《The immortal that ran away from home》Chapter 23 - Rapid water steps
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Detective Kennedy felt like she was going mad. Even her friends at the police didn´t believe her and the worst part of it is that she couldn´t give them any proof and even she herself has began to doubt if what she saw was real. She begged them, asked for favors and did everything she could but she was still ignored “Bastards, the best clue about this guy is in my hands” she snored thinking “I would like to see how you solve this case without the invitation” She laughted coldly and decided to take a shower but what she didn´t expected was that has soon as she toke out her clothes someone broke into her room “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!” She screamed and ran directly to where her weapon was but before she could get there Jaime was already by her side shutting her up with his hand “I´m sorry I didn´t mean this” Jaime was really embarrassed it was his first time seeing a naked girl and now that he was so close to her, feeling her soft and tender naked body... Jaime shook his head and tried hard to think straight “I want my invitation card” his face turned serious “Give it to me and i´ll go immediately” The lady in front of him was just too sexy and her body was perfect to the point of feeling unreal but he didn´t want more problems with his parents so he forced himself to focus and asked what he needed to ask He waited a couple of minutes and only when he saw that she was calm enough decided to move his hand from her lips “Fucking pervert I won´t give you anything” She said with a face as red as an apple and a voice full of indignation and hate That face of hers was really charming, Jaime got mesmerized for a moment and said “You´re beautiful” then he shook his head once more “I really don´t want to hurt you and i know the invitation is here so you only have to options” He toke a deep breath and continued “Fist, you give me the invitation and we can put and end to this award situation. You can also ignore my advise but I´ll be forced to cover you with a blanket, take you out of the house and search my self which is my second option” Seeing that she was still unwilling he said “Even if you call your friends the most you can do is to short my time of search or delay it because before they arrive I would have long escaped and you will still lose a lot of face” She grit her teeth, went to her dresser and toke out the invitation “Take it and go before I got mad” She said while pointing him with her gun Jaime was pretty satisfied, took a last look at the beauty and with the invitation card in his hand ran away as fast as he could When he left the house the fist thing he saw was Tong Bo Yue laughing at him in midair “That was to much” he said with anger She didn´t listen a continued to laught for a couple of minutes and finally said “Ok... ok I have made fun of you too much for a day” then she took Jaime away and said with a smile “Don´t put such a face, come on, be a good a boy, give your master a smile and she´ll teach you and agility technic” “Really?” Jaime´s eyes began to shine brightly Once they arrived at her apartment she said with a serious expression “The Yin laws doesn´t have the attack power of the Yang laws but the reason they are equally dreadful is because of their flexibility” If I want to attack or block and attack the heaven and earth ´s energy around me will turn as hard as ice and if I want to fun away from an enemy or dodge his/her attack my body and my energy will turn as soft as water” Then she began to move and her body little by little turned transparent and soft, her speed was as fast as lighting but her movements were like water “So this are the rapid water steps” Jaime couldn´t hide his amazement... He thought that once he started cultivating he would understand his master more and wouldn´t be too easily surprised but she was getting more and more unfathomable in his eyes” Seeing Jaime´s face Tong Bo Yue laughed “This is nothing” then she took out a jade strip and her face turn cold “Practice it. I won´t forgive you if you make me lose face in a mediocre competition against the cultivators in the mortal world” “Yes master” Jaime nodded his head
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Jaime´s talent was good and it didn´t take long before he could gain initial success in his agility technic; Meanwhile Ice heart´s name only got more famous and the criminals began to fear him... Of course most of them still didn´t believe the rumors but almost everyone took precautions. The sad thing is that Tong Bo Yue spiritual sense could still “see them” and “hear them” no matter where they hide which made the criminals feel hopelessness
Jaime´s parents finally apologize to him. Even if the didn´t like violence they still were able to understand that there are time where one most fight and Jaime´s behavior has always been good so they didn´t have the heart to punish him for too long
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