《The Creator's Bloodline》Dethroned?
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Chapter 1
[Judas] "Father, ever since I was a child, where were you? When I needed you, where were you? I have always tried to please you. I have gone through the mandate trials you set, and passed them all. But, you, Sir, never even once said 'I am proud of you. You were always too busy working. Working on the universe, making new races, signs, wonders, mandates, and so on. But, you could do all of these things, except to find time and even spend time with my siblings and me! You see, I am tired, and I want you to step down! You always said you loved us, right? Prove it, and step down!" Judas says angrily, as a violet aura can be seen smoking out of his eyes.
[The Creator] "Judas, I understand, and I am sorry. You want me to step down, Why? I have already given you and your siblings everything. All of creation is under your control. You have the power to create planets, stars, Cosmos, and more. I have even given you authority over the Court, and you still are not satisfied?" The Creator asks Judas inquisitively.
[Judas]" ...Yes, I am. When I was little, no one wanted to play with me. Thoth was always in the library reading every book you have written and kept. Ranná was always going out with Samson to the infinite wilderness hunting and killing beasts as she saw fit. If not, she would always be in the inner courts talking to one of your precious universal Mandators learning. Ecclesia and Montero were rarely found at all in the whole Kingdom of Haven! How does that even happen!? Nepha is always meditating in the inner courts. I don't even remember the last time I saw that dude come out at all! As for Pang, and Nema...Pang is always doing mysterious things that I don't even understand in her room, and Nema is either in the garden or Creating new life forms. Those abominable little things she calls Tribrids, and Hybrids." He says as he fiercely clenches his fists.
[The Creator] "How do your siblings feel about this? Do they even know what you are asking for?" The Creator asks calmly?
[Judas] "No...I don't care. I am tired. I will make a better ruler than any of them!" Judas replies, gnashing his teeth.
[The Creator] "Judas, my son, you do know that you are betraying not just me, and your siblings, but the whole Neo-Cosmos? Even if you are gifted with the ability to Devour, and manipulate, you can never go through Nepha, your sister, or The Universal Mandators at all. As for the Universal Mandators, each one of them can wipe you out from existence as the ransom for betrayal. I strongly advise you to think Wisely about what you are about to do. Remember, It is their authority, and rights to command, and behold the power of my judgment! While Nepha and your sister Ecclesia can even wipe you out only based on the fact that you are betraying them."
[Judas] "Hmm...Father, I have thought about this day for years, and now I am 2,000 years old, I am fixed on it. I am sure, and I want you to step down. As for my siblings, leave them to me. Concerning the Universal Mandators, I will make it my first decree to reduce their authority under the heavens, and across the whole Cosmos!" Judas replies stubbornly.
[The Creator] "Sigh...since that is so. Mandator's come before me, and bear witness to my words."
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[Universal Mandators'] "Yes, my lord!" The four of them replied synchronously.
[The Creator] "Thoth, Ranná, Ecclesia, Montero, Nepha, Pang, and Nema. Come, all of you, at once! Come, and bear witness to my decree!" The Creator commanded as he called out to the vast space in the Central room.
[Thoth] In an enormous room, there is a library filled with books neatly arranged in gold, and purple shelves. The rails are pure gold, and the ceilings are filled with the mystery and towering beauty of the starry galaxy. Tiny stars illuminating after another, planets, comets, and shooting stars can be seen from the ceiling above. A middle-aged young man with silver curly hair wearing white garments with a crown on his head decorated with real stars, and suns. He wears a white garment that seems to be filled with a calm, purple aura. Thoth seemed to be deeply invested in huge, towering books. And Suddenly, his ears perched up, "Yes father, I am coming Immediately!" He quickly replied, as he turned into a stream of purple flying out of the library.
[Ranná] Ranná, a graceful, slender, and curvaceous woman wearing enticing black clothing with white diamond and red rose gold jewelry running across her voluptuous chest, and all around her slender waist. As she walks on a red carpet down her throne as demons bow down not daring to stare into her blossom pink eyes. Her garment seems to be black but is indeed white, but rather filled with her black aura. As she walks down the red carpet, she whispers, "I'll be right there, ASAP!"
[Samson] Sitting quietly on the peak of a mountain in the infinite wilderness, a tall figure, just like an ancient behemoth, is shining with grey glory. So sharp, and murderous, no fowl of the air or beast of the fields dared to approach. His aura was so strong, it seemed to cause cracks in the space fabric above. A dreadful primordial grey aura fills the whole mountain with dread and terror. Samson opens his eyes as a fine sharp aura of light bursts from his silver eyes. "Okay, I am on my way" He replies calmly.
[Ecclesia] In a sacred chamber unknown to many, A woman wearing a golden-red garment with a red and gold branch-like crown interwoven together on her head. She was floating in the air as she was encompassed with a pure golden aura so thick that one could stand on it as though they were standing on a floating cloud. The cloud was full of majesty, almost exuding an indescribable feeling. Her eyes were rose gold, and she was said to be as beautiful as the Fairy Empress. Yes closed, she slowly whispered, "I wonder what it maybe this time...I'm on my way! Nepha, stop meditating, dad is calling us! Come NOW!" and vanish as though she was never there in the first place.
[Montero] In a sacred realm, extremely beautiful that it can cause people to be greedy. Palm trees, beautiful mountains, crystal clear deep blue water can be seen in this continent. The air seems to be filled with an indescribable essence. As though, this was the birthplace of all creation. There were no creatures found here, but rather, a vacant city. Roads made of different precious stones and gems. The highways were made of pure diamonds, exquisitely carved out by the Creator Himself. The pave ways were made with all sorts of priceless gems found across the whole Neo-verse. There were even some unknown. Each house was made of pure gold, Diamonds, precious gems, unique rocks that gave off a towering. Floating castles, and cities could be found almost everywhere. Bridges were made of a pure rainbow, and different suns and moons could be seen amongst the astronomical wonders above. This city is known as Malak. The first-ever city and thing created. In a pavilion, a tall and majestic man was sleeping peacefully on a bed. Seeming to have been disturbed, he opens his evergreen eyes. "I will be there in a few minutes," he says, as he gets up from his bed.
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[Nepha] In a pure white hall, a figure shining so bright, his aura dared to blind onlookers. He was meditating on a mat, as pure dark and light essence unified and gave birth to another. Two opposite essences perfectly harmonized but gave off an unbearably dangerous feeling. A feeling as though it could break off and explode at any moment. Killing everything, and leaving nothing behind. He wore a garment that seemed to abode the whole universe within it. Seven stars burning brilliantly, Stars radiating, planets that look hidden and unreal. The universe seemed to have an essence in it, as it could be seen moving to give off a graceful, but domineering feeling. Nepha has black eyes, one so deep, you can't even see through them. Nepha's calm face twitched slightly as he said, "I heard! I'm coming, calm down. Although it's rare for dad to call us together at the same time, I reckon this one is of paramount importance!"
[Zhou Pang] Pang, is an independent woman. Always preferring to move alone. She was on a floating island, the size of 5 medium-sized continents. This realm is called 'Telenom'. Telenom is a realm made up of 10 small planets, 8 medium-sized planets, 4 large planets, and 1 super planet. Each planet revolved around Telo, the super planet. Zhou Pang was in her room, hidden in a secret space somewhere on the roof of the highest tower. She was floating in the air, as a semi-transparent book floated before her as its pages were turned. Pang has enticing summer orange eyes. Her eyes were so warm that some say it could even melt butter and cold hearts. Pang has extremely high telekinesis abilities. In her room, she slowly opened her eyes and said to herself, "Hm..this is odd, dad probably wants to make another trial, or something for us again."
[Nema] Nema, she is the elder goddess of life, She can bring back anything or person from the dead. As the goddess of life, she can even go to the most abominable places in Hades and restore everything, and the person in it. She is gentle and assertive. She wears a pine green garment with a purple and green crown. She exudes a rich pine green aura. She spends most of her time in the everlasting garden, as she loves creating new things in this garden. Just as she was about to take universal essence from the well, she heard her father calling out to her. "What could it be this time? Must be important, so I can't miss it though! I am coming!"
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20 minutes later.
[The Creator] Your brother, my son, Judas has decided to stage a request before me today. I would like to share it with you too. He wants me to step down, so he can rule everything. He decided not to tell you all, but for the sake of peace and my love for all of you, I have put it into consideration...Since this is so, hear my Decree. A trillion years are given for you, Judas, to reign. After that, you will choose to stand down, or you will be brought down. Not by my own hands, but from one of them amongst you. I will leave, but I will be back. When I come back, you would have chosen by then. My throne, I leave to you. You are not me, Judas...There will be no bloodshed amongst my children! I forbid it. Until these days are decreed, no one will spill any blood. I will leave. You will search for me, and you will not find me. You will call me, and I will not answer you. You will pray, and I will not give ear to it. With my throne, you can see everything in creation. You can see every blade of grass across the cosmos, and even the atoms within them. As for your crowns and garments, when you wear them, they will radiate my glory and majesty. You can command anything, and it will be. Before that though, beware, each decree is according to your ability. You can not revoke them, so be careful what you wish for. Only I can, for now, and I will not until these days are fulfilled.
[Thoth] "Even as the Oldest, I would never even have the efficacy to confront dad about it. I mean, Judas, are you stupid or what? I should even slap the hell out of you right now. Do not even forget the fact that our father is THE CREATOR! He does as HE wishes! You are even privileged enough to be chosen out of ALL creation; both great, and small, to be one of the chosen children of THE CREATOR. You need to stop deceiving, and devouring for a minute, and just THINK! You don't even know how to govern yourself, and you want to rule everything? You are smart, but out of all my 7,000 years living, you made the dumbest decision anyone will, and has ever made."
[Ranná] "To even think my own younger brother will have the mind to even say such a thing. Judas, I should kill you right now. You are selfish and ignorant! How can you betray us, and now think of going to father...If not for his decree right now, you would be in the hottest part of Hades burning as I would have sealed off your power. I would have left you there for all eternity! Who says 6,500 years of living is too small? Just you wait and see."Ranná says as fire burns out of her wrath-filled eyes.
[Samson]" Judas, JUDAS, JUDAS! How many times did I call you? How old are you, 2,000? You are still a baby! How dare you think you can come so boldly before our father and make such heinous requests? Don't worry dear brother, I will wait for you. Never in 6,000 years did I ever imagine such a day like today. I can't even imagine it! But you, Just wait and see" Samson says to Judas, as his grey aura thickens in the air.
[Ecclesia]" JUDAS!!! I swear, just wait and see. Once these days are fulfilled, I will personally lock you up in time, and torture you FOREVER! Trust me, I have lived for 5,800 years. I know how to get you"
[Nepha] "Till birth, till now. It has been 5,800 years, and I have never seen such a day. Although, right now, I want nothing more than to see Judas cry, and crawl on the ground as I break all his bones...I will honor father's will, and I will patiently wait until these things are fulfilled!"
[Pang] "Oh...trust me, there is nowhere you can hide from me. Once these days are fulfilled, it would be better for you to kill yourself peacefully than for me to lock you up in a space cap where you would be compressed millenniums on end! I will make you regret this very thought, just you wait and see. By that time, I would deal with you without even looking at you. Don't forget, It is my duty as one of your older sisters to discipline you when you go astray. Today, we have all failed in doing this, but tomorrow...I will make you know how deep my 5,750 years are."
[Nema] "Although, I have nothing to say to you now... watch your back, Judas. You know how the old saying goes, 'With age comes Wisdom' It may not be necessarily true, but I have lived long enough to know how to deal with you! 5,700 years is no joke kiddo."
[The Creator] "It is well, I shall depart today. All my works and some of my wisdom are left on my throne. Once you sit on it, my remnant spirit will give you some advice and will make known some of the hidden things of the Universe to you. I will not interfere with you, all the final decisions belong to you." The Creator stares as he looks intently at Judas.
[The Creator] The Creator looks at everyone present and says, "Look, I make a new thing. I will make for you, does not influence an assistant. He will help you in time of need, and he shall be called Solomon. As for you Judas...To whom much is given, much is expected. We will all meet again shortly." As he finishes his sentence, he disappears into nothingness. The once intoxicatingly thick glory that filled the throne room gradually reduced into nothingness.
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