Hey!

So I just released this story yesterday, and I'm overwhelmed by the response it has gotten so far. This book has had the most number of followers, comments, favorites. . . I've ever seen within the first day of posting anything. There have been incredibly helpful and invaluable comments to help me improve my story. As a token of gratitude, I will release another chapter in a few hours on top of another chapter I've already planned to release. I will also commission a cover art for this book once we hit enough chapters, and I want you to decide on how it should look! We'll discuss this further when the time comes.

In the meantime, I just want to ask you something. My chapters are first draft, I'm sure there will be things in my book that might be structurally or stylistically inconsistent, as well as grammatically mistakes and structurally awkward sentences.

I just want you guys to help out by catching these mistakes and let me know in the comments. Any other feedback will be greatly appreciated. Cheers!