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Okay, since some of you are not fans of giving out comments, how about you try to talk about what is your thoughts why reading this story ? Feel free to tell me everything you want to say about this story, or you could try and answer the following questions in case you have no idea to begin ?
So, here are the things i want to ask you guys:
-What is your thoughts of this story (so far) ?
-Do you think it has good points ?
-How about bad points ?
-Do you have any constructive opinions on how you want the story to progress ?
-Any more suggestions that you want to make ?
-Do you want to make some reviews ?
-Do you think this story should be continued ?
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Thank you for listening to my rants.
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