then took out a kunai from her pouch, and then guarded herself from Itachi.
"Relax Anko, I am not your enemy, he was.” (Itachi) pointed at Danzo’s dead corpse.
“How do I know you’re not lying to me.” (Anko) said in a bit serious tone.
Itachi took out a small scroll from his pocket, and threw it at Anko.
She caught it, and was a bit confused by Itachi’s action.
“This scroll will tell you any kind of dealing Danzo has with Orochimaru, and also with a group called the Akatsuki. It will tell you a lot of stuff about Orochimaru, and what his next plans are. Use this information wisely.” (Itachi) said then he teleported to who knows where.
Anko looked down to her hand where the scroll was, she was momentarily confused. She thought that Itachi would kill her, but she was very wrong.
She didn’t read the scroll immediately, she first decided that it was best to let the Hokage know about this. Then she quickly ran back to the leaf village.
She thought about it again, and thought of reading the scroll now. Maybe she can find Orochimaru with this scroll.
‘Itachi, what are you planning.’ Anko thought.
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