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Well then, it has come to this. I have written myself in a corner. I am genuinly sorry as I am going to put this story on a hiatus, I started with a fresh idea of this crazy guy developing a world and then to let someone explore the insides of it. But there is no creativity anymore, I can't figure out how to make Peter's story enjoyable to read or write.
It is just bad writing, plain and simple. At least for me, this is not good enough.
I hope to come back to this site in the future, with a better story which I will continue to enjoy writing. A story that I can call good.
People whom I have asked to do a review swap, please do leave a review. I genuinly enjoy critiscism and it may point me towards the direction I need to go with my writing. I will of course review your stories as well.
Thanks for all the love this story got, readers and followers!
I will be back!
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