《In the Naruto world (1)》Chapter 88 you talk too much
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I don’t know if you had noticed, but I had stopped writing in first person, that is because I find it easier to write it.
And another thing, I will be doing a short challenge just like the time when I asked about Anko’s curse, which was a couple of months ago.
If somebody gets it right, I will be posting another chapter tomorrow or the day after tomorrow as a reward. If no one gets the right answer by tomorrow when I wake up, then nothing will change, but you won’t get that extra chapter tomorrow.
This is what you need to type in order to get that extra chapter.
Tell me which anime/manga I will be doing. Yes, I am doing another Fan-fic novel. Hopefully it turns out better than this Naruto fan-fic.
Hint: I have may have mentioned the anime somewhere in this story, you’re gonna have to re-read the entire story to know which one I am talking about. If you actaully remember, then you are awesome.
2. What type of system will our MC have? I am indeed doing another system, but that system will not talk a lot like the bluescreen that Chris has.
And an extra hint, this system is actually a pretty famous system, and I have seem some people use this system in their fanfics on Royalroad. And another hint is that this other system, is actually based on a manga that I am pretty sure that 95% of you would enjoy.
And that is it. If someone does get both of the answers right, then I will post that chapter tomorrow. You guys can spam all the answers you can think of, I do not care.
Sorry to keep you waiting, and enjoy.
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Shortly after Luna gave Chris the greatest kiss in the world (I dunno if that is a thing) they left the bird house.
Once they exited the house hand-in-hand, they saw everybody just chillaxing outside for no good reason. Of course, TenTen was nowhere to be found. It must have taken her a lot of courage to do what she did. But that courage faded over time. If anybody were in TenTen’s situation, they would probably do the same.
(My god I love TenTen so much. I blame myself for not including her as the first candidate of the Mc’s harem. Then again I was a complete noob before, and now I am indeed a better writer thanks to all of you who have continued to support me, and kept giving me pointers.)
{And I do not mean most of the reviews that have nohing but hate for this fan-fic.}
Itachi seemed to actually be bothered by the fact that Chris was gonna have a harem, because that would mean that he sees his sister as nothing more but someone to take advantage of.
Then again, with the Kekkei Genkais that Chris used to possess, it is possible that his off-springs would inherit his power. It is much like when a Uchiha or a Hyuuga would reproduce, their off-spring would definitely also have that power. And also, it is not a bad idea to repopulate the Uchiha clan.
Itachi can’t imagine being without his Rinnegan eyes. As they are the source of most of his power, as well as evidence that he is a proud member of the Uchiha clan.
Hina was actually smiling and thankint TenTen from the bottom of her heart. If TenTen did not do what she did, then Luna would have never agreed on Chris having a harem.
Hina did not hate Naruto personally. But she thought that Hinata deserved so much better, and also of the fact that Naruto won’t be there for his family in the future like she predicted.
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(I already mentioned her reasons why Hinata should not marry Naruto, so I am not gonna repeat myself again.)
Isabella did not think of anything about this, as it is not her problem nor her business.
Sakura didn’t know what to think of, but it is most likely that she doesn’t like Chris, but mostly respects him. She has been chasing after the same guy for many years, so her feelings must have been mixed when so much had happened in a day.
(Most likely Sakura would never be included in the harem. Even if she is Chris’s student, I still
do not personally like her that much.)
Hinata and Naruto had left for some reason, as they are not here. As for Hanabi, of course she is here waiting for her Onii-chan to come out.
Luna doesn’t know exactly why, but she is blushing a bit right now. As for Chris, he still has that stupid grin on his face.
Minato sat in a cross-legged position, as he is still inspecting each and every one of the marks he has ever implanted in his life.
Usually this would be easier if he knew the target personally. But the fact that Minato may or may not have ever met Fan Uchiha, is kind of hard to track down. That is why he has to inspect each of his seals one-by-one.
Nobody knows how much time it will take Minato to actually find Fan Uchiha, or if he ever will, but it looks like it will be long until they hear a response from Minato. And besides, even if Fan Uchiha was married to Fan Uchiha, he is still gonna beat him up for killing(stealing) the woman he loved.
Minato couldn’t help think about Naruto. He wondered if he and Kushina would have been together, Naruto would have been his son. Minato shook his head as he threw away those thoughts, because all of his focus should not be directed at finding Fan Uchiha.
“Chris, I need to have a chat with you.” (Hina) said as she started walking on another direction, while indicating me to follow her.
Luna looked at Chris, as she was curious to know what Hina wanted. But, Chris doesn’t know what Hina wants either.
“I’ll be back soon.” (Chris) said to Luna then walked quickly to catch up to Hina.
Luna only saw his figure getting further and further away from her. She didn’t feel sad, but was happy that she made that decision. It’s not common to share your boyfreind with others, but, maybe Chris was meant to be shared, but not by too many people.
Chris gave Luna the red ring while they were inside the bird house. Before, Chris found it hard to give it to her after they had their little fight. But now, it seemed like the right time to give it to her.
Chris felt a sudden boost of power, but sadly his Kekkei Genkais and chakra were still gone. He did feel lighter and physically stronger; but just by a little bit,
Hina led Chris into the thick woods. Chris did not say anything, because he knew that whatever Hina had to say to him is important.
‘Hey bluescreen, question. I may have lost my powers to that mother alien, but what about my skills that you gave me? Am I still able to have access to them?’ Chris said in his mind.
Yes, but only the skills that aren't based on chakra. For example, your mind reading ability, dancing, cooking. You get the point.
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‘Ah, well that's incredibly neat. Then again, the mother alien can only steal chakra based moves, so I guess it kind of makes sense.’
Chris felt reassured that at least he still possesses some of his skills. He might have lost his sensing ability, sealing ability and creation, but he still has other cool skills. Not only that, but he also has two skills to choose.
Hina came to a sudden halt, which caught Chris off guard since he was in his mind, so he accidentally bumped into Hina’s back.
Hina did not mind Chris, but she made sure that no one else could hear what she had to say to Chris.
“I know this is very sudden, Chris, but I need you to listen to me.” (Hina) said with a very serious face.
“What is it?” (Chris) asked in a serious tone as well.
“You said that you are from another world, and that the world we live in is a creation of some guy’s mind. Like a story in a book or something?” (Hina) said.
“Yes.” (Chris) he had already explained that this is not a fake world, as it was real to him and everybody else. However, that still doesn't change the fact that this world is based on some person’s very creative mind.
“You might have told us the ending, with Naruto and Sasuke beating a woman named Otsutsuki…” (Hina)
When she puts it like that, it sounds like Naruto and sasuke bullied an innocent woman, but she wasn't so innocent, as she wanted to kill everyone in this world using her powers.
“But just like most books, there must be sequels as well. Am I right?” (Hina)
“Yes.” (Chris) could only agree. There is the Boruto series which is a sequel to the Naruto anime/manga.
“Then… who does Hinata marry.” (Hina)
Wait! That is the important question she had in mind?
“She marries a certain spiky blonde kid, with whiskers.” (Chris)
‘I thought that this would have been important, but she was only curious to know about something that doesn't matter anymore. As far as I know, all the knowledge I had of Naruto is completely useless. Hell, Minato isn't even the father of Naruto! And I thought I knew that!’ (Chris) thought.
Hina seemed to have anticipated Chris’s answer. She lied her back on a trunk, as she sat on the smooth grass.
“Chris, I have a few favours to ask of you.” (Hina)
“Ask away.” (Chris)
“In the future, when this is all over, once we survive this… please ask Hinata for her hand in marriage.” (Hina)
“I kinda expected you to say this Hina, as Hiashi told me that you two had talked about it and agreed.” (Chris)
“Good, then I don't need to repeat myself. But, can you do it now?” (Hina)
“As in right now?” (Chris) asked to be sure.
“Yes.” (Hina)
“Why the rush?” (Chris) even if Hinata and him have known each other for months, that is not a good reason to get married right now.
“Because I'm afraid.” (Hina) said as she began to shed some tears.
“You're that afraid that Naruto will not be there for Hinata and his family?” (Chris)
“Not that. I am afraid of a completely different reason. I’m afraid that I will die before I see Hinata and you together as a couple. I just want to see that part of her life.” (Hina)
“Why are making it sound like you only have like a week to live?” (Chris)
“We might not even have a day, Chris. As far as we know, those aliens might somehow bring down this floating island to the ground. If that were to happen, then we will die.” (Hina)
“Oh… I see what you're saying now.” (Chris)
“I don't view you differently because you lost your powers, I still see in you so much potential, and the perfect one who should marry my niece.” (Hina)
“Thanks, Hina. As for your request, I'll try my best.” (Chris)
‘Huh? Not even my own mother said that she saw potential in me. The only potential she saw in me was cleaning toilets off restaurants. I am not making that part up.’ Chris thought.
(Ouch.)
“It's funny actually.” (Hina) smiled a bit, but her tears still poured from her eyes.
Chris walked up to Hina, and wipes her tears with his sleeve with a delicate force.
“What is?” (Chris) asked.
“I view Hinata as my eldest daughter, and yet, I see you as the son I never had.” (Hina)
Chris had been thinking about that too. During this time, Hina had been considerate of him, nice to him, never mistreated him in any way, and always supported his decisions.
It's these kinds of actions that made Chris see Hina as a mother as well. Although this real mother was also very cool, she would never be this gentle and heartwarming as Hina.
“You know, I am technically an orphan, so maybe you can adopt me.” (Chris) said casually.
Hina looked at Chris with soft moistened eyes, and a warm smile. She knew what Chris meant when he said that.
“If I do adopt you, will you call me mom, mommy, or Hina?” (Hina)
“I guess mom suits you better.” (Chris)
“Hm. Too bad the leaf was destroyed, otherwise I would have already sent the paperwork by now.” (Hina)
“That's okay, mom.” (Chris) said with a blush.
Hina felt as that one word touched her heart. More tears fell from her eyes.
“Then what are you waiting for? Give your mom a hug.” (Hina) opened up her arms for Chris.
As if a strong magnetic force was pulling him, Chris found himself unable to escape from Hina's embrace.
This warmth was vastly different from anything he had ever experienced. As if time itself stop, and the entire place was enveloped with a warmth light.
“Do you how long I've been waiting for you to call me that?” (Hina) said it very gently. She almost thought that Chris would never want to be her son, as she has always seen him as more than a ninja with incredible powers.
“Sorry to make you wait so long, mom.” (Chris) said.
It's been far too long that Chris had been missing that motherly love. Even if his real mom didn't have high hopes for his future, she still loved him very much.
After a while, the two split up from their embrace.
“Are you going to Hinata first or TenTen?” (Hina) makes it sound like this is a normal thing to do.
“I'll see who I run into first.” (Chris) left that spot at a quick pace. It's a good thing he also trained his body, because he will need all the help he can get especially with his chakra gone.
Hina watched his figure disappear, and couldn't help but think.
‘My son might not be as bright as I thought. At first I wanted to trick him by making it sound like we would not be able to live till next week.
I thought if I faked a few tears, then that would convince him to chase Hinata. I do not plan on dying until my I can hold in my hands my very own grandchild(s)
But who would have thought that Chris would decide to be my son. It's like all my wishes came true in an hour.
Go me’ Hina thought with a smile. She wanted to put up a small act in front of Chris, but things went way better than she imagined.
Hina knew that she couldn't rely on Hinata to fully get over Naruto, that is why she needed to give Hinata that little push.
However, if Hinata is still unable to change after this, then Hina can only leave it up to fate. She believes that if she were to go too far into her case, then Hinata would hate her.
Hinata is a big girl, so she can make these kind of decisions already, but her aunty was only there to guide her, and not force on her decisions that she might not like.
“I hope you do a good job, Chris.” (Hina) said as she looked up at the clouds that were floating on the beautiful sky.
She truly hopes that they can all make it alive until this mess is over. That is what she is praying for.
Chris walks deeply into the woods, using only her 5 senses to get him around through this area.
Ever since he lost his chakra, he is not able to pinpoint the location of several people in a big space like this.
However, he did manage to find TenTen sitting on the rock as she was contemplating on what she just did.
She sensed something coming her direction, only to realize that is was Chris. She did not run away, but decided to face her embarrassment and confront Chris, no matter how awkward this will be for her.
“Luna and you probably hates me, don't you?” (TenTen) asked a straightforward question.
“No. But I was surprised at how bold you were. I don't think that I might not be able to pull off something like that, and I'm the one who has a set of balls.” (Chris)
TenTen only smiled at his words. She found it funny, her embarrassing coming from him.
“So what now?” (TenTen)
“What do you mean?” (Chris)
“I cannot see myself not liking you. Ever since you showed up on that day with the Kubikiribocho, I thought I finally found the man I was gonna spend the rest of my life with.” (TenTen)
“...” (Chris) how would she react if Chris told her that she ended up with Lee in the future. I don't think anyone wants to know that.
“And yet, I was one step too late.” (TenTen)
“Um. TenTen.” (Chris) tried to interrupt her, but she continued on talking.
“I wish I could go back in time, on that day that you first showed up in the village, then everything would be different,” (TenTen)
“TenTen, there is something I think you should know.” (Chris)
“But sadly, I do not possess such an ability, and neither does anybody here. So sad.” (TenTen) just kept talking to herself in her own little world.
Chris realized that TenTen was trying to soothe herself down by talking to herself.
Chris slowly walked up towards TenTen, who is still talking.
“I think it might be possible to be able to find someone with that kind of ability, as this world is full of nothing but mystery- oomph!” (TenTen)
It took a second for TenTen to realize that her mouth had been shut.
She was so immersed in herself, that she didn't realize until now that Chris gave her a kiss.
TenTen could not even think or say anything right now. All she could do was watch as his face was connected with hers.
Her heart ran faster by the minute, as time seemed to have slowed down.
Chris pulled away from her lips, and only said these few words.
“You talk too much.” (Chris) said with a smile as he looked happily at TenTen.
“N-Nani?” (TenTen)
That was all that could cross her mind.
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