《Star Wars : Rise of the New Order》The Awakaning 2.0
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*What?*
In one moment I was i an absolute darkness and know again. I mean Author, cmon you can do better than that!!!
Author: Shut up thats my story and I am writing it like I want
MC: Yeah but it's my life dickead and I have to live with it!
Author: Ok ok ok, sheesh chill you nuts.
So again, In one moment I was in darkness and now i was in a warm embrace. I tried open my eyes, but to no avail. And asked myself:"Where the hell am I?"
*Hey! Who are you and how are you reading my mind?* Mmm so it was like this.
*But say System, do you have a Name?*
*Yes I would like that very much. Mmhh what would be a good name for you?
I always liked Obi-Wan-Kenobi.
System, from this day onword is your name Ibo.*
SOOOO Where are we Ibo or more exact, where is my mom?
Strange why is this name so familier to me? I dind't remember. Ah it can't be so importent then.
So Ibo, do I have Status?
Status!
Name : ???
Level 0
Race : Human
Health N/A
Stamina N/A
Force N/A
Strength: N/A
Stamina: N/A
Constitution: N/A
Dexterity : N/A
Intelligence: 15
Wisdome: 12
Charisma: N/A
Perks: 0
PerkPoints(PP): 10
Perks available*
Briefly I was overwhelmed with the overload on information. It needed to settle for a few minutes before I was able to replie.
*Ibo WTF???!*
Ibo didn't reacted to my mental outbreak and after a few second I had my cool back.
*So Ibo, why are just 2 out of my attributes available?*
Race : Human
Health 120
Stamina 100
Force N/A
Strength:11
Stamina: 10
Constitution: 12
Intelligence: 13
Wisdome: 10
Charisma: 10
Aaah that is good to know. So I have the advantage of being a "Genius for my age", because I don't think that any 5 month old baby can be smarter than the average man. So let's see,*Ibo, what are the Perks and PerkPoints?**Why not? Show me what you got:*
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Perks:
Force Sensetive:
You are able to sense the force within and outside of you. You are Force-technically the average Force-Sensible kid from the Jedi Order.
+50 Force per Level
(PP): 2
Force Genius:
You are more then just Force-Sensible. The Force is more open to you and guides you in what you are doing somewhat.
+100 Force per Level
(PP): 4
Force Prodigy:
The Force is a part of you. She is guiding you and is to your comand. But beware, because with great power cames great responsebility. Having the same Force-Potential Like Anakin Skywalker
+200 Force per Level
(PP):8
Wow. I think it is a no-brainer what i picked. I mean, when I'm going to be a force-wielder, than a goddame good one.*Ibo, pick Force Prodigy.*
*Oh there are other options too? I totally read over it. Yes please, but I only have 2 points left so please show me just the options with 1 or 2 points.*
Perks
Perfect Eidetic Memory:
The ability to remember everything. EVERYTHING!!!
(PP): 2
Ambidextrous:
The ability to use both hands equal good.
(PP):1
Force-Saver
You are able to use you're Force with less, well, Force
(PP): 2
Ah a tought choice. For some people not but for me. I mean, I want two Lightsabers. When watching the Star Wars movies, I always dreamed of having two Lightsabers which could combine into one double Lightsaber. But then something came to my mind.*Ibo, can I earn PerkPoints?*
*Perfekt, then please select Perfect Eidetic Memory.*
*Wait wha...* but it was to late and i went in the well-known darkness
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