《Nelvinus》Volume 1 - Chapter 1 : New Beginning Part 2
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New Beginning Part 2
Oh well, she was naked. I should give her the same clothes as Raphael but unlike Raphael dress her lining will be colored red ruby rather than gold bright.
Back to business, she should have the titan-like power to help me in landscaping this planet though. What should give her eh. Maybe for the skill I should give her Terraform and for the passive maybe Land Deity.
For the Terraform ability, it should enable to landscape the Nelvinus land in cost of her mana and the Land Deity help her to control the land, that means she can make an earthquake with her power or a humongous looking monster made from the soil of planet. Oh, before I forget, he Terraform ability also can create thing like tree and aquatic plant to make this planet look nicer.
Before that, I should check her status
Name:
Classes:
Level: 5000
Age: 0 years
Health: 5000000/5000000
Mana: 5000000/5000000
Ah, to be expected. Her status same as Raphael before she has a name. Right now, I should give her a name and the power I ready for her.
“You will be given name Ellyn and your classes will be Titan. As for your skill you will be given Terraform, use this power to help me to shape the planet to make a suitable place for the living lives on and for the passive skill you will be given Land Deity. This passive skill will be enabled in your wrath, but it will affect the land you had created”
“I shall accept the gift you have gifted for me Master”
The throne room inside the palace I made is being shimmered with light. I guess that work then.
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I and Ellyn had finished landscaping the planet, the land consist of 7 mainland which Divine Land is not included. The 6-mainland divided into 2 separate ocean borders at the first half border has 3 mainland and the other half has 2. The other 2 mainland is on the north pole and south pole.
Raphael is currently creating a living being to live in the land.
The living being I ordered her to create is human, elf, orc, and dwarf. This fourth races will be blessed by their own special passive skill. For the human, their passive skills are Pride. The pride enables them to be an excel leader to their own races but detest to being led by other races.
The elf has passive skill called Knowledgeable. This passive skill enables them to be the most excel in the tech of magic in this planet and a great achiever in pursue of a knowledge.
Orc races has passive skill that enable them to be the strongest race. It was called Unbeatable. This passive allows them to gain more strength during a fight, but this will reduce their mana. The bigger the mana a person has the bigger strength it gains.
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Dwarf races is a race that will be unbeatable in their craftmanship skill. Their passive skill called Craftmanship Blood. The tools or anything that they craft will be always successful and excel in quality.
At first Raphael gave me a confuse look why would I give these 4 races their own ability, but I would not rather explain that to her.
Raphael take her time making these 4 races, the human has the normal feature of the human I use to be, the elf has human feature but has pointy ears and more beautiful any other, the orc has a strong body build and has gruesome look, and last but not least the dwarf has muscular build but short in height but has same facial as the human and elves.
I also ordered Raphael make animal based on my memory, most of which based on the game I played in the previous life. To make the world feel like rpg like games I ordered Raphael to create monster which is some is strong, and some is don’t.
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The first continent me and Ellyn is a mountainous region, the second one was mostly covered in plain land but still have dense forest and mountain. The third one covered in dense forest. The fourth same as the third but has some plain land and mountain range as it has bigger size. The fifth has the same properties as the second one. The sixth and seventh both were covered in Ice.
Second and fourth main were the biggest mainland out of seven of them.
Oh, and by the way, the big flaming ball outside called Sirius. The names of this star were taken from my vivid memory about the star name. Same is Sirius, it shines the land with its glowing blue color in the sky.
Raphael has finished making the living being I ordered too. The dwarf races were sent to first continent, the human sent to the second continent and fifth. The orc was sent to the second continent but places far from the human. The elf were places in the fourth and third continent.
Now the living being is finished how about the divine?
“Raphael, now I need you to create Angel”
“Angel you said?” Raphael gave a confuse look.
“What do you mean by that master?” Ellyn also confused by what I mean angel.
“Ah, sorry for that. What I mean create angel is to create human like creature but has 1 tenth of your original power to reside at this Divine Land” I explain to both.
Raphael nodded but Ellyn seem rather still not understand why create creature like angel
“Oh, before I forgot, make them has wing” I told Raphael.
“As you wish master” Raphael answering.
While waited Raphael to finish her job, I sat on the throne I made at my palace.
“Master, I have a question” Ellyn said
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“What it is?”
“What is your name master? Raphael and I both have name how about you master?”
“Well to be honest, I don’t have any name, but you could call me the Creator”
“Creator…... where you get that name from master?”
“Well no one in particular”
“oh”
And then the conversation, welp to be honest it felt quite uncomfortable to have a conversation finish this quickly. Well, I think I will make a magic system in this universe to make it quite simple there will be five basic magic which is fire, water, wind, ice and earth. There will be also special magic which is Divine magic and Dark Magic.
I introduced this system to both of Raphael and Ellyn. Both fast to catch up about these as they both already master these seven-magic things. The races that Raphael has created also quickly adapted to this magic system. The first races that master this magic were the elves. These elves have quite advantage for their passive skill. Later, dwarf and orc adapted to this than the last one to adapt is human. The human seems to be busy making their kingdom.
Time passes and yet I don’t know how many years have passes, the human and the other races seems to be worship Raphael as their creator but yeah it felt quite disappointed not being known to them even, I was the one who created Raphael.
Maybe I could check Raphael status to see how many years have passed
Name: Raphael
Classes: God
Race: Divine Being
Blessing: None
Level: 10000
Age: 1000 years
Health: 10000000/10000000
Mana: 10000000/10000000
Oh well, it has passed a century passed and yet my body hasn’t growth. I guess I will be stuck in this form eh. And I add some tweak on the status window thing.
Later, I could hear the footstep of many rushing towards my palace. It was the angel created by Raphael as I instructed too.
“Master I have created these angel as you order too”
“I see”
There were six angels stood behind Raphael. The first one is Gabriel. Gabriel was Patron of Guardian. He has a passive skill called Guardian. This skill allows him to take any damage from the person he protects directly to him. This skill will not consume mana but it’s a dangerous one as he will take any level of damage directly to him no matter whether he was ready or not.
The second angel is Cupid. Cupid was Patron of Love. He has a passive skilled called Arrow of Love. Arrow of Love enable him to make people fall in love whether they like it or not. Welp, if this kind of angel exist, I would beg my life to him to make my crush fall in love to me.
The third one is Grim, Grim was Patron of Death. Grim passive skilled called Total Death. This skill will make person who’s is being targeted death at once. It was a fearful skill, but It can’t be targeted to Divine Being races. This skill will cost one’s mana.
The fourth one is Shina. Patron of Soul. She has the power to reap any mortal soul but not the Divine Being race. The passive skill called Soul Reap. By reaping one’s soul, it can make someone to leave their own bodies making their bodies lifeless without a soul. The soul which Shina taken can be ravage into the form of mana or being put into another body.
The fifth one is Wisp. She is Patron of Tree. She has a passive skill called Tree Guardian. She can summon tree or summon the treant to protect the tree from overharvesting. She also has a power which enable her can growth tree in huge amount of number instantly
Finally, Lucifer. Welp, I have a bad felling about this. Lucifer is Patron of Order. He can use his voice to force summon to follow his order, only me, Raphael and Ellyn only can resist this. Also, he has passive skill that allow him to revive the death called False Death and Names which allow to name someone and force them become his subordinates. Only Divine being were immune to this passive skill
Unknowingly, Divine Being which include me, Raphael, Ellyn and the angel can give blessing to other races. These blessing will make them stronger but gaining new power.
“Master we both requested your blessing” Raphael and Ellyn knee and requested this.
“Then, I shall bless you”
Suddenly a glimpse of bright light appears covering both of their body. Maybe I should check their status once again
Name: Raphael
Classes: God
Race: Divine Being
Blessing: Creator
Level: 10000
Age: 1000 years
Health: 10000000/10000000
Mana: 10000000/10000000
Name: Ellyn
Classes: Titan
Race: Divine Being
Blessing: Creator
Level: 10000
Age: 1000 years
Health: 10000000/10000000
Mana: 10000000/10000000
So, both get my blessing eh. As I checked the angel status window, they have blessing from the god which is Raphael.
I fly to the top of the sky to see how the world look like from afar.
It looks breathtaking never thought my hard work in making this world is good enough. It has passed a century I guess the human, orc, dwarf and elf already make their kingdom. The most populated kingdom in this planet while I’m flying throughout the planet is the human ones, I don’t know what name it is maybe I should look or not.
Meh, I’m too lazy to do that. I think I should just return to Divine Land and took a long sleep after this. But my body seem doesn’t felt exhausted though maybe because I’m the creator? Oh well whatever I will sleep, nonetheless.
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