《The immortal that ran away from home》Chapter 9 - Late blooming constitution
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If you like chapters with a lot of dialog this is for you :3
Maybe I´ll writte an other chapter today but I don´t promise anything
“An immortal?” Jamie still didn´t understand
“Sorry… I thought too highly of myself; I can´t turned you into and immortal but your vitality, strength and life force will be much better than mortals and if you´re talent and hardworking you might become and immortal and take care of me in the future” she said with hidden envy
“I… I still not understand”
“Ancient daoism believes that with the right training and hard work a human can become an immortal and kill gods and devils. My father and mother are a kind of low level immortals and I´m almost an immortal myself” as she spoke her skin became like a white and soft jade, she grew a little taller, her eyes turned blue, her hair turned longer, straight and dark, her chest and ass grew bigger and her delicate waist was now visible.
“Can I really turned into something like you?” Jamie asked taking a deep breath
“I don´t know… Like I said with the right combination of talent, hard work and of course luck you can become an immortal; an existence even stronger and mightier than me but I have friends that even with their high status and all the efforts of the seniors of their clans aren´t able to reach a 1000th of my power” Tong Bo Yue said seriously
“I… I don´t think I can do this… I don´t dare to waste the time of a goodness like you” he said as he seemed to have made a decision “Wouldn´t it be better to find your friend? It doesn´t matter how much we look alike… I´m not him and he is the person you really want to help”
“If he wanted help, he would have had it long ago; But there are people that after a bad event aren´t able to recover no matter how much people around them want to help…” Tong Bo Yue answered with a bitter smile
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“If you want to I can help you to begin your walk against the heavens and if my friend someday accepts my help I will give him a hand too”
“What would I have to do?” Jamie asked with mixed emotions
“The beginning is usually a simple set of exercises to make your body stronger after you´ve master it I´ll add a meditation technic that will allow you to gather the energy from heaven and earth and after that well… There are many options but that will depend of your body constitution”
“How do you know a person´s body constitution?” after thinking for a while Jamie spoke again
Tong Bo Yue took out a rock and said “This is a measure rock that can steal the energy you gather from heaven and earth. It is a low level one so we´ll have to wait until you finish transforming your body and start to gather the energy from heaven and earth to know”
“What if my constitution is really bad?” Jamie finally asked the question that had been worrying him the most
“The first levels in the path to immortality are pretty simple. With my help you can be sure that no matter your constitution I will make you breakthrough body transformation and qi gathering realms sooner or later. When you are a foundation establishment cultivator you will be able to fly into the sky and will have more power that you can´t imagine. That itself most be amazing to any mortal but the best part is that you will be able to live for 5 hundred years” Tong Bo Yue explained
Jamie was taken aback and couldn´t help but ask “how old are you?”
“I´m actually not much older than you but I won´t give you my age nor my real name. Even if I am someone from the same generation as you; you better don´t look down on me because even members of my father´s generation are not my match”
Tong Bo Yue didn´t want to talk about herself and Jamie understood that point so the atmosphere turned awkward until Jamie´s expression grew solemn
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“I want to become an immortal”
Tong Bo Yue made a series of movements for Jamie to see and fallow. It took 5 hrs for Jamie to understand which made Tong Bo Yue pretty pleased
“I know that it hurts but you are doing it pretty fine. It won´t take long before it doesn´t hurt anymore then we´ll be able to safely say that you stepped into Qi gathering realm and we´ll know your body constitution” Tong Bo Yue said with a warm smile
“Ok…” Jamie answered finding difficult to breath
Jiang palace, Vermillion birth island
“Jiang Qinqin what are you doing here… I told you and your sisters that I wanted to peacefully cultivate?” Jiang Chen asked with a frown
“Get out of the lava pool. I want to talk properly” Jiang Qinqin said while taking a deep breath
“If you have anything important to say start talking and stop losing both of our times” Jiang Chen was able to see a headache coming so he wanted to end this talk as soon as possible
“Are you going to act as if nothing happened? I love you Jiang Chen but you already made me lose one of my childhood friends and I was really looking forward to see Tong Bo Yue again” Jiang Qinqin said with a tearful face
“Her father only has one wife and he loves her dearly; She has always been scared of me and doesn´t want to marry me… I understand it. She has her pride and wants her man to be just for her and I respect that. If she wanted I would give you face and go to the end of the world to marry her but she doesn´t and I’m pretty sure you don´t want Tong Bo Yue and I to go through that we don´t want”
“But your royal father would be able to find her in the blink of an eye and if he says he doesn´t want you to marry her nobody would dare to object” Jiang Qinqin evidently wasn´t going to give up easily
“My royal father loves me but even he has to give a little face to the black turtle island. We have inside fights between the 4 islands but we are united against other planets so… Tong Bo Yue becoming an immortal is something that everyone wants” Jiang Chen smile bitterly
Jiang Qinqin was about to leave with a sad face when she suddenly remembered the other thing she wanted Jiang Chen to help her
“Can you listened to me this time?” Jiang Qinqin asked with a hopeful face
Jiang Chen seeing Jiang Qinqin sad face couldn´t help but feel somewhat guilty so he signaled her to continue
“I know that you didn´t like to see Fatty Xiao trying to kiss me but he was drunk. I know immortal cultivators can´t get drunk but Fatty Xiao was a mortal. He had the late blooming constitution and you know that kind of people can´t start cultivating until they are 15
Jiang Chen mouth opened in a perfect “o” shape and he immediately became dumfounded
3 weeks after Fatty Xiao stared cultivating he didn´t feel pain anymore and he was so excited that he couldn´t wait and went straight to Tong Bo Yue´s apartment
“You said it could take more than 2 years but I had a breakthrough in less than a month” Jamie was really pleased with himself
“I had my own breakthrough in 2 weeks” Tong Bo Yue raised her head proudly and took out the measure rock and gave it to Jamie
After a while the rock began to shine without a particular color and a couple of symbols appeared at the top of it
“How is it?” asked Jamie with worry visible in his eyes
“You have the late blooming constitution” Tong Bo Yue said with excitement
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