《Serpent of the Spring》Chapter 3
Advertisement
Shirisha nearly lost her balance several times as her momentum carried her downward over the slick, snowy ground, feeling the warmth in the air grow gradually greater as with the voices surrounding it. Dashing into the circle with the great flame, drums, and dancing, she shouted,
"Abhinatha has come!"
The response was immediate, people ceasing what they were doing, moving quickly but orderly. She heard the surprised discussion of the elders about how the serpent had come early, coming on previous years a whole hour later. Several children had climbed up the slope on which she previously stood, looking on with excitement and awe at Abhinatha, who was now coiling its hulking mass ever skyward up the first mountain.
Several minutes later and the children were coaxed back to the circle, minds still clearly jittering with excitement. The rest of the people had now started to form two long lines, starting at the bonfire and continuing down either side of the central path, kneeling and facing inwards towards each other. Families knelt side by side, some children bearing the same contention of the adults who had done it for years, and some others fidgeting from staying in one place. All of this was done in the same orderly and practiced manner, the way tradition had established for hundreds of generations, and for thousands of years.
Through the crowd that was quickly filing into the two lines, Shirisha met eyes with Bhavaroopa and they exchanged a look of knowing. Wordlessly, they went together to a small area behind a tree off to the left of the circle. On the thin layer of snow were three wide wooden squares, sticks and bark lashed together to create platforms. On all of these were the sacred lanterns constructed by them earlier.
Working silently together, they lifted each side and carried them out to where the lines of kneeling people began, one by one. Shirisha tended to one line and Bhavaroopa the other, passing them the lanterns, who would then pass it to the one next to them, down the line until everyone had a lantern cupped gently in their hands.
Shirisha then held the old woman's hand as they walked down the path, taking their place in the two lines, kneeling opposite each other. There was only one still standing now in the village, which was silent aside from the steady grinding of a massive serpentine body curving around mountains in their direction. It was Udgam, and gripped in his hands was the Kindling Arm. This was the most sacred thing their people had, hundreds of years old and vital to this tradition of gracing Abhinatha. It was a long, beautifully carved wooden piece engraved with flowers and animals, a small basin at the end of it encircled by wooden "fingers" that held a small flame. All could see the effects of age on his body, moving slower and more tedious by the year. Still, with the same dutiful face he always bore, alighted the hand on the Kindling Arm. He turned, and the first person in one line bowed their head and held up their lantern. Steadily, from the middle of the path the old man held the burning hand beneath it, and the lantern was lit. The small flame within could be seen dancing with its light, moving a little less vigorously than the great bonfire as it was protected from the wind. Udgam slowly swung the arm around him from the same position on the path, and lit the lantern of the person on the opposite side. He continued for minutes on end, slowly walking straight down the path, swinging and lighting a longer and longer row of lanterns, all the while Abhinatha's movement filled more and more of the atmosphere.
Advertisement
When at last he finished, lighting the lanterns held in the hands of their makers, He knelt down between those final two, facing inwards with the Kindling Arm propped against his knee, still burning.
Shirisha looked around at the silent faces that all now reflected their own light. On these faces she saw many emotions, faces of joy, grief, relief, fatigue, and hope. Still, among all these faces, there was no Sang.
Still, with all but one, the people of the village together formed a massive torch, a flame for each soul and a fiery blaze for their community. All together, hearts connected, one spirit, reaching out for an entity, a mystical being which extended its long colossal body toward their mountain and towards the light. Shirisha's feelings were interrupted when some twenty feet above the bonfire a tongue the length of six full grown men shot into her peripheral vision, thick as a small log. It split gradually into two forks, which just barely avoided touching the house of the elders before being silently retracted. She followed it with her eyes, as did many, and there was Abhinatha's head.
No matter how old anyone was, or how many times they had seen Abhinatha, the sight of such a being was breathtaking. Looking around Shirisha saw wide eyes, except for Udgam who smiled warmly as if seeing an old friend.
Its head was as broad as the central path and long as the width of the circle, scales hard and pointed, layered like endless rows of bronze-beige teeth. It turned its massive head, the light of the bonfire reflecting over the scales, looking down across the people on kneeled on the path with one eye. An eye with a single diamond slit, black as a cavern, surrounded by stringed shapes that formed gorgeous ragged rivers of gold around its entirety. It was the most stunningly gorgeous color Shirisha had ever seen. They heard the heavy grinding of the body on earth once more as it began to move again, directly down the path above their heads.
The time had now come for the bestowal of wishes. Everyone bowed their heads in respect, lifting their lanterns high into the air. With their eyes closed they all thought intensely in their minds what they wished for the most in the coming year, as the lantern light cast a glow onto Abhinatha's stomach passing above, which was covered in lighter disc-like scales.
Advertisement
Eventually they heard the beginning of Abhinatha's body make contact with the next mountain, one much more dense with trees but less suitable for a village, as the tail above them thinned to a tip and moved steadily away. The people began to rise from their knees and walk to a point somewhere in the middle of the central path, a point where they typically clustered to watch Abhinatha disappear over the horizon. Shirisha spoke excitedly amongst others of their wishes, and to children about how they felt, simply happy that spring was coming.
It was still very dark, but less dark than it was before. They watched the coiling of their great savior, its mass breaking trees in short brittle snaps as the head craned forward to the next mountain over the valley far down below, the heavy center of its length gripped around the mountain beside theirs. The ritual had finished, its fruits hoped to be borne in the coming months of the village.
Suddenly, a resounding crack filled the valley.
The people were clearly startled, looking around in confusion. Amidst the sudden commotion, Shirisha believed she heard it come from the other mountain, the one Abhinatha was on. Then, on a powerful rise, rolling and swelling into the air was a greater sound, a tremendous roar of water. Several people were shouting as the sound grew ever stronger, accompanied by the same brittle cracking of trees and rocks one hundredfold. Shirisha and many others saw it clearly now; the hulking torrent of water that sent streams into the air, beginning towards the summit and barreling down the mountainside, collecting the heavy rooted plants and stones as it grew in strength and loosened the earth. Abhinatha was directly in its path.
People were screaming violently at Abhinatha while jostling together, and tears filled Shirisha's eyes as she found herself joining their desperate chorus. But Abhinatha did not seem to notice, acting purely on the one will that had driven it for millenium.
Shirisha watched in horror as the mass slammed into Abhinatha's side like a supernatural warhammer, ripping the massive serpent off the ground. Its neck was pulled down and the head whipped with it, the serpent's mouth gaping wide and unleashing an unearthly hissing sound with that same forked tongue flaring violently in the sky. The body was rolling over again and again, crashing and smashing through the environment as it lost all control, large boulders hurled against its stomach and ribs by the water that dragged it ever downward.
At last, it hit the base of the mountain as the water spilled out into the valley, flooding the river. The wildly contorting head was slammed full force into the rocky riverside, all the while emotions ran rampant in the village. Shirisha still had tears in her eyes, clutching at her heart while looking at the unmoving body sprawled along the valley.
There existed only one explanation of this event, and though they did not know exactly how, there proved only one single person that it could have been. He who lurked and was seen rarely, he who was known for a will of iron almost certainly capable of such a feat. Sang, the young hunter.
Advertisement
- In Serial48 Chapters
Records of the Weakest Emperor
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Adventure, Action, Evil Gods, Evil Religions, Goddesses, Hidden Abilities, Industrialization, Mature Protagonist, Manipulative Characters, Mystery Solving, Mythology, Nobles, Time TravelCalvin Villanueva was once heralded as the savior of the world. His might was unrivaled despite possessing the weakest class in Las Felipinas. But in a cruel twist of fate, his achievements were turned against him and in a span of a single night, he went from experiencing heaven to plunging into the deepest parts of hell.Captured and imprisoned by the Sucklings, an alien invader who came from a different realm. Calvin became their Scribe, the Keeper of History, and ultimately... He arrived at the peak of the weakest Writer Profession and became the Author of Fate. Unfortunately, it was already too late. The world was now in ruins and Calvin only had a single choice in front of him.It was death.He may have chosen death but he had proven before his death that he was indeed the true savior of humanity.Manipulating fate, twisting time and space...Calvin went back to the past for a second chance to turn things around!After countless life and death battles, who was it that snatched everything away from me? Under the tribulation of sorrows and the tossing of wind and rain, humanity may have betrayed me, but I shall save them once again!Bringing with me the memories of my past, those who dare to block my way shall be killed!My return to the summit begins!
8 188 - In Serial14 Chapters
Hanging on Bones
huh?... So no reincarnation for me?...****Warning! Mature Content!****I extend my arm out as far as it goes and stab myself with all my might. The blade securely lodges between my ribs. One problem solved. Finally having my hand free I immediately bend down and scoop up flickering glass candle holder. In one swift motion I straighten out, turn and throw it at the closest of my pursuers. To my surprise it's a perfect square hit and the leading veteran crashes into the headstone he was just about to jump over. It was waaay too close for my comfort. If not for this success, shortly after I would be the one lying on the ground…----------------------My first attempt at writing a book - the way i like them.
8 156 - In Serial8 Chapters
Tales Of The Rocket Patrol 2
Defenders of the colonies, lawmen and arbitrators who settle disputes. Their sole function is to serve and protect the people. They are the Rocket Patrol!
8 139 - In Serial55 Chapters
Soul Core Online
Soul Core Online was a game that few people were interested in until after it was released, due to its odd way of handling character growth but this soon changed as people started to realise just how different this game was. Unlike many of its predecessors the NPCs in Soul Core Online acted in a way that was indistinguishable from real people and the world felt alive because of this instead of the empty and sterile cities we had come to expect, even walking down the street could give you insights to how these people lived. In my case this was the world that I had always wanted to visit and I soon found myself embroiled in the constantly changing world that is Soul Core Online. This story is currently only available here on Royal Road or on my Patreon here: https://www.patreon.com/bkwrm196/posts?filters%5Btag%5D=Soul%20Core%20Online
8 102 - In Serial26 Chapters
One Piece: The Elder Twin
(Previously known as Being Luffy isn't Lucky) An utterly random person comes to their senses to find out that they're being dangled by their legs, not to mention that they feel some slight vertigo. Upon realisation, they discover that they've become... ahem, I mean they share a body with the one known as Monkey D. Luffy and they also have no idea who they are themselves! The one thing they do know? They used to be an absolute loner. (EDIT: So... a few months later and I come back to this and read like a few chapters. Only to realize the absolute rubbish the story and everything has become. There was many needlessly developed things that just waste chapters and don't even develop anything. The fiction's Mary Sue was horrendously developed. I'm just repeating myself to try and convey how terrible it developed... like seriously. IF I were to update the fiction again I would be thinking of improved concepts and ways to present everything which would contradict the entire way I previously presented everything.)
8 125 - In Serial16 Chapters
The carnomancer
Jackson was but a normal american just looking to get by in life. unfortunately for him life had other plans as a terrorist bombing took place in the air port in london where he was getting off at. The resulting explosion killed him instantly, and now he has been reincarnated into the world of Rokna.In this new world of magic, monsters, and conflict join him under his new identity Adimir freelancer the adventurer half-elf as he seeks a way to live out an exciting life of researching new and creative ways of combining magic and science. But with a tyrannical empire beginning to prepare for a bloody war the signs of turmoil begin to loom on the horizon. Adimir will face numerous challenges. Both challenges to those native to this world, and against other people have come from earth. Author's comment: I'll be uprfont with you on the entire war thing that the description hints at. Yes it will eventually happen, and many of the strange and out of place things in the beginning will tie into that. Not that it will be explained until much later in the novel. In fact the first 100 or 200 chapters will be spent on the main character growing stronger as an adventurer before the entire war even begins to start rearing its ugly head. So for those eager for the war to kick off sorry, but there won't be a big explosive war so early. At least not with the empire (although if you read carefully you may be able to pick up signs of how close the war is with what happens in the story). But the wait (I hope) will be worth it as it will be diving into some of the stuff a otherworlder in a significant position of power could do with the right knowledge. With that little warning over with I hope you enjoy this novel of mine. Its my first actual attempt at writing a story for people to read so please keep that in mind. If you have any criticism please tell me. I'd love to read them and will be using them to help me in improving my writing quality as time goes on. Experience is the best teacher after all.
8 62

