《The Dragon Clan Revived》Adding things...suggestions needed
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Hello, I was going to add some stuff or maybe change a few things in the story and I was wondering if I could get some feedback so I don't go off and start messing up the story and having to revise it yet again:
-I was planning on giving him a type of profession. Example that I might use later in the story: Dragon Blacksmithing. Using his dragon fire breathing to smelt weapons and armor to use for his allies and clan members. Or smelt armor for his dragon form that he can automatically equip (well technically I guess he doesn't need armor, his scales are armor lol)
-Also I was going to add the next member (obviously the Valkryie) and then make him focus either on strengthening himself by learning more about his magic, or upgrading his mana pool so he can create a pure-blood dragon with his mana, or he could continue to find more beastwomen to add to his clan. (And don't worry I didn't forget about the part where he has no idea why the dragon race went extinct, that is going to be a multiple arc sort of thing)
-Third idea that goes back to the profession subject, would be to learn enchanting or inscription. Point I'm trying to make right now, is that I don't want the whole entire story to be about bedding women! Anyways, if you guys could suggest some awesome ideas then it would be much appreciated. Lol this isn't me with a writer's block either, I know where I'm going with the story it would just be nice to give the MC extra 'value' I guess you could say? Just to keep it interesting so it's not a harem sex-fest.
thanks! Hmmm, I wonder if this all counts as a spoiler? Oh well.
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