《The Waterborne - Blasphemous Series》End of Act 1 Announcement (New Book && Optional Feedback)
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Cheers & Thanks
Some things are meant to be repeated, and I'm grateful for anyone reading, commenting or rating. Thank you.
We've hit over 60 followers, which means we've almost surpassed Blasphemous Vein!
Cheers for staying with me during the first version, getting people's opinions, comments, ratings and even reviews has been really helpful.
Edits & The Future
The edits are going to take two to three weeks. One week for swapping all the documents over to a new editing software and going over the plot for Act 2, and one to two weeks for editing and rewriting. Doing this helps a lot in improving future writing and makes sure any inconsistencies or mistakes are clarified.
The future for The Waterborne is pretty simple.
It's going to be continued, likely along with another series, likely with two updates a week for both novels or three updates a week from one while the other only has one update a week.
A hint for the new series is that it will have a small-sized non-human protagonist with a... fiery personality.
Feedback
Feedback is fun and best done if you're feeling generous or want to help a novel be better.
In the comment section, feel free to do one of these sections, none of these sections, or just post a comment with your personal feedback.
What's awesome?
What's boring?
What's confusing?
What didn't you believe?
What are you excited to learn more about in the story?
These basic prompts are pretty easy to fill out, but if you can't think of anything, feel free to leave it out!
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