《The Cultivation System》Chapter 8: System
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Cultivation System
System is now active. Applying stats and unlocking shops and abilities.
“AHHHH!” I scream while the pain shoots through me. I fall to my knees and struggle towards to door.
What’s going on? Why does my body feel like it’s on fire? I need help!
“Old man, I need help. Come quick!” I shout while dragging myself towards the door. My vison is starting to blur, but I don’t want to be stuck in the room any longer then I have to. I’m lucky I’m still alive, and I don’t want to push my luck!
“Andrew!” I shout again while gritting my teeth in pain.
I crawl to the door, but the handle is too high for me to reach while stuck on my knees.
I feel the fire rushing though my body. Oh no, it’s heading towards my head!
Oh, f***, this going to hurt.
I quickly stand up, fighting through the pain. I manage to grab the handle and push down. As I do this, the pain reaches my brain.
Everything goes dark.
Cultivation System
Stats Applied
The system alert wakes me up, and I notice I’m now in my room.
Oh f***, that is what that pain is? I don’t feel much different though, I should try sensing KI while no one is in my room to bother me.
As I change my focus towards KI, the world lights up like a beacon. If what I could see before was a cup of water, now I can see a lake worth of KI. The specs are now closer to the size of golf balls.
Holly s***, so much KI! This is unbelievable. Wait, now that I am KI refiner, I should be able to draw it in.
I focus on pulling the KI closer, making it go through my hand, run down my arm, through my chest, and finally into my core. The process seems slow and a lot of KI escapes before it gets to my core.
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Seems like I will need to work on my control if I want to cultivate efficiently.
I watch a bug fly in though the small window. I observe its every detail. As I focus more, I feel time around me slow. I can see the details of the wings, even the tiny muscles pushing and pulling.
Wow, what the hell was that? I need to be careful with that.
As I get up and walk towards the door, I trip on a step and end up launching myself. I tightly grip onto the door’s handle to catch my balance and it snaps off.
Oh right, my increased speed and strength stats. Crap, I can’t leave the room till I get used to my new body or people will know what’s up. Wow, that’s sensible, seems like my intelligence went up too.
I spend the rest of the day running around my room, doing push ups, sits ups, and various other exercises to control my body and push it to its limit as well. Even after 5 hours of exercising, I don’t feel the slightest bit tired. I had to tell Andrew I was not feeling well when he came and checked on me. He left with a worried look.
Seems like all my stats have helped me be the strongest 8-year-old ever! Hmm, what about my affinities?
Cultivation System
Quest: Reach KI Refining level 5 to unlock your affinities.
Reward: 200p
Cultivation System Alert
Your cultivation has been restricted to level 1 till your 10th birthday.
Stupid system! What’s the point of a head start quest if you then restrict progress? Ugh, better look at the shop.
Cultivation System Shop (level 1 KI refiner)
Cultivation Manuals
Abilities
Pills
Items
More (please search for requested items)
Guess I’ll look at the manuals first.
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Cultivation Manuals – Points 1000
200 – Godly foundation Level 1 (increases KI storage, expands KI routes in body, increases mind strength)
200 – Lightning sacred body arts – level 1 (infuses lighting in the KI before refining your core. Increases endurance and speed.)
200 – Space and time mind arts – level 1 (unknown)
System recommends these 3. Please choose 1. Level system explanation:
Level 1 = KI refining stage
Level 2 = Core refining stage
And so on.
Damn, it’s so hard to choose. I want all 3 of them. Wait, I might have a possibly brilliant or dumb idea. System, load crafting system.
Crafting system
Please add items then click craft.
Item 1. _____________
Item 2. _____________
Item 3. _____________
Item 4. _____________
Please click here to craft (100p per craft)
Hahaha, I love the easy method! System, buy all recommend cultivation manuals.
System: Purchase complete. Total points left: 400p
System, place all manuals into the crafting system and craft for me.
System: Crafting complete. Total points left: 300p
Item
Unique Art (please name) - increases KI storage, expands KI routes in body, increases mind and strength, infuses lighting into KI before refining your core, increases endurance and speed, creates a storage area 5m by 5m inside your body that can store anything in a time frozen state. Once you reach level 5 KI refining, you can generate another core with space and time KI.
That’s what I’m talking about! Gambling always pays out. Well, at least sometimes. System, load abilities.
Abilities
Lightning step – Owned Mastery 1 – 50 (1 point of mastery is worth 100 points)
Basic Swords – 100 points 1 – 5
Basic Spear – 100 points 1 - 5
Basic daggers – 100 points 1 – 5
Due to your KI refining level, the system recommends these.
Damn, wanted some cool spells and abilities! Wishful thinking, I guess. Well, I’ve always wanted use daggers, so I’ll go with them. 200 points in lightning step and 100 in daggers please, system!
System: Purchased. 0 points left
System, stats please.
Stats (5 stats to place)
Strength – 10
Agility – 15
Hyper focus – 5
Intelligence – 17
Spiritual Sense – 6
Endurance 10
Guess I gained 1 in spiritual sense for learning to sense KI on my own.
System, 3 in intelligence and 2 in spiritual sense, please.
System: Stats Placed. No stats left.
Stats
Strength – 10
Agility – 15
Hyper focus – 5
Intelligence – 20
“Alert: intelligence has met the hidden condition and opened sub-categories.”
Spiritual Sense – 8
Split mind - 0
Endurance 10
Oh, I’ll have to check out what “split mind is” when I get more points.
System Alert
Shutting down body to implant all knowledge.
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